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Still into the prison, MC respond about his belt : I was issued one but they but...
In the car out or prison, Responding to Tracy : Sorry, I'm use(+d) to wise assing with guys.
In the car toward Tracy Home and about her daughter : .. but I wanted (+to) protect her innocence (as is. Schools are quite deviance charged in-between class.)
Tracy talking to JD in his Auto Shop, her thoughts :... I don't want to JD to take it out on...
Not sure here, take it out on ?
Next : At the sea, with the girls, Larisa responds to Rachael : I've never had ... relationship. Accept when...
Mickey in his garage / Workshop talking about Stan, could not be an error as I'm not a native English user : Stan is completely ... and she him. Should it not be to him ?
In the Tattoo shop, talking to Stan on the phone : A big a stack of trash ...
Not a proper error, in the tattoo, others go, it's the MC as he touches Kat ass, ... Then you feel her relax (+,) letting her body rest against yours.
They are few sweet scenes in the game, that one has Kat emotional after all, so even if she had a little time to process, having the MC there so close...
Then, please add a hide interface button, as it is the image of Tracy return is gorgeous. Excellent job of all of her, style and dress perfect.
Sad the girls do not go with lingerie, they are heels and piercings tough, so later maybe.
In Kat car, as she has taken the MC D in hand, MC response to her : I'm not just a taker, Kat, (+I) like to give, to.
A pure missing letter, at Gunner workshop, Gunner response to his grand Daughter : You can teach him th(+e) basic...
Dancing, at the meeting with family, Nora talking to MC : I can see you are sincere, ... go to my like (+a) silly