VN Ren'Py Long Road Home [Ep.16] [OBDGames]

[HiHaHo]

So... Dima, you are a great story teller. You're dialogue flows as naturally as can be. Grammar... Not so much. Case in point, "I'd like to think there isn't aren't that many things that fell through the cracks!" It's not terrible. It's just not publisher perfect. Now... You're being offered free assistance from an English teacher. That translates as "professional sentence builder". It couldn't hurt. Most likely will help. I've been hanging' around this site for a few years now and this is hands down my favourite story. Take every opportunity to make it even better. Jus' Sayin'

true if hes willing to help why not right?
just give em early access a day or 2 before release so he can do a run on the new content to check it

Then again you could say some off the grammar & sentence building "mistakes" could reflect realism
Not that the characters in the AVN are stupid ,but you're bound to find these things IRL to

(and non native english speakers like me wouldn't even notice them,on here the browser spelling check really helps me though)

 

[HornyyPussy]

So... Dima, you are a great story teller. You're dialogue flows as naturally as can be. Grammar... Not so much. Case in point, "I'd like to think there isn't aren't that many things that fell through the cracks!" It's not terrible. It's just not publisher perfect. Now... You're being offered free assistance from an English teacher. That translates as "professional sentence builder". It couldn't hurt. Most likely will help. I've been hangin' around this site for a few years now and this is hands down my favorite story. Take every opportunity to make it even better. Jus' Sayin'

Everyone's a critic.........

 

[D Dog]

Just finished this update and it was "OUT FREAKING STANDING" , I can't wait for the next chapter to continue this and see how it goes.

 

[c3p0]

Everyone's a critic.........

Yes, Mr. HornyyPussy. I could remember you about a post to include more cast in his game, even from outside of LRH, but that would be a critic, isn't it?

Hey Dima, if I suggest a bunch of amazing LI's from other VN's, could you be a dear and add them to LRH, thanks!

Couldn't let this slip, you know me.

 

[motseer]

Everyone's a critic.........

Yes, Mr. HornyyPussy. I could remember you about a post to include more cast in his game, even from outside of LRH, but that would be a critic, isn't it?

Spoiler: Yeah... That's right... Don't worry though...

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[The Grifter]

Spoiler: Yeah... That's right... Don't worry though...

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[JGNeon]

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Is there anybody else getting this error, when MC opens his eyes in the hospital?

I got the same error, too. It happened both times I tried passing that moment (by chance, I had made a save when MC was walking back to Elvira after "dealing" with Johnny, shortly before the hospital scene; I usually get into the habit to make a save when it feels like a possible cliffhanger moment, just in case the story ends for this update).

I could easily continue past this error by hitting "Ignore", at least.

 

[Juv3]

Is there android port

 

[HornyyPussy]

Yes, Mr. HornyyPussy. I could remember you about a post to include more cast in his game, even from outside of LRH, but that would be a critic, isn't it?

Couldn't let this slip, you know me.

Mine was a courteous request.........

 

[HornyyPussy]

Is there android port

Yes

 

[motseer]

Mine was a courteous request.........

So, my comment was discourteous?

 

[cxx]

but jessy's model was in Haley's Story by Viitgames

just same asset.

 

[The Grifter]

So, my comment was discourteous?

But do go on...

 

[divingmedic]

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But do go on...

Such a good movie.

 

[Venters616]

I have a question, for the big decision of the Ally path or not, i'm guessing

Spoiler: decision spoiler

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[HiHaHo]

I have a question, for the big decision of the Ally path or not, i'm guessing

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not sure what happens to jaybird if you say no to tori if he dies or just stays in prison for longer

It was however mentioned that a M/M/F threesome would be a thing if you accept.
so its not the end off candy's path if you get jaybird out you'll just be sharing her whit Jaybird permission from what i understand
(could be you get some 1 on 1 time to as a option)

 

[Elduriel]

I have a question, for the big decision of the Ally path or not, i'm guessing

Spoiler: decision spoiler

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as I understand pretty much... ally is good, people will go on and good sfuff happens, on the other choice people will die (possibly close to you) and shit goes down

 

[Dark Lord Of Chaos]

if you like the world to burn go the non ally path...lol

 

[Mr.PotatoChips]

Long Road Home [v10.1 Part 2] Gallery Mod

Based on IAmAB's gallery mod (up to v10.1 part 1), updated by AnonymousLegend

Should work fine. Let me know if you have any issues.

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NOTE : the update is finish but it still have some error. i will post after fixing it and when i have more time. Be patient guys

update??

 

[Venters616]

if you like the world to burn go the non ally path...lol

well i dont want the world to burn....im just a greedy fuck and i like Jaybird's Ol'lady