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Dialogue of nothing is not a dialogue. Good dialogue is good but this is not. There is nothing. Why did he make this update? Too much pressure to produce? Many thought it was abandoned. Well with updates like this it might well have been. Dick insertion is not required but a good story is. This was a terrible siding and can we get back to the main line.
there was plenty of character development in this chapter. They all came closer to an understanding of being okay with a sexualized relationship. This story is a slow burn, and its doing it well. I happen to be one of those people that skips lots of dialogue, but I read plenty just before and after choices and it was all good. Maybe you are just needy and entitled? edit: I also mean that without malice. Like I genuinely found the dialogue to be good and in line with previous chapters. Maybe you just aren't appreciative since it isn't the 'way you want it' hence my response.
 

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Dialogue of nothing is not a dialogue. Good dialogue is good but this is not. There is nothing. Why did he make this update? Too much pressure to produce? Many thought it was abandoned. Well with updates like this it might well have been. Dick insertion is not required but a good story is. This was a terrible siding and can we get back to the main line.
1. You said you skipped most dialouge anyway so how would you know?
2. There is alot of good dialouge you missed because see point 1.
3. There are 3 scenes in total so the non existing argument of "there is nothing" is factually wrong. Maybe not to your liking but there are scenes.
4. Obviously he made the update to continue the story. But if you don't read said story it is kinda pointless for you to play.
5. No one thought that this game is abandoned. Be it here in this thread, patreon or on discord. If you visit this thread or forum only once a year thats on you.
6. This game has one of the best stories written on this site. And as a prof. writer myself i can proof that by amounts you would not even understand. I dare you to start a debate with me on that where i wreck you into a million pieces.
7. This was the main line. Which you entirely missed because see point 1.

I have nothing against constructive critique but bashing the dev is not only a no go. You literally didn't bring up any issue other than using to much words for simply stating "I do not like it"

If you want to write constructive critique go ahead and do so. If not and you don't like this game or it's story there are enough fap games on this website were you can bang some generic looking blondes in 2 minutes or less.
 

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Since the "nothing happened" comment guys don't really go into detail, I'll give my 2 cents in hopes it can be useful :) I think what disappointed some people is that a side trip and especially in a story-driven game sets the expectation there WILL be content. I.e. that the main story will progress through the main setting/location, while side stuff will mostly yield scenes. I felt the same way while playing somewhat, as in I wasn't necessarily disappointed with the update, but rather I expected different once it started.

Hope I'm being clear and this is a bit more helpful than "nothing happened" ambiguity :)
 

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Been looking forward to this update, this is the first game I really enjoyed after I found this site shortly after the last update. Made me give games with 3D models a chance.
 
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Dialogue of nothing is not a dialogue. Good dialogue is good but this is not. There is nothing. Why did he make this update? Too much pressure to produce? Many thought it was abandoned. Well with updates like this it might well have been. Dick insertion is not required but a good story is. This was a terrible siding and can we get back to the main line.
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You were clearly playing a different game :LOL:
 

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Since the "nothing happened" comment guys don't really go into detail, I'll give my 2 cents in hopes it can be useful :) I think what disappointed some people is that a side trip, especially to a romantic location and especially in a story-driven game sets the expectation there WILL be content. I.e. that the main story will progress through the main setting/location, while side stuff will mostly yield scenes. I felt the same way while playing somewhat, as in I wasn't necessarily disappointed with the update, but rather I expected different once it started.

Hope I'm being clear and this is a bit more helpful than "nothing happened" ambiguity :)

Now that is what i call constructive critique. May i ask what would have made the update better for you?
Becaus ei also would have liked if the update was longer and would have ended on maybe a bit more about the intimacy. But it makes sense story wise to take it slow considering that all 3 suffer from a loss and have to finish that chapter first to move on.
 

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Enjoyable as always, NR. Looking forward to something finally happening, hopefully next update...

At this point there are no side girls to schtup, time for the main course to begin...(I hope)
 

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Coolness, hopefully they can update the link on the front page too. ;) But thank you for your work here.
 
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This is the first time I've played a new chapter of this game and holy shit there is so much new stuff. I hate when devs take months to make "new content" and it only ends up being like 30mins of new stuff. This is like a few hours of story added.

naughtyroad this is a great game you've made yourself (y)
 

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Now that is what i call constructive critique. May i ask what would have made the update better for you?
Becaus ei also would have liked if the update was longer and would have ended on maybe a bit more about the intimacy. But it makes sense story wise to take it slow considering that all 3 suffer from a loss and have to finish that chapter first to move on.
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You know what I'd honestly like for this game? I'll probably get lynched for this, but longer time between updates and bigger updates. When you have a slow setup, you can really appreciate it when its in bigger chunks. That said, there's certain limitations with the current model of patreon/support, so that's not really an option and it kinda makes games like this a bit less appreciated.
 

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You know what I'd honestly like for this game? I'll probably get lynched for this, but longer time between updates and bigger updates. When you have a slow setup, you can really appreciate it when its in bigger chunks. That said, there's certain limitations with the current model of patreon/support, so that's not really an option and it kinda makes games like this a bit less appreciated.
I see what you mean. I have to agree that bigger chunks of an update are much appreciated. But also with Patreon and the support system longer updates or better said longer time between updates would be pretty much overkill in terms of income. I sincerely hope that this update brings alot of patreons and enough money for naughty so he can at least hire some help. Not only because we would get updates faster but also because naughty could make money from this game instead of having a daytime job interfering with our masterpiece of a game here ^^
 
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