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PyoT

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Yeah, once again a great chapter. I was mildly worried the story might lose a bit what with the main relationship being fulfillled, but naw, full steam ahead still.

Some cliff notes:
- the misunderstood innuendo is fun as always (especially the talk about Brooke's picture) but I wish some of the sex scenes where a bit more seriously/erotic focused without constant humor
- achievements I found distracting; ability to turn off the notification would be appreciated
- story feels very linear as usual. And I get it; there's a ton of it already (way more than I expected). But there's definitely moments where I'd have liked some input -
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. I was actually surprised when you could tell Denise
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. That borderline felt like the most agency Dad had with the sisters for the entire chapter, and now that they are "married" and it's not "just" misunderstandings leading to various situations that feels a bit unfortunate.
- same with the same old "yes fuck off about swearing choices". I'm not sure how many of those I clicked by now - feels more like a running gag than anything of any relevance by now. I do like those bits where you get to pick how Dad expresses himself; maybe you joke around, maybe you don't, maybe you stay silent, maybe you don't. I'm not saying it's not worthwhile just because there's no big branch every time. But when it gets too repetitive and leads to nothing discernible it does just feel like a chore.
- Denise's outfit while roof-cleaning is amazing (also, the new additions to the cast are amazing* too) ...
- ... not sure what to make of the animal talk stuff. And someone, err, Irish being in the game. Obviously there was always some of that but feels more explicit out in the open in this chapter instead of "deniable" dream sequences and such (I'm sure you can have arguments about that; just my impression).
- *except for the guy, who just feels a bit too over-the-top. Oh well.

Either way. Great stuff, absolutely one of my favorites on here. Looking forward to what's next :)
 
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I played this years ago and I remember one of the ladies at the office having some hot fantasizing about her son while being with MC. Is that something that continues, or was it a one off type of thing?
 

LWtbo

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Loved Season 1 couldn't wait fo Macy to get what she wanted she was my favorite Sister.
But I Just started Season 2 and sofar I can't stand the Girl.
Just got to the part where Brooke calls for help with her presentation.
And it should be a fun scene however Macy's entitled selfish bitch attitude ruined it for me.
And the MC who I thought was more responsible and supposedly sensible allows it to happen.
Because apparently professionalism means nothing aslong as he's getting his cock sucked.
No offnce to anyone that likes her but she's bottem of the list my most least favorite girl now.
I still love this game but honestly I'm tempted to go back to season 1 and block Macy's path now.
Just sayin.
 
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axittim

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If it's not difficult, please give me a list of relationships at the beginning of the game = dad, mom, sister, daughter. Guessing the author is another quest. Or the save of the second season.
 

Count Morado

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If it's not difficult, please give me a list of relationships at the beginning of the game = dad, mom, sister, daughter. Guessing the author is another quest. Or the save of the second season.
Just play it with your own choices. Also, read the op about sharing saves.
Hey naughtyroad, guess what I'm doing today. I promise I won't turn on my creative writing instructor mode ;)
Okay. Realized I hadn't touched Chapter 7 since it was called v0.7.0. So did a "speed run" of v1.0.1 (well, a speed walk). Downloaded S2 v0.8.1 -- went in and set afm_characters = 1200 so that my auto play is at a decent reading speed (250 is default, my old videos were at 450 - or average reading speed). About to start Chapter 8.
 
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axittim

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Just play it with your own choices. Also, read the op about sharing saves.


I don't want to play guessing games. I don't have time for that. That's why I'm asking players for a list of “relationships” . The author doesn't share it and I don't hate typing in names I don't know anything about.
 

knolle1220

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Bro kinda cool game but if you give us options to chose, then you should let that happen... best example for that: you want to object that the daugther work with you and say its not a good idea, but it doesn't matter because your daughter has already decided for you... and that shit goes on and on in so many answers/ choices or was allready before the work sittuation. its starting to get annoying. its like you as a father has nothing to say anymore or allmost nothing just to keep the peace.
 

Count Morado

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It's like literally common sense, as jackdanniels's screenshot showed you. It was like asking "what color should I say the green grass is?" It's like you asked the question before even bothering to look at the options. Also, not everyone plays it the way you are inferring. Hell, I just play with the defaults. Gotta love Rudolph this holiday season.
Bro kinda cool game but if you give us options to chose, then you should let that happen... best example for that: you want to object that the daugther work with you and say its not a good idea, but it doesn't matter because your daughter has already decided for you... and that shit goes on and on in so many answers/ choices or was allready before the work sittuation. its starting to get annoying. its like you as a father has nothing to say anymore or allmost nothing just to keep the peace.
I think you skipped the "meaningful choice" dialogue about halfway or so into the first day (when the MC and the wards are in the bedroom debating about what is or is not to happen next).
 
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naughtyroad

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Either way. Great stuff, absolutely one of my favorites on here. Looking forward to what's next :)
Thank you for a well presented and argued critique. I will use that to my benefit!

I do the same I wonder if there is a way of changing the words of penis and pussy? etc
Go into preferences -> change names, the various body parts show up there too.

Bro kinda cool game but if you give us options to chose, then you should let that happen... best example for that: you want to object that the daugther work with you and say its not a good idea, but it doesn't matter because your daughter has already decided for you... and that shit goes on and on in so many answers/ choices or was allready before the work sittuation. its starting to get annoying. its like you as a father has nothing to say anymore or allmost nothing just to keep the peace.
Yeah, that's a great example. Let's present people a harmless-looking choice there that they'll assume they can safely pick, and then have a bunch of content that they miss without telegraphing it. Not to mention throw away what is clearly the setup for a bunch of plot involving all other characters in the next chapter, so we now have to create a second plot just to accommodate it.

I don't mean this as a put down, but you do understand the word "novel" is part of Visual Novel? It's not sim-any-situation.

My time is finite and I simply cannot create alternative plotlines and assets for every story beat, because by now I'd be in 2^n permutations for every time I would have had to account for some triviality. So it's not that I don't want to, it's that there is an actual exponential cost in effort every time you get an alternative plotline in.
 
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PhoenixRage23

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Wow. Surprised to see an update. I wasn't sure if this game was going to be abandoned or not since it's been quite a while since the last update. Haven't played it for probably over a year now. Hopefully there will be somewhat regular updates, but I don't honestly know how often they come out since I don't really follow the game anymore. Good luck and all that to the dev.
 
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