VN Ren'Py Abandoned Living in a Bunker [v1.0] [Gonzo]

[Mikey Mike]

The dev has some errors to work through, like the conversation from the older girl at times showing the MC's name. I can't imagine any canned food being edible after 12 years, esp. with radiation present. Surely, the MC explained "the birds and the bees" to the girls, esp. following their menstruation? I like the premise the game but to be a good game the story and details require supporting work including research into survival, prepping, first aid, growing & gathering food, radiation detection & decontamination, etc... The game SHELTER addresses some of this, but takes place soon after a nuclear apocalypse.

 

[TundraLupus]

i think it would be better if things developed more naturally and less with the whole creepy "I'll do whatever to try and fuck them" for 2 reason, one, he thinks of them as daughters, so it should take some time for him to accept thinking of them as something more, and it is just creepy/rapey.

 

[Rasler321]

v1.0...
Is it real? Is it really a full launch version of a game?

Or is one of those v00.0001/2fallout76returnofthelastjedi reloaded omega alpha 00.1 deluxe alreadyabandoned edition?

Because if its the latest, Im not interested.

 

[HereThereBeMonsters]

Anyone got a walkthrough?









*scampers away*

 

[mandra]

nice v1.0 XD

 

[Silver]

Ah, yes, these protests will surely lead to the nuclear holocaust.

Alternative theory: This kind of game/story has been done before, and is a proven way to force a bunch of people to do incest stuff by locking them all in a small room. SHELTER, Last Hope, and an infinite number of erotic stories have shown this.

Back on topic, anyone else frustrated with developers not respecting a proper versioning convention? 1.0 shouldn't be "buggy first test release", 1.0 should be "full product release" in any kind of software. Minor gripe but it's a valid complaint.

You never know. Who thought we would have a pandemic.

 

[maliceinblunderland]

Looks like a lazy grift to me.

 

[WiderWays]

I don't like when a character starts to talk to me. I mean, hey, you are a fictional character, you have no consciousness and this game is the reality for you. Stop breaking this fourth wall.

This demo is really short. That 1.0 can mislead people here. The storytelling needs some work.

Despite all of that, your game has potential. Good luck.

 

[tigerdiamond]

v1.0...
Is it real? Is it really a full launch version of a game?

Or is one of those v00.0001/2fallout76returnofthelastjedi reloaded omega alpha 00.1 deluxe alreadyabandoned edition?

Because if its the latest, Im not interested.

you can tell which it is because it does not have the COMPLETE tag

 

[macadam]

seriously ... wtf...

this game make no sens..

and then, you promote another game, soo that's an excuse to bring the classic creepy-bastard-mc -think-about-fucking-the-girls because of that over popular game you promote ?

all the rest is dumb, i m serious... story make no sens, reactions make no sens, lots of things make no sens...

game look like a simple excuse to promote another game that is popular and then turn into the classic creepy bastard mc spying and think nothing but fuck the girls.

yeah.. good luck.. but still... what the actual fuck.

 

[galora]

That is not incest. There has to be the possibility of procreation.

Well that statement has to be up to debate, I'm pretty sure laws regarding incestuous relationships haven't been updated to reflect same-sex relationships in most countries (not that it's necessary) and tough often sexual penetration is part of the definition sometimes cohabitation is enough to be regarded as illegal... And it's not like women can't procreate without help from some hunk.
I'm mean is it enough to get me turned on? Idk but it is incest!

The basic idea for the story seems pretty solid, but I wish there wasn't a random 12 year timejump, that kinda ruins the story. The interesting thing would be how the girls slowly got closer to their "dad". No way in hell you are telling me they got through their puberty in a fucking bunker without anything interesting happening.

Its also pretty unrealistic that this fucking asshat is the only survivor there. I guess nobody was retarded enough to fill a bunker with a Hazmat Suit and a Assault Rifle in case of a Nuclear-War...

Overall the MC seems like a huge retard.

Have to agree here! Girls in puberty (that are 18 of course ) are basically the whole point of incest, in my mind ... nothing against MILFs.

