- Sep 10, 2019
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A simple tale.. that's fun and decently made.. that gets over analyzed way to much. Enjoyed it.. nice characters/renders.. Looking forward to more!
- Thread starter Mr. Vncr
- Start date
- Aug 9, 2020
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I couldn't help it when I saw the girls uniform!
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I use it to do my Emily Browning Baby from Sucker Punch! Love to know what your girls set ups are! Especially Brenda, Gia, Mia and Shanice... Love to make some fun Fanart with them. Anyway looking forward to how your game goes, so far very interesting, but you might want to add cheating to tags as the mother-in-law is going to cheat or has started to.... or you going to make her do it. Also see there going to be a harem of some sort so need that tag also?
You going to get Baby to make a cameo lol?
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I use it to do my Emily Browning Baby from Sucker Punch! Love to know what your girls set ups are! Especially Brenda, Gia, Mia and Shanice... Love to make some fun Fanart with them. Anyway looking forward to how your game goes, so far very interesting, but you might want to add cheating to tags as the mother-in-law is going to cheat or has started to.... or you going to make her do it. Also see there going to be a harem of some sort so need that tag also?
You going to get Baby to make a cameo lol?
Please add the option of pregnancy, I would like to see a system of economy based on reproduction. I mean, it would be interesting to see.
- Jul 29, 2017
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Difficult since they are cousins, besides, Shanice has already built up a fan base here in the community, and they wouldn't be happy about that.
What I can agree with you on is that Johnny should stay away from Brenda.
- Sep 22, 2017
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Other than the english I don't really have any complaints about this game. There are too many games that try to have overcomplicated stories. We need more games like this.
- Nov 22, 2018
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It's not a bad start. The plot seems fine for a porn game. But let's get into the problems.
First of all, the English, at least on Day 1, is a disaster. Numerous misspellings, wrong tenses, sometimes weird word choices... Day 2 is significantly better, but still has some facepalm moments. A proofread is absolutely necessary.
Continuity is also not perfect. For example, Lucy "knows" the MC spied on her, even if he didn't. For example, Shanice says during her scene at her house, "Almost I forgot how big you are," even if MC denied her in the restroom, and she therefore never saw his dick. I'm also not sure about Mia bringing up the FWB thing to MC if he kissed Shanice but not her; maybe it's just me, but that feels a bit off.
I also noticed a mislabeled line. When Mei leaves, she says, "See ya, new boy!" but it looks like MC says it.
Anyway. I hope the dev manages to clean up the script. If you can look past the terrible English, this is a decent game, and I'd love to read more of it.
(version 0.2)
First of all, the English, at least on Day 1, is a disaster. Numerous misspellings, wrong tenses, sometimes weird word choices... Day 2 is significantly better, but still has some facepalm moments. A proofread is absolutely necessary.
Continuity is also not perfect. For example, Lucy "knows" the MC spied on her, even if he didn't. For example, Shanice says during her scene at her house, "Almost I forgot how big you are," even if MC denied her in the restroom, and she therefore never saw his dick. I'm also not sure about Mia bringing up the FWB thing to MC if he kissed Shanice but not her; maybe it's just me, but that feels a bit off.
I also noticed a mislabeled line. When Mei leaves, she says, "See ya, new boy!" but it looks like MC says it.
Anyway. I hope the dev manages to clean up the script. If you can look past the terrible English, this is a decent game, and I'd love to read more of it.
(version 0.2)
- Oct 4, 2017
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Interesting build up. I thought since the girls fall in love with MC that eary on, it would be hard to prolong the story. But with 0.2 it seems there is much more in the story then I thought.
But there are some red flags already:
- Brenda likes us, but Johnny is into her and he already started to romance her. We dont know what happend offscreen but my gut feeling tells me nothing happend because Brenda still is into us. Perhaps this will play out that we Cuck Johnny ? If yes, hell yeah!
- Meddie has a Boyfriend so its clear as sky that we will steal her away. That guy is also the brother of Gia. What would be also interesting if Meddies Brother has a crush on her, so we would also cuck this guy. Imagine him catching MC and Meddie going all wild and he get crushed (perhaps he will be also into it I dont know lol)
Lets see what the next update brings.
But there are some red flags already:
- Brenda likes us, but Johnny is into her and he already started to romance her. We dont know what happend offscreen but my gut feeling tells me nothing happend because Brenda still is into us. Perhaps this will play out that we Cuck Johnny ? If yes, hell yeah!
- Meddie has a Boyfriend so its clear as sky that we will steal her away. That guy is also the brother of Gia. What would be also interesting if Meddies Brother has a crush on her, so we would also cuck this guy. Imagine him catching MC and Meddie going all wild and he get crushed (perhaps he will be also into it I dont know lol)
Lets see what the next update brings.
I was going to try this but from reading forums I realize that this visual novel has all the elements that I end up hating so I am just going to delete it and move on.
- Feb 25, 2020
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