Okay, I stand by my original assessment- not classic beauties, but in their own sweet, charming, and endearing way- more than beauties. This is an excellent and promising start. It's an interesting dynamic to have the girls with such polar opposite personalities. (Considering I changed their names, I cannot remember the default ones.)
The younger one is so delicate, damaged, uncertain, and you really don't want to do anything that could upset her- like it would devastate you IRL if you were to make her sad. The older one is the exact same way, but until you get through her defenses you won't know for sure, but she's definitely holding back her emotions. I hate to say it, but I predict even from this first release- this is going to get you in the feels, like really deep down. This is going to be an actual story with "naughty" bits thrown into it and not the other way around as with most games. You may have to break out the tissues, but it won't be because you need a "spanker-chief". It's not often, but I may try and keep the girls away from the pervert MC...oh wait, that's me- hmmmm, I may need to think on this. Lol This is written in such a deep, meaningful, and emotional way that it seems like this is "based off of true events" or the Dev has had something traumatic happen to them. Some of this is just so insightful and accurate.
This truly is an outstanding effort- especially if it's a first attempt.
I have to say that I believe the girls are Indian/Hindi?/Hindu? (unsure of the distinction). I don't think they're Hispanic- they don't have tattooed eyebrows. Lol I don't think they're Middle Eastern- they aren't covered from head to toe. Lol I don't believe they're Jewish- they have no money (not even the pouch of gold around their neck). Lol (Someone will, hopefully, get this one.) AND the most compelling piece of evidence to support my claim- the dad works in a call center with a sign that uses every font available. Lol Tbth, though, it really matters little to me what their ethnicity is- I'm drawn to them and the story regardless. They could be demons, aliens, heads of lettuce, amoeba- it wouldn't make a difference. They are beautiful and need help just getting through their pain and life in general.
As much I like the prologue/intro- I'm not sure if it was necessary. Just getting thrown into the deep end with your young'uns bickering over a granola bar in the kitchen was a good enough starting point, imo. I'm just as curious as I am anxious (not as much as the younger one) to see where this story is heading and cannot wait for the next update.
