Ren'Py Live with MILF [v0.5c] [Net-Work]

[xXwankerXx]

I've been thinking for two years that everything will be fine, my friend, after a six-month update, going into the minus for $ 100 is not a good story.

I'm sorry to hear that, but everything's only your fault. Who told you it was a good idea to add that bullshit sandbox and make ppl curse at you for wasting your time on something most of them don't even wanna bother with ?? All fingers point at you. For your information, most players will avoid your game as soon as they see the sandbox tag, and others will only give it a go for the models but read the comments first to avoid unpleasant surprises and only then think about supporting it or not.

Tell you what, completely remove EVERYTHING related to sandbox and never use it again, unless you want to release a 5star game like BaDIK, write a decent story, yours is crap... sorry for the harsh words, but that's the truth, hire a translator, preferably a native english speaker (ask for help, some smart bois here on F95 will help you for free) or just collaborate with a good writer, if Saint Blackmoor is still available to help you with the translation, add more intense passionate sex scenes, build up (ffs, the mom in this game went from caring mom to cougar in heat obsessed with her son, or Linda from Milky City, faster than a Bugatti) stop making the lil sister a lesbian thinking that's hot, coz it's debatable... I don't mind it, but some players do, and they come with the money, so you listen to the majority. The most important thing is to listen to feedback coz many ppl give you good suggestions on what's good or bad, but ofc, it's up to you to select the important stuff.

I wish you all the best, and lil harsh critique aside, I really liked this game, especially the female characters (the mom), but everything else was subpar... you could've done better. If you don't learn from your mistakes, you'll never become better at this and get the support you need to keep developing porn games.

 

[Net-Work]

I'm sorry to hear that, but everything's only your fault. Who told you it was a good idea to add that bullshit sandbox and make ppl curse at you for wasting your time on something most of them don't even wanna bother with ?? All fingers point at you. For your information, most players will avoid your game as soon as they see the sandbox tag, and others will only give it a go for the models but read the comments first to avoid unpleasant surprises and only then think about supporting it or not.

Tell you what, completely remove EVERYTHING related to sandbox and never use it again, unless you want to release a 5star game like BaDIK, write a decent story, yours is crap... sorry for the harsh words, but that's the truth, hire a translator, preferably a native english speaker (ask for help, some smart bois here on F95 will help you for free) or just collaborate with a good writer if Saint Blackmoor is still available to help you with the translation, add more intense passionate sex scenes, build up (ffs, the mom in this game went from caring mom to cougar in heat obsessed with her son, or Linda from Milky City, faster than a Bugatti) stop making the lil sister a lesbian thinking that's hot, coz it's debatable... I don't mind it, but some players do, and they come with the money, so you listen to the majority. The most important thing is to listen to feedback coz many ppl give you good suggestions on what's good or bad, but ofc, it's up to you to select the important stuff.

I wish you all the best, and lil harsh critique aside, I really liked this game, especially the female characters (the mom), but everything else was subpar... you could've done better. If you don't learn from your mistakes, you'll never become better at this and get the support you need to keep developing porn games.

I have not used a translator for a long time, I have already had a second person translate dialogues. I agree with everything else and only a new project will fix it.

In any case, I will think about my decision again...

Besides, where did I blame someone other than myself?

 

[AMUR48]

I have not used a translator for a long time, I have already had a second person translate dialogues. I agree with everything else and only a new project will fix it.

In any case, I will think about my decision again...

Besides, where did I blame someone other than myself?

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look at how they will do it on Unreal Engine and users are happy that it is moving. what one of the comments says, not everyone thinks so, it’s me who doesn’t like it for a long time you have to wait for updates, you just forget the game, but I don’t understand the plot in English, you probably know it earlier on another site communicated because of this, I can’t say about history

 

[mcclem5257]

I for one was enjoying this VN & will most certainly not even pay attention to ANYTHING on Unreal Engine.

 

[bartimay]

I have not used a translator for a long time, I have already had a second person translate dialogues. I agree with everything else and only a new project will fix it.

In any case, I will think about my decision again...

Besides, where did I blame someone other than myself?

I wouldn't agree with most of those critiques.
The sandbox is a problem only because it had no "sandbox" content in it. No repeatable scenes, events, changeable clothing, nothing to do except play the story with extra steps. In my experience sandbox games are usually hated because the sandbox is annoying to navigate, this game didn't have that problem, just lack of reason for a sandbox.
The renders are 10/10
Top tier women (except the twins maybe) and I loved that you made the environment (background) look good.
The UI is very good looking too and not some default black box.
The story might not be the best, but that doesn't mean it can't be improved without scrapping eveything.
You could have a wimpy MC at the start and have his incest loving mother decide to teach him confidence by slowly seducing and teaching him in a sexual way (Suggestive touches, kisses, groping, revealing clothes, suggestive texts with images, etc). Then write him growing a backbone, maybe take matters into his own hands, and lead the relationship, them having sex then they can push boundaries by exploring kinks like anal, different positions, public sex, roleplay, etc.
At some point the sister could find out and the mc being confident could make it into a small harem or something and do similar things to the mother.
I would personally add in pregnancy, but that is just because I like it.

