most if an all sexual content will be avoidable, as for the future tags, I'll be posting them soon with the next update.the future tags, Harem?
There will be avoidable or what can be omitted forced content?
most if an all sexual content will be avoidable, as for the future tags, I'll be posting them soon with the next update.the future tags, Harem?
There will be avoidable or what can be omitted forced content?
Oh thank you, I've found a few more issues that I'll be fixing in the next update. hope you've enjoyed everything so far!!!I say. Wow. I´m curios how the story will go on.
And nice pictures. beautiful...
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Bug report if you like...
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Thank you!!! Really appreciated.Rendering is amazing. keep it up.
Glad you liked it! hope you stay around for the next updates!!!Ummm, WTF was up with that ending?!
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Yeah, you certainly have my attention now to find out what is going on here. Did enjoy it though, thank you!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!WHAT IN THE FUCK. u got me confused and wrecked in less then 10 minutes... Nyx better not be dead? i was actually getting into it and next thing i know its over and shes dead? Cant wait for the next update. Props to you on this game. 10 out of 10 in everything. story was great as well as the graphics.
Hope you enjoy!!Oookay, some people seem very, very enthusiastic about this game!
Please don't mind me as I check it out later...
Thank you for the feedback!!I won't leave a review yet as I feel there's definitely room for growth and improvement, and I'm just an anonymous nobody so take my opinion with a grain of salt if you will...
My criticisms so far:
- Short, even for an introductory chapter, which would be fine if everything didn't feel so rushed. There's a lot happening, too much in fact, but things seem to jump from one point to another so fast.
- It feels like there are too many "shocking events" all being crammed into one small chapter...
- There are some typos, lack of punctuation, some dialogue isn't very easy / smooth to read. I think you could possibly get an editor to help you with this or go back and reread / proofread some things. The writing feels a bit off, personally.
What I like:
+ Most of the model renders are good, or at least all of the women models are.
+ Though there's too much going on too fast to have any emotional pull, I like how bold it feels to have at least many different kinds of emotions in play. I feel it would be better off spreading the events out more and fleshing out the entire chapter a bit.
Just my two cents. Either way, thank you very much for the story, there's a lot of potential here. I did enjoy it, but I found myself mostly just saying WTF in my head more than anything else.
I respect everyone out there trying to put their vision or stories out into the world. Looking forward to what's to come, good luck!
i would honestly wait until the 2nd update unless u dont mind stopping in abit of a cliffhanger. However its really fkn good so if u are bored id play it ASAPHmm... Thinking about when I should play this... Anyone have their own opinion on when I should start playing?
this is exactly how i felt. I felt shocked and a bit speechless at the end because i really came in with low expectations tbh since this had such little comments and reviews but it blew it out of the water.WOW WOW WOW, MY GOD. Not only are the renders extremely good, and you can see the improvement in the renders from start to finish, but the story so farrr, it left many many unanswered questions but i can see that it's heading to be one of the best VNs. Already different than most games I've played, love it! And props to the dev(s), AMAZING WORK!!
I def feel like if this was released as a prologue this would of helped out in alot. I treated version 0.1 as a prologue therefore it did not feel short for me. I see this game having tons of potential it just needs a bit of ironing things out. Only thing i disagree with you is the emotionall pull, while yes the game moves a bit fast with a bunch of different stories happening at the same time, the main focus of the MC and the other girl ended up getting me emotionally invested in them at the end.I won't leave a review yet as I feel there's definitely room for growth and improvement, and I'm just an anonymous nobody so take my opinion with a grain of salt if you will...
My criticisms so far:
- Short, even for an introductory chapter, which would be fine if everything didn't feel so rushed. There's a lot happening, too much in fact, but things seem to jump from one point to another so fast.
- It feels like there are too many "shocking events" all being crammed into one small chapter...
- There are some typos, lack of punctuation, some dialogue isn't very easy / smooth to read. I think you could possibly get an editor to help you with this or go back and reread / proofread some things. The writing feels a bit off, personally.
What I like:
+ Most of the model renders are good, or at least all of the women models are.
+ Though there's too much going on too fast to have any emotional pull, I like how bold it feels to have at least many different kinds of emotions in play. I feel it would be better off spreading the events out more and fleshing out the entire chapter a bit.
Just my two cents. Either way, thank you very much for the story, there's a lot of potential here. I did enjoy it, but I found myself mostly just saying WTF in my head more than anything else.
I respect everyone out there trying to put their vision or stories out into the world. Looking forward to what's to come, good luck!