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I don't understand how that could be a problem in any conceivable way....the girl's head is smaller than one of her boobs,her breasts have more milk than a cow
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Chapter 3 is now available for everyone, Patreon version is available for $10 on Patreon, you will have access to a new route with new scenes.
+Chapter 4 is available on Patreon, thank you for considering it!
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Chapter 3 is now available for everyone, Patreon version is available for $10 on Patreon, you will have access to a new route with new scenes.
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yea, dont know why dev is making a separate chapters. it's not even over 100mb let alone 1gb
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I think the same. I'm not interested in a female MC whose only object is to be raped.
Maybe it's silly to ask, but can maledom and rape be avoided?
And you are correct.
I like to surprise, and my goal is not always to entertain.
I like to think that sometimes the stories have to be the way they are rather than perfect and the best they can be.
I will do "better" for my next games though. This one is as it should be: unreasonable, shocking, possibly underwhelming, and looking like some old 20th century porn.
But great efforts are made to make it "as it should be".
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I am sorry if you feel uncomfortable about my comments, but please don't take me wrong.
I hardly feel "shocking" or any other strong emotion because this game doesn't give me an immersive sense at all. I might be a little curious about why you release it at such an early stage.
How can I put this? Please allow me to give an example:
Many devs give a lengthy prologue in their games because they build up a unique universe that players can't understand easily. they try to sell their ideas; I respect that a lot even if it is not necessary for me to buy it. At least, they make an effort to legitimize their settings which players need to know to enjoy the game. They make a lot of effort to communicate with the players.
When I play this game, I am actually an audience, watching a documentary about some creatures' mating without any narration, which I can never understand. There is no explanation for the girl's condition. Why? What happened? Does she have a family? Friends? does she have any goals? (I know you avoid it at the very beginning by "I don't have many dreams"----big no-no) why she enjoys being pinned down on the road and being raped later on? what is the girl thinking when she "hummmmm....hummmm" all the way? Don't those events need further illustration?
Well, see, you are making a Visual Novel; I guess you fully realize it. In a novel, the creation of characters is critical; I don't need to talk about it because that is the fact. However, in this game, I am watching a puppet without a real character -- who owns a convincing, reasonable life. The game is not a Visual Novel(no coherent story), nor RPG(no character) so far, I am afraid.
Thus, I really think you need to make more effort to build up the foundation for the novel and characters, and then spend more time telling players about them.
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Yes. So you felt what I wanted you to feel.
As I said, it is as it should be.
Do I have to explain everything? I feel like it would spoil some kind of immersion, but I'm going to do it anyway, I feel it's necessary now. I will still be brief and simply respond to what you said.
First, I don't want to be like other developers (for the moment). As you said, they try to sell their ideas: I am not. It's not with this game that I want to sell my ideas, I just want to show them.
For the explanation of what happens to Lola? Why does she appreciate more and more what is happening to her? We will have the answer later in the following chapters
Why is she moaning? She is doing it. This is what happens. And sometimes she just can't think about anything. And if there aren't enough illustrations, I'm sorry, but it's not financially possible. And yes, I want you to feel that.
I'm glad you feel like you see her as a "puppet without a real character" ... that's a good thing. And you'll understand why later.
It is as it should be and you have a good feeling.
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sure, if you like, you could keep them secret as long as you want. I am sorry to be the "eager" one for a better result here. Hopefully, you could get what your desire quicker by doing this.
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Hey everyone.
As AnimeHentaiGamer said, the game will no longer be available on Patreon and no rewards will be presented for this game there.
But, I'm going to complete a version of Lola's Adventures bringing all the chapters together in one game and remove all links to Patreon inside of it.
It gives me a bit of a blow to my morale, but we're going to keep making games that will totally meet Patreon's guidelines and I have a new Visual Novel that'll be released soon.
I hope I can count on the support of those who are interested.
As AnimeHentaiGamer said, the game will no longer be available on Patreon and no rewards will be presented for this game there.
But, I'm going to complete a version of Lola's Adventures bringing all the chapters together in one game and remove all links to Patreon inside of it.
It gives me a bit of a blow to my morale, but we're going to keep making games that will totally meet Patreon's guidelines and I have a new Visual Novel that'll be released soon.
I hope I can count on the support of those who are interested.
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