 

[nathan_nate]

how to skip this scene doors no open ? ? ?

 

[Net-Work]

Yes, the plot should have been given more attention.

I had plans for the sandbox, and it shouldn't have been so empty.

But since there was no idea how to do it all, everything dissolved and turned into something that does not require a sandbox mode.

In any case, I'm already writing the structure of a new game on the Unreal Engine, simultaneously setting the prologue scenes, and so far I'm happy with both the graphics (which by the way I won't need to render) and the capabilities of the engine.

There are many reasons why I took this step.

The new project will leave all the pros and close the cons of the old one.

I've been working on the idea for six months and I'm still working, the only obvious disadvantage is that I have to model a lot

When will I show/tell something? I don't know, I don't want to show a framework that will cause incorrect expectations.

I can only say so far that the plot is divided into 4 acts, each subsequent one is getting bigger, the gameplay begins with a simple plot narrative and ends with large-scale events affecting the entire planet

By the way, it is on the background in the main menu...

 

[Punto]

I don´t like ureal engine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Punto]

Please move to another server: gofile or workupload!!

 

[millyvanilly84]

If any dev would have taken these ideas posted by a couple of people in the posts above, they would have a solid game in their hands.
Dev, you can do whatever you want, as this game is already considered abandoned, thankfully you didn't blue ball us with the gorgeous mom, but I will give you my reasons why I will never bother with an Unreal game.

• I have a powerful pc, 95% of the F95 people and consequently patrons, do not have one
• Unreal needs a lot of optimization and runs like shit with multiple bugs
• Lighting, positioning (considering you will probably end up with a 3rd person GTA style clone) does not exist
• Animations are junky as fuck and are FAR from sexy, considering this is a porn game
• Serving dialogue and exposition is difficult as it is a 3d world
• The downloads are always huge and uncompressable
• Mods and Walkthroughs don't apply, instantly missing the Hot\Trending page as the modders don't bother
• Unreal games are a dime a dozen, usually carry the cashgrab stain or are abandoned almost immediately within 6 months of initial release
• Good Unreal games such as Kalyska (or others, cant remember a good one lol), still suffer from content and animations, they are just a junkfest
• The visual are a thousand times worse that what you made with that gorgeous mom
• Updates usually take a lot to produce especially when coding alone

I could probably go on, but I think I made my point. I wish you success and I hope you prove me wrong, but I will never know, as Unreal engine is on my ignored tags. Good luck and I hope you reconsider and you give us a good game with this one.

P.S. I would love to see mom getting seduced while in office with her sexy business attire and high heels, the incredible different hair styles you gave her, repeatable events of unexpected bjs on the couch, in the kitchen, before work etc, maybe a shower scene or two. People are all telling you got a good thing going and you dump it for some unreal bs. lol

 

[DJsona]

Net-Work hey dev ! thx for your great work ! your game is on my top 20 list <3 But ..... :
- im a non-native english (french) player.
- i have an old PC who run assassin's creed origin, odissey, doom eternal ect... perfectly !
- i hate non renpy games (unity and unreal engine game) because my CG fan went crazy !
My problem is all of porn game unity or unreal are unoptimized and unplayable.
My wish : keep up the good work, your render are amazing and make the mother french kiss the daughter !!! <3 haha ,)

 

[TheimmortalP]

I have two requests

1. This game has puzzles, please tell me that there's a walkthrough somewhere.

2. Can someone please post some screenshots with dialogue so I can get a feel for what the dialogue is like for this game?

 

[CamelRed]

Is this game 'dead', why there is no tag?

 

[TAGELD]

Just started the game, does the dev ever figure out how commas work?

 

[Net-Work]

Next project name: N.A.E.S.

The plot is ready, as well as the script of the first act.

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[AmBush-UK]

Oh well, More space free on Drive.

 

[gear10]

View attachment 2813283 Oh well, More space free on Drive.

I understand you it's complicated to download these new games they are getting heavier I'm running out of space

 

[snow123789456]

I really enjoyed the game, hopefully the developer continue the game.

 

[Sober-man]

I really enjoyed the game, hopefully the developer continue the game.

No, he won't. He himself has officially confirmed on Discord that he will not be continuing. He's making another game right now.
But considering he already abandoned one game, a pretty awesome one, I think this new game will be abandoned as well. He is not a responsible developer. And doesn't deserve attention, here today, gone tomorrow, just like many others.

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[snow123789456]

No, he won't. He himself has officially confirmed on Discord that he will not be continuing. He's making another game right now.
But considering he already abandoned one game, a pretty awesome one, I think this new game will be abandoned as well. He is not a responsible developer. And doesn't deserve attention, here today, gone tomorrow, just like many others.

Maybe, he could have put the game on hold for any future updates.