VN Ren'Py Abandoned Living in a Bunker [v1.0] [Gonzo]

[Cmann]

This game should really have the "Incest" tag. (..) but nope, he's going to try to have sex with his adopted daughters. It's shocking and repulsive, especially when you don't expect it.

Incest implies consanguinity within 4 degrees, both in law and linguistics. It doesn't matter how many porn movies call sex between adoptive siblings for incest.
People have already suggest more descriptive terms for it though, ie. grooming/abuse.

 

[MrLakes1579]

Also I've gone so damn far off topic now I HAVE to play it to give it a proper review.

 

[Deleted member 805449]

Typos, missing words and lack of punctuation. Needs proofreading BADLY.

 

[mace771]

also maybe work on the lighting a little i know it meant to be dark ish but yeah

 

[MrLakes1579]

Renders look good, sadly the story kind of fell into all of the traps I was worried it would. Switches on a dime from treating these girls like actual daughters to "Fuck yeah I need to get inside those bitches."

A little bit of angst about it from the main character and a little bit of one of the girls initiating things would go even further. I'm only suggesting changes this big because it's so early in.

Makes the mc seem like a jerk and doesn't even actually scratch the incest itch it's trying to.

But the renders all look beautiful. Lighting is great, shot composition is great. Models look really sexy.

 

[EZ8lt]

It is truly the end of the world, when the only game you can find is DmD.

Btw, after the bombs hit, it's pointless to go into a shelter, you'll die from the radiation at the point already.

 

[John999]

Cloverfield Male POV

Got the idea from the movie XD

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Now WTF.
The game's a brain child of a dev of an adult game. The real world outside's just imaginary anyway.
After 12 long years of wanking to old copies of "Big'ns" MC has an orgasmic jizz-fest like never before when
his game fantasy becomes reality. DMD in the Bunker. A dozen years of bonding in isolation makes a closeknit
family unit = incest! ( of sorts ).

Give me more please!

 

[ILCjr]

Boooo, this doesn't even give a good introduction to the characters, and the renders are run of the mill.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

This game should really have the "Incest" tag. Because it didn't, I was hoping that John was going to die or something in the intro, but nope, he's going to try to have sex with his adopted daughters. It's shocking and repulsive, especially when you don't expect it.

Adopted daughters? He saved two girls from armageddon and it seems there are no other survivors... what did you think was gonna happen? Personally I blame it all on the phone and the 'Dating my Daughter' app. oh why oh why couldn't it have been Candy Crush?

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

So Sweet Home Alabama meets Fallout?

 

[satanete]

Premise seems ok, models are very nice (I love brunettes, although being two girls, one of them blonde or redhead would be nice too for variety), demo is too short, and things happen too fast (well, nothing happened yet, but seing them almost nude in less than two minutes only helps to increase lack of interest), sexual anticipation & scalation is the key in this games imo, too much too early and you lose interest.

Scenarios... well... the bunker really is too small, no need for a 100m2 bunker, but at least having some blankets to separate the girls' area would make sense.

About the plot and things to come, well... of course everyody can tell, but it's your game, I'm sure you have a plot in mind, so let's see how it evolvs.

 

[satanete]

Found a little buggish stuff
-karen's clothes changes at introduction
-girls suddenly grew few ages while watching tv

not really important but second one is kinda bugging me

The girls growing while watching tv is a kind of time lapse, to show they spent 12 years there.

 

[seden]

Another developer not using the correct version numbering.
TBS, premise uncommon so it's on the developer side.

 

[PaxNeo]

Maybe i am Oldschool but a 1.0 Version is more than 5 Minutes of clicking - at least for me.
Some Dialoges are marked with the MCs Name but one of the Girls is talking.
The Story that after 12 Years an adult Game turns the caring Fatherfigure into a horny 12-Year old is kind of Meh.
I dont know... The first Impression isnt that great and if the Story will be flat like the younger Girl in the beginning than it is a no for me.
But good luck and maybe get assistance with the writing of the Story to improve the Motivation of the MC and the Story itself.

 

[SDaddy666]

Is this a sandbox/free roam game by any chance ?

 

[Ｉｓａｂｅｌｌａ]

The end of the world has arrived, so what no problem two girls are still alive. Lets Reproduce and make a new world.

 

[Vrijgeest]

Is this a sandbox/free roam game by any chance ?

Hope not. We have enough of that rubbish.

 

[SvenVlad]

I give 6 months until Patreon makes you change to Apocalypse Roommates

 

[MrGreedy]

This render is so cool

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