 

[macadam]

The dev has some errors to work through, like the conversation from the older girl at times showing the MC's name. I can't imagine any canned food being edible after 12 years, esp. with radiation present. Surely, the MC explained "the birds and the bees" to the girls, esp. following their menstruation? I like the premise the game but to be a good game the story and details require supporting work including research into survival, prepping, first aid, growing & gathering food, radiation detection & decontamination, etc... The game SHELTER addresses some of this, but takes place soon after a nuclear apocalypse.

it just doesnt make sens that any of the girls just cry and ask to see their parents.
every kids would probably start a crisis just to ask to see their parents... its impossible for suchsmall girls to just forget about them like this and lay down on the unknown men legs to watch tv.
just impossible !

dude pop out a biohazard suit.. how many american owner of a bunker have that inside of it ? i bet almost zero.

why is playing another game will make the dude want to fuck the girls ? that's no sense and just an excuse to promote another popular game the dev love probably.

basically it turn into creepy mc standard game, similar to the one the dev promote .

 

[LongSilver]

Android pls.

 

[Dipsode]

It's always the same: wanting realism or fun and fap?
Both at the same time, is rather rare!
So, without looking for the diamond, here it's rather fun and fap, I guess and, for the moment, it looks pretty promising ...
For me, there are some mistakes in the dialogue and some clumsiness; but for a first draft, there is much worse!
Keep up the good mouve, dev !
If I could do a review, I'd put about 3 /5

 

[Mikey Mike]

It's always the same: wanting realism or fun and fap?
Both at the same time, is rather rare!
So, without looking for the diamond, here it's rather fun and fap, I guess and, for the moment, it looks pretty promising ...
For me, there are some mistakes in the dialogue and some clumsiness; but for a first draft, there is much worse!
Keep up the good mouve, dev !

I bet if some really dedicated dev brought together both realism and fapalicious, then the fame and fortune would quickly follow. Some of the best games on this site seem to be a collaborative effort with each member bringing their best (art, coding, story, proofreading, etc...) to the table. Games aren't fun if you practically have to make yourself to play them!

 

[Vrijgeest]

Well that statement has to be up to debate, I'm pretty sure laws regarding incestuous relationships haven't been updated to reflect same-sex relationships in most countries (not that it's necessary) and tough often sexual penetration is part of the definition sometimes cohabitation is enough to be regarded as illegal... And it's not like women can't procreate without help from some hunk.
I'm mean is it enough to get me turned on? Idk but it is incest!


Have to agree here! Girls in puberty (that are 18 of course ) are basically the whole point of incest, in my mind ... nothing against MILFs.

You obviously have no clue about RL. 18 years is not standard anywhere in the world only here in this weird forum. in Japan there is no age of consent which is why it is such a mess. Once again weird things are happening.

 

[jjabrams123]

hmmm looks like it could be a good playthrough

 

[galora]

You obviously have no clue about RL. 18 years is not standard anywhere in the world only here in this weird forum. in Japan there is no age of consent which is why it is such a mess. Once again weird things are happening.

Wow first of, I meant here, I thought it would be clear to anyone anywhere that girls in puberty are basically by definition minors ie child pornography. Thanks for the RL comment I really pride myself in not knowing anything. Very very rarely girls will come out of puberty after 18, usually it happens before that so again it might be fun for you to ask for but it is child pornography and not allowed on this "weird" forum.
Age of consent in Japan is 13. Nothing more to say about that.
I didn't even mention age of consent...
Great job taking a joke, in poor taste clearly.
I'd love it if people didn't start by saying you have no clue before spewing nonsense

EDIT : 18 is the norm for more than 1.5 billion people (countries in Africa, parts of the US, all of India and other countries in South-East Asia) ... Wikipedia is amazing... I even forgot to mention that age of consent depends not only on age, but on the age of both partners... So in most cases, as the one in this game a guy that is an adult can't legally have sex with a minor (even above age of consent) in just about 140 countries, in Japan generally aswell

RL is a bitch I know that much.... Wow even wikipedia didn't untilt me... that's rare

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[joe316]

Incest patch incoming?

 

[PeopleSupport]

So is this really 1.0 or more like 0.1?