Avaron1974
Resident Lesbian
- Aug 22, 2018
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The main fuck up here was trying to slow burn a game with a main character that only had a few months left to live.
Nobody with that kind of time limit is taking anything slow.
The concept was interesting, the characters were great, the story was working but it needed a far higher sense of urgency.
The only thing i'm unsure of is a story with a dying character is going to be emotional in places and I don't know if the devs quite have that range of writing.
Also the NTR thing. I don't dislike NTR but I don't see how it works here. As said earlier, she hasn't got long to live so she's not starting any relationships. That would leave it to secondary characters and I don't think that would quite scratch the NTR fans itch.
A story about a dying MC would work and could be great but it's going to need a faster pace than most stories and need to hit the feels at the right times.
I don't think these devs could pull off a sexually charged emotional story about a cancer victim with a few months left to live.
I would have loved for them to prove me wrong but sadly this wasn't to be.
Nobody with that kind of time limit is taking anything slow.
The concept was interesting, the characters were great, the story was working but it needed a far higher sense of urgency.
The only thing i'm unsure of is a story with a dying character is going to be emotional in places and I don't know if the devs quite have that range of writing.
Also the NTR thing. I don't dislike NTR but I don't see how it works here. As said earlier, she hasn't got long to live so she's not starting any relationships. That would leave it to secondary characters and I don't think that would quite scratch the NTR fans itch.
A story about a dying MC would work and could be great but it's going to need a faster pace than most stories and need to hit the feels at the right times.
I don't think these devs could pull off a sexually charged emotional story about a cancer victim with a few months left to live.
I would have loved for them to prove me wrong but sadly this wasn't to be.