Dimitri57, what I have seen at version 2 tells me that this story has a whole lot of potential. I will be following it.
However (yes there is a catch),
I am afraid I have to agree with the other comments in the thread regarding what appears to be the rape of a girl ********** for a couple of reasons. Primarily it would make this ****** ***** which is forbidden almost everywhere. Second, would be the no choice view of the story of the incidents.
Don't get me wrong, it is your story and you tell it like you want to.
I just feel it would be in everybody's best interest (including yours) to change the text so there is no question Jessy was under 18. She mentioned her next birthday, maybe change it to her 19th birthday. I'm sure you know where that is at. You might even consider what the vast majority of prisoners would feel about it.
Second, considering the furious comments regarding the rape, maybe branch a not so graphic version of that part of the story. I mean, it would make more people happier with the story, more patrons, etc.
Can't wait for the next update.