- Feb 12, 2019
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I gotta agree with some here the lesbianism is a little strong this chapter and definitely not to my taste considering I was flacid the entire chapter. Even the Handjob was not that sexy for me. I like handjobs over oral sex for forplay to give some context. I Probably didn't like it because the main character was unconscious. It would of been sexier for me if he had woken up. That would of changed the story though, and possibly caused their relationships to accelerate to either get closer or further apart, so I guess I am conflicted about the main character waking up at that moment. I felt myself wishing the lesbian sex scenes would end to get back to the father and daughters bonding moments even the ones without any kind of sex which left me feeling "Meh" with this chapter. Past that though it had good character development. You can definitely see and feel those three bonding closer together it's well written in that regard. I look forward to the next chapter to see where it leads.