Comics Living Next Door To Alice [2021-07-16] [Fireblade185]

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A fantasy world... Set into the future, about 200 years from now... A future filled with threats, intrigue... and love. A love so powerfull that could change the future of mankind... But.. it can't because it's forbidden...

Updated: 2021-07-17
Developer/Publisher: Fireblade185
Censorship: No
Language: English
Resolution: 960x450
Pages: 46
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Fireblade185

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Who the fuck is Alice
Oh, I don't know why she's leaving
Or where she's gonna go
I guess she's got her reasons
But I just don't want to know
'Cause for 24 years
I've been living next door to Alice
:sneaky:... Well, everyone, if the song got at least one view on YouTube thanks to my comic, then, got to say I'm happy . And, yeah, Razhok, the "who the fuck is Alice" version of the song (as described on Wiki) inspired me for some of the core interactions between the two.

Anyway, If it got at least some interest, I'll push my luck and tell you about MY Alice...
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She's young... beautiful... always on the brink of every human emotion, as her mother describes her... and not knowing that her innocence, her love... her impossible, heartbraking love may be the key for saving humanity... Playing God has consequences... And HE, who soflty touches her chin... is one of those consequences... Messing with evolution might create something that we can't control... But the bigger problem comes when the enemy you have to face is one step upper on the food chain... Ruthless, laser sharp efficient... and, most of all, unpredictable... Just like human emotions... How do you face him? How do you overcome him, if you can't evolve? Or... maybe you can...

That's the world my little Alice is living in... The world you've only experienced roughly 15 minutes... Maybe less... So... there is alot to come in the future...

Anyway, I would like to hear your opinion on the comic... Feedback keeps me going, be it good or bad :)

Thanks!
 
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What do you all use to read PDF without going insane from crappy scroll?
If you are reading it on the full width with Acrobat reader (and getting more upfront with the renders, as I actually intended when I wrote it) , I'd suggest scrolling from the sidebar. I don't know why it does that, so in the future releases, I'll add the png version as well.
 
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omg... this was the most boring incest of all time.... wow....
Well, it's not for everyone's taste... :) It's more story driven actions than fast paced dick jumping. If you read the note in the prologue, you could get the idea that things would not go along as they usually do in the genre. Sex scenes are a consequence of a little more complex actions, emotions and events, thus not happening just for the sake of rendering explicit content and thus, sometimes... boring... If one does not fancy story over quick faps, then, yeah... I may not be the author they are looking for ;)

Thanks for the feedback :)

As I have said before, it always helps to know people's opinions. Heck.. That's why I'm publishing :ROFLMAO:
 

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Well, it's not for everyone's taste... :) It's more story-driven actions than fast-paced dick jumping. If you read the note in the prologue, you could get the idea that things would not go along as they usually do in the genre. Sex scenes are a consequence of a little more complex actions, emotions, and events, thus not happening just for the sake of rendering explicit content and thus, sometimes... boring... If one does not fancy story over quick faps, then, yeah... I may not be the author they are looking for ;)

Thanks for the feedback :)

As I have said before, it always helps to know people's opinions. Heck. That's why I'm publishing :ROFLMAO:
That's ok, I don't want to piss you off, but... you know... no beginning, no introduction, no highlight... I don't criticize the quality of pages. that's all ok, the text is ok, pdf format... ehm... yea why not. Girl fully nice, boy fully nice.

Con: Story... looooots of lacks.... create emotion with no base of introducing is like smoking Crack in the middle of a police station ---> hard to believe
 
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That's ok, I don't want to piss you off, but... you know... no beginning, no introduction, no highlight... I don't criticize the quality of pages. that's all ok, the text is ok, pdf format... ehm... yea why not. Girl fully nice, boy fully nice.

Con: Story... looooots of lacks.... create emotion with no base of introducing is like smoking Crack in the middle of a police station ---> hard to believe

Don't worry, you're not pissing anyone . The idea is that I don't want to lay down the whole context from the beginning. What you've read so far is not meant to create emotions, but more likely to make the reader wonder and, also, establish the basics of who the characters are. It's the first part of the first chapter so that's why it has lacks. It's meant to be... Like I've, said the sex scenes are consequences of more complex stuff.. That stuff is yet to come ...
 
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So... for people not... ahem... familiar with my patreon page... here's some news...


Pin-ups from Chapter one - Part Two

So... as of now, nobody seems to get an idea of what is really going on... Well... we will continue that trend, because... reasons!
No, I'm joking... We will continue that trend because that's the way I like to write comics... And, hope that's the way you like to read them too... You know, story unfolding itself piece by piece... with each page, you start to understand more and more and so on... That kind of storytelling... Anyway, back to the matter at hand...
So, Jake and Alice are beeing watched, and, somehow, Jake knows that... And he's pissed! Because he made a mistake. And that mistake also hurt Alice badly. Badly enough that she ran to her room, KNOWING that she is the one to blame...
Jake will not follow her immediatly because... Well... I'm not going to spoil anything... Just wait and see...
But when he finally arrives in her room... THIS happens!

So, any lucky guesses regarding the events that lead to the final image? And... maybe regarding the outcome?

Anyone ;)

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As always... feedback is much appreciated!

Thanks!

Fireblade185
 
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How far is the next release? Has covid-19 disturbed the release? Nothing on the Patreon page for a month.
When will it be "Coming Soon"???
Hope everything is okay as not heard from you since May.
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Is the Pdf a short story or like additional chapter in comic/pdf form?
omg... this was the most boring incest of all time.... wow....
Oh, I don't know why she's leaving
Or where she's gonna go
I guess she's got her reasons
But I just don't want to know
'Cause for 24 years
I've been living next door to Alice
What do you all use to read PDF without going insane from crappy scroll?

