- Aug 12, 2022
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Lisa is wonderful as a model and as a wife. Yesterday I have finished this latest version I would like to allow myself to make some small constructive suggestions to make the story more consistent and a little more "educational."
Lisa decides she wants to marry the MC with a big baby bump...and we are around day 43 she doesn't look pregnant yet but if I were her....
I would advise Lisa, as she is starting to have a growing number of boyfriends and potential fathers,
1) to think about doing some medical checkups on the genetic compatibility of her partners as well... (this is also educative)
2) not always those who produce sperm fluid in large quantities have an active spermatozoas concentration capable of impregnating a woman.
and on the contrary in those who ejaculate smaller quantities of fluids it could have a higher concentration.
By the way, it looks like Lisa is over 30 years of age and her body is perfect.
But after the age of 30, the ability to get pregnant decreases a bit
if I were dev I would start creating recurring gynecological appointments. this can lead in some new male black doctor that can beinvolved in the challenge
... obviously the story is very comedic and comical but a dash of realism would be too:
3) pregnancy lasts an average of 8/9 months and begins to be visible around month 3/4 with the swelling of the abdomen.
4) we are talking... 4 months = 120 days
For her to have a baby bump suitable for her marriage intentions it takes at least 6/7 months so at least 240 days of story is needed before this wedding with a baby bump like as you see in the cover photo.
What I mean is that even if she gets pregnant tomorrow it will take quite a bit of updating.
I really enjoyed the approach the author is giving to this story and even the cuckolded husband is not so much to blame because I learned that to have a relationship with a woman you have to take care of the woman you love...and if she loves to have sex there are not many options...either you divorce and look for a different woman or if you love Lisa with her beautiful body and optimistic smile you can't do anything but be happy when she is happy
Anyway I will wait at least until day 80 or more before writing my definitive review....
Good luck and my best wishes to the developer
Lisa decides she wants to marry the MC with a big baby bump...and we are around day 43 she doesn't look pregnant yet but if I were her....
I would advise Lisa, as she is starting to have a growing number of boyfriends and potential fathers,
1) to think about doing some medical checkups on the genetic compatibility of her partners as well... (this is also educative)
2) not always those who produce sperm fluid in large quantities have an active spermatozoas concentration capable of impregnating a woman.
and on the contrary in those who ejaculate smaller quantities of fluids it could have a higher concentration.
By the way, it looks like Lisa is over 30 years of age and her body is perfect.
But after the age of 30, the ability to get pregnant decreases a bit
if I were dev I would start creating recurring gynecological appointments. this can lead in some new male black doctor that can beinvolved in the challenge
... obviously the story is very comedic and comical but a dash of realism would be too:
3) pregnancy lasts an average of 8/9 months and begins to be visible around month 3/4 with the swelling of the abdomen.
4) we are talking... 4 months = 120 days
For her to have a baby bump suitable for her marriage intentions it takes at least 6/7 months so at least 240 days of story is needed before this wedding with a baby bump like as you see in the cover photo.
What I mean is that even if she gets pregnant tomorrow it will take quite a bit of updating.
I really enjoyed the approach the author is giving to this story and even the cuckolded husband is not so much to blame because I learned that to have a relationship with a woman you have to take care of the woman you love...and if she loves to have sex there are not many options...either you divorce and look for a different woman or if you love Lisa with her beautiful body and optimistic smile you can't do anything but be happy when she is happy
Anyway I will wait at least until day 80 or more before writing my definitive review....
Good luck and my best wishes to the developer