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No, please, let the ladies have a "well-kept garden". 
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Gobbo fugging aside, I like how your game has slow (but not stopped) corruption of willing and eager grils. That whole ointment scenario is plenty believable, and the reluctant but interested Eldest Ward is pretty well written.
I'm no porno savant, but this is good. Too bad it takes time to write and update, otherwise I'd play it again now.
Gobbo queeens
I'm no porno savant, but this is good. Too bad it takes time to write and update, otherwise I'd play it again now.
Gobbo queeens
- Sep 28, 2018
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I think the girls in this game are already pretty corrupt, but not in an overtly obvious way. Denise is the one pushing it with MC, it was her idea for him to masturbate his manly bits (while she massaged him) and make an adult game, she also sat on his boner while making that game. Now, she is doing that stuff to try to bring the family back together and I wonder if she actually wants them to be "together" together. Macy seemingly has had a crush on him for a while and more than likely wants to bang him, she was jealous of the mom and her anger is her trying to distance herself from MC, who she believes she can't have or she isn't good enough for. They both sleep topless together and have done some lesbian stuff together (which the tag needs to be updated for).
have you considered doing what Braindrop and Runey have done and splitting each chapter into parts for tier 3/4 pledgers who are willing to pay for early access to each chapter? not only will it increase the amount of attention this game get but may also increase the amount of pledges you have as well. i understand you wanna keep the dramatic impact they have but i feel there is enough of that between each of the day pauses to have a dramatic enough effect that you wanna keep going for each chapter
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That'd be pretty hard, really. As I'm writing the scenes, it's not uncommon to revisit an earlier day to adjust it a bit so the dialog or choices offered better fit the day I'm working on, and if that day is already released, it's crystallized into canon and I couldn't do that anymore.
Also, the distribution of time spent in different areas of the game is pretty uneven. The two days in the weekends their alternative settings and events take me at least the same amount as the 5 working days in a week, because during the weekdays assets are recycled a lot more. Work on the weekdays itself is mostly the lewds as they're complicated scenes again, with new environments and multiple camera angles and oh so many different, complicated poses. So this chopping wouldn't result in a steady release cadence of roughly equal parts.
Bottom line though: for me the primary goal is to make something that is the best I can make it (for what that's worth). Whenever the choice comes up for increased patrons/support vs better quality, I'm going for quality, and trust that in the end that's what the people who choose to support LomL really prefer.
- May 14, 2019
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Just played it for the first time
Was a nice and entertaining 4 1/2 hours
Had me cracking up with some situations, always love some humor in a VN.
Absolutely love the models btw...I do not get the people disliking the models???
(Probably because they do not have DDDD cupsize boobs)
Seeing as I enjoyed this so much became a patreon
- Aug 8, 2017
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If it gets more steamy between the two I will add the "Lesbian" tag.
Right now I do not consider what there doing as a "Lesbian" act but more of a teaching act.
I look at Denise sucking on Macy breast as a security blanket type action.
- Mar 7, 2018
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It's refreshing to hear this. Would that there were more like you.
I think this has more actual lesbian content than some games with the lesbian tag. The sisters check each other out when naked, they get physical with one another one on one with no man around, meanwhile as some people complain "some games with the lesbian tag just has two girls lightly holding hands while both giving a blowjob"
I came here for smut. I got sucked into a story about a troubled family and actually teared up a few times? What is happening? Kudos. This is some great, effective writing in here. It's hot, yes, but I also actually care about Denise and Macy as characters, which doesn't often happen in these kinds of games.
- Oct 1, 2017
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I don't know how I spent so much time without knowing about this game, I discovered it at christmas and was completely in love since then
- Feb 21, 2018
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Ever since playing the last part I can't help but be shaken at the core. This game unlike most the characters feel awfully realistic so having an ending like the one at the end of the last chapter update make me more uncomfortable than I thought even though its been over a week since. So much so, I had a dream almost nightmare tier about it. I was all with Denise about getting closer, but unlike most games due to how its written I felt like boundaries were needed to be made. But the final actions of Denise and Macy at the end of the last chapter, something felt off, not right and unsettling. I think its because the characters feel like actual people and not the typical caricatures found in similar games, which is why even so I am incredibly intrigued what it means going forward.
I chose this game because of the design of the ladies. It's different. Beautiful. So real. Have we not all fallen in love with a girl who didn't have, what society deems as perfect?
But now you're making me care so much too. Damn you man. This is pretty well written. I haven't seen any action yet and I'm emotionally attached!
But now you're making me care so much too. Damn you man. This is pretty well written. I haven't seen any action yet and I'm emotionally attached!
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I felt that particularly about Brooke's tits. They are perfectly imperfect.
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You can set the relationship to what you want it to be.
There is also a fan patch that sets it for you when the time comes for incest.