I'll be short, because you can find all the info ... Awaiting feedback, as usual... Thanks!
 

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Who the fuck is Alice
i use acrobate reader and use arrow keys (left and right)
That's ok, I don't want to piss you off, but... you know... no beginning, no introduction, no highlight... I don't criticize the quality of pages. that's all ok, the text is ok, pdf format... ehm... yea why not. Girl fully nice, boy fully nice.

Con: Story... looooots of lacks.... create emotion with no base of introducing is like smoking Crack in the middle of a police station ---> hard to believe
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All the Young Girls Love Alice.

Something I HAD to talk about... because it has been ravishing my head for a long time... And the events during the last days just filled the glass enough to make me break on an outrage.... It's available ... I don't know for how long.... But... Take it will it's still warm...
 

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Look here, the problem is precisely what it is ... the fact that the money lenders who keep these sites afloat,
well .. have ta pay taxes .. to actual law abiding state officials ... who are supposed to uphold the rule:
NO MONEY TOWARDS DEVIANT INSTIGATING RHETHORRIC.

There are still child molesting FATHERS AND UNCLES AND MOTHERS OUT THERE DOING INCEST THE BAD WAY!

Would you be O.K. that these rapists read your comic in the morning and rape their daughters in the dead of night ?
 

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Look here, the problem is precisely what it is ... the fact that the money lenders who keep these sites afloat,
well .. have ta pay taxes .. to actual law abiding state officials ... who are supposed to uphold the rule:
NO MONEY TOWARDS DEVIANT INSTIGATING RHETHORRIC.

There are still child molesting FATHERS AND UNCLES AND MOTHERS OUT THERE DOING INCEST THE BAD WAY!

Would you be O.K. that these rapists read your comic in the morning and rape their daughters in the dead of night ?
Well... What you are saying is the same thing as with shooter games and real life violence... Yes, some people can't make the difference between a monitor screen and a school window when they have a gun in they hand...

So, let's brake down what I've said, because, in a way, you're confirming everything... First off, I've stated that 99% of incest porn, available online for EVERYBODY, is crap, based ONLY ON SATISFYING BASIC INSTINCTS... And, based on that, let's think about a situation where an uncle/father sees his daughter/niece dressed as skimpy as the girl he just saw in a porn movie just minutes ago... He "KNOWS" from all the crappy porn he sees that, if she dresses like that, then she only wants to be fucked brainless by any dick, including or, most likely, exclusively, by HIS. Why would she dress like that if not for him? Right! Because, that's what you see and "learn" from what is now available in the genre. .. And if she refuses, it's because "she likes it rough", another "reliable and proven type of behavior" he "KNOWS" that these girls have, in this exact type of situations... And he knows it from where? From the brainless, emotionless, dead stupid reused scenarios we can all find online for free EVERYWHERE!

What story am I trying to tell? Well, one where mutual feelings are the core mechanic that drive the plot, where even when characters fall down to the emotionless pit and are on the brink of doing something "bad", they become HUMANS, brain active, conscious, aware of the situation. And they realise they make mistakes, they cry and regret, they feel pain, because they don't know how much they've hurt someone they love, they talk, laugh, feel for each other, experience their life story with small steps, slowly discovering who they are, both separately and together...

So, considering all of the above, tell me: who inspires most a father/uncle to rape his daughter/niece? My comic or the rest? And, last but not least, in your opinion, what scenario is more "politically correct" for the public view? A gangbang (almost rape) in the middle of the forest, involving a "fairy" with a dick the size of her leg, penetreted in both available holes by two green goblins with cocks bigger than their torso, or a sister and a brother, developing feelings for each other and trying, despite all the hate and prohibitions around them, to be together?

Why the first one is "normal" and the other is "gross and repulsive"? Because one is fiction and the other is... Well... More plausible? Don't know, just asking... Long before I've put down on paper the statement...
 

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I was just echoing what it is like to make incest mainstream - you have ta cloak it in many layers of degeneracy.
Remember game of thrones - it was spited and done as a crime to hide a convenience marriage
and all the whoring going around that left bastards r.r. martin knows where.
Remember alexander - it was done as forceful, brutal, atop a power regime, morally grey to pruple.

When you portray what is very close to standardized rape onto defenseless kids,
because go figgure, most cases of incest rape are of parents brutalizing their kids,

You have ta distance yourself from the norm of - oh, I have no skills to land a hot chick,
I will suffer a monster of a wife provided I RAPE HER KIDS TO KINGDOME COME.

yOUR STORY IS VERY POWERFUL PRECISELY BECAUSE IT IS IN OUR HOMES, IT IS VERY PLAUSABLE.

Are you sure degenerates will not feel empowered while raping their powerless sisters, by reading your book,
imagining they are in love/loved by their younger sister when they force themselves onto her?
 

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Well, thats PRECISELY what I want to point out in my story: Power over Ration, decisions on how and when to use power, about making the right choice and how powerful you can actually be WHEN YOU CHOSE NOT TO USE POWER because it can hurt people. As you will see, Jake is not only extremely inteligent, but extremely powerful. If the last image in the pinups suggested that Alice is stunned, unable to move, that she's frightened, then YES, that's exactly what's happening. If it suggested that something bad is going to happen, then, Yes, that's exactly what I wanted to express.
The story is more powerful than people can imagine, because, like I've said, it's based on real human emotion and reactions. It will be the embodiment of everything that could go wrong in a real life situation, and the decisions they both have to make in order to remain rational and HUMAN, and don't fall into the irresponsible side.

Trust me, Canto, this won't be anyone's regular 10 minutes reading fap story... I've stated in the first lines of the prologue: THIS IS SERIUOUS!
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