This isn't my first rodeo playing these games, I've played Being A Dix, Dark Neighborhood, A Mothers Love, Date My Daughter, The Tyrant, Milfy City, Last Call, Halfway House, so on and so on....so me judging this game isn't out of hate or spot light on this chat, my criticism is out of love for his/her work so it doesn't become a faded memory like other game's that I've grown to love over the years.
Right, so I've got the following written down:(...) my criticism is out of love for his/her work so it doesn't become a faded memory like other game's that I've grown to love over the years.
The dialog isn't the problem, its the fact that it drags on were the scenes feel empty and pointless, if you want to build up to something worth a damn, then present these moments between each of the girls in a separate fashion were the MC doesn't feel like a third wheel, take each of them on a romantic separate date or put them in random path of lust filled moments with the MC, if the story just drags on with the girls argue like a old married couple that goes on and on in every CH and only asking the MC his option on every damn thing, then he might as well be there therapist then a love interest, just some food for thought.
Don't blame the genre (unless it's Futa), blame those opportunist shitty dev who exploit the popularity M/S & B/S genre. There's also many shitty F/D & S/S genre, which abandoned due to poor attraction.
Never change, you glorious bastard
Disagree. The F is obviously conflicted by the pull of two opposing forces: Growing attraction to his beautiful Ds and being unable to help himself responding to their increasing advances as well as terribly missing their M, who he sees in them. Opposing force: the need to protect them, to be as good a caretaker as he can, his fear that in any way taking advantage of the situation would push them away. These girls are all he has. How could he just caually throw that away by falling prey to his needs/lust? I think it is perfectly balanced - the desire and the fear - the rewards and the consequences of falling for the temptation. It's masterfully done. If you feel like you can't relate to the MC anymore it's because you can't understand his struggle and because you expect fantasy whereas Naughty is creating something akin to heightend reality.
I don't blame anyone or anything (sorry for my english), I'm just tired of all harem games and I wanted to give the dev a cheer for doing something different, whats wrong with that?
I understand that realism is a core factor in the story, but 2 girls related to each other who are going at it with each other with no sign of regret or remorse while thirsty for the MC but not taking any leap for that to happen and then playing innocent with the feelings of the MC comes off as nonsense and wasted effort, the MC could lead in this effort but it takes the NPC's to move forward as well and that's were it falls on it's face, because there's no sign of progression in the story or any real feeling of relationship growth.
Excellent analysis - LoML is a story of how this family deals with loss and forbidden desire, and Naughty is doing a superb job of immersing us into their healing. F is struggling with many competing emotions and overt seduction of the girls isn't in his makeup.
You seem to think you would write a much better story, so why don't you just go do that and spare us...
The girls are only related to each other if you want them to be at the beginning. Otherwise they are just two different girls who were adopted by the MC. If you can't see any progression for the two in the story so far then you're one of the few. The rest of us see plenty of progression from the two wards, especially considering the huge weight Macy has gotten of her conscious and Denise allowing Sir to progressively go from applying ointment for her rash while covered in a towel to giving her half-nude massages while she insists he masturbate for his health. Get with it.
While I hate to be that writer that has to explain his story for the benefit of the reader, I'm gonna take a leap here and assume you skipped quite a bit on that part, given your earlier comments.
in the words of Heath Ledgers Joker "if your good at something never do it for free"
