motseer
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A very reasonable critique and well presented, and I absolutely, 100%, disagree. LRH is not a short story, it's an epic tale. It also has a strong erotic element, and a large cast of characters. I understand a reader wanting to find out what happens. We've all skipped to the end of a book and then gone back to read the story that gets you to that end, but you just don't get to do that with a work in progress. There was progress in the over-arching plot and plenty of character development. Several girls were added to the harem or moved in that direction, and many fans have commented that they don't want to see them left behind. Several side stories were progressed, i. e. Tori, Depasto, rebuilding the Rogues, and the Fox Box. Immersion is an important factor in a good story, and I get it in abundance with this one.Wishing everyone a Merry Christmas & Happy Holidays.
Finished the update, and uhhhh......... how should I put this.
I wasn't really impressed?
Don't get me wrong, I still quite like the game overall and do think it's the best Biker-Gang power fantasy in terms of AVN-sphere, but over the past couple of updates, I've begun to see cracks in this game which I didn't see initially when I first started it (or didn't want to see perhaps, due to my huge positive bias towards it lol).
To point out the problems I had with this update/recent updates (and Dimitri57 , I mean absolutely no disrespect/offense to you when I say everything below. Just giving you a honest constructive critique):
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Now, Dima. With above, I have said a lot.
(Am I even running fast enough to get away from an angry mob of pitchforks aimed at me now?)
It probably is harsh but I think brutal honesty in my feedback is something you'd prefer to hear, in not just development for this game, but also for any of your future games (that is, if you end up making other games after this one).
Also, bear in mind that just because I said all the above, it doesn't mean I dislike the game.
Far from it.
I do like the game. It's just that I think the game could have been much better had those issues I listed above been handled better.
In short, I was impressed. In fact, I think it was one of the best chapters to date.
Just my opinion, of course,
RFFR
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