Well, reading this was quite an adventure.
This is in dire need of a proofread. All my favorites are here: missing periods, missing or misplaced commas, missing apostrophes (havent), writing two words as one (infront), writing one word as two (near by), not capitalizing the beginning of a sentence, not capitalizing "I", abbreviating "okay" with "ok" (which just looks incredibly bad in a sentence), using the wrong there/their/they're and your/you're.
Plus, some of the writing just sounds unnatural. When "suddenly", something completely expected happens, it's not really sudden, is it? And sometimes, it's like two different writing styles show up in the same sentence. For example:
"As soon as Cindy brings me over them stock and shares books, we can commence..."
Here, the MC uses "them" to replace "those", which he does all the time, and which is quite informal. Yet in the same sentence, he uses the comparatively grandiose word "commence" rather than "begin", "start", or (probably the most natural) "get started".
Whiplash moments like this are not super common, but there are a few of them.
There's also a small inconsistency. On day 3, when visiting the convenience store, the MC acts like he's been there before even if he hasn't, both when getting there and later when talking to Steve, mentioning he met Josie.
Overall, I think this is worth reading, albeit headache-inducing in its current state. I'll keep my eye on it.
I suppose I can give one more piece of criticism. The phone seems to take up a lot of room considering its apparent uselessness. I quite enjoyed having a small button in the corner of the screen on day 1, but having that massive thing taking up most of the right edge of the screen seems a bit unnecessary. I will admit, this probably annoyed me more than most other people, because I have a habit of parking my cursor at the right edge of the screen so I don't see it, and as it is now, I always have to out of my way to pull it down from there in order to keep playing after Alt-Tabbing back into the game.
My point is, maybe you could make the phone smaller, maybe reduce it to a button? Just a suggestion.