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"AnonDux, please consider delaying the sexual encounter between Darren and his girlfriend until at least Chapter 20. Introducing additional characters might help to slow down the plot and prevent the story from becoming solely focused on their relationship. The girlfriend's role as a central character is important, but rushing their intimacy could potentially diminish the impact of the story."

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Ok, I think I figured it out. The big plot twist in the story:

Darren is secretly deeply in love with the MC, but because he is deeply insecure and in denial about his own sexuality, he overcompensates with a bullyish attitude and having sex with every female he encounters. Also Darren is extremly jealous of the MC's GF, so he crafted a plan to show MC just how much more enjoyable and pleasurable a relationship with him would be, so he constantly has sex in MC's house, so that MC is constantly hearing or seeing it or shows MC videos of his conquests. And Darren also set his sights on GF's family, constantly bombarding her psychologically to maybe, eventually, in a distant future in a galaxy far, far away, make her cheat on MC or at least doubt her own relationship with MC so that they break up and Darren can become the shoulder to cry on for MC. It has to be something along those lines. I, at least, can't think of any other reason as to why MC's family and a bunch of random-ass-people with no real relation to MC get fucked in every conceivable way, while GF just isn't getting any action. At this rate MC is going to jump on that BBC before GF even figured out that she may like sex. I think the NTR tag is meant for the GF as she is the real person getting cucked here.

Aside from that little rant, good game, had potential. I liked it, I eagerly awaited new updates. But that fire has been extinguished. Maybe I'll come back in a decade or two to see if GF got any action or is still sidelined.
 
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Ok, I think I figured it out. The big plot twist in the story:

Darren is secretly deeply in love with the MC, but because he is deeply insecure and in denial about his own sexuality, he overcompensates with a bullyish attitude and having sex with every female he encounters. Also Darren is extremly jealous of the MC's GF, so he crafted a plan to show MC just how much more enjoyable and pleasurable a relationship with him would be, so he constantly has sex in MC's house, so that MC is constantly hearing or seeing it or shows MC videos of his conquests. And Darren also set his sights on GF's family, constantly bombarding her psychologically to maybe, eventually, in a distant future in a galaxy far, far away, make her cheat on MC or at least doubt her own relationship with MC so that they break up and Darren can become the shoulder to cry on for MC. It has to be something along those lines. I, at least, can't think of any other reason as to why MC's family and a bunch of random-ass-people with no real relation to MC get fucked in every conceivable way, while GF just isn't getting any action. At this rate MC is going to jump on that BBC before GF even figured out that she may like sex. I think the NTR tag is meant for the GF as she is the real person getting cucked here.

Aside from that little rant, good game, had potential. I liked it, I eagerly awaited new updates. But that fire has been extinguished. Maybe I'll come back in a decade or two to see if GF got any action or is still sidelined.
It was a very interesting twist if the authors of the game hinted at it a little.
I would even say a very cool twist if you correctly bring the player to it, with light hints on this topic.

But alas, most game developers do not want to read books or study the literary techniques of classics or other authors.
To present your text and your story beautifully and competently to the player.

But to be honest, the idea is very cool)
 

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gilgamesh9

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Id have to disagree with the top post on this page. If i have to wait much longer for the gf to get some BBC ill lose interest. I don't need to see Darren fuck the whole town before FINALLY getting to what we been waiting for. Don't think this game will even make it to 20 chapters. It would start to lose what little value it has atm. Just my opinion
 
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EnterYourNameHere

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Id have to disagree with the top post on this page. If i have to wait much longer for the gf to get some BBC ill lose interest. I don't need to see Darren fuck the whole town before FINALLY getting to what we been waiting for. Don't think this game will even make it to 20 chapters. It would start to lose what little value it has atm. Just my opinion
The problem is, the game ends when this happens. When he deflorate the gf, there is nobody else left to fuck. There will not be a point to play the game even further just to watch some random porns.
 

gilgamesh9

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The problem is, the game ends when this happens. When he deflorate the gf, there is nobody else left to fuck. There will not be a point to play the game even further just to watch some random porns.
Which is true and why i don't think it will make it much longer. Everyone relevant has already been fucked over and over and over and over other then her. Adding random women will just put a damper in it imo.
 
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