VN Ren'Py Long Road Home [v10 Part 4 Beta Update 1] [OBDGames]

[Dimitri57]

never did say she was "to" old

she's just on the older side meaning it comes whit risks

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tracy claims to have gotten pregnant at about the same age as jessy who is 18 and getting closer to 19
which would make tracy about 36-38 years old

would i like to see tracy have a baby from the mc ?? Sure
would i risk her life(and/or that baby's) for it? NO!

dimitri likes to keep a realistic touch in the game and sadly for women,her age is important if she wants to have a baby

Jessy is 19, nearly 20. In the conversation with Reba and Nikki on the patio, Jessy states that Tracy was five years older than she is when Tracy got pregnant with Jessy. That would put Tracy's current age around 45.

I've thought about having a birthday event for Jessy to get her between 20 and 21. I have so many other loose ends to tie up, it never was important enough to spend time on.

 

[tbarton1455]

You're right, it's a mixed bag either way you do it.

I don't own the thread, but I'd prefer that it not split when chapter one is complete. It wouldn't make sense to do that since chapter two is a continuation of the same characters in the second phase of the story.

It shouldn't split, to be honest, unless someone does it that way. The AVN Thirsty for my Guest has three "seasons" on the same thread, so I'm sure it can be done with this one too.

 

[motseer]

LoM Probably one of the most popular of all time has Book 1, Book 2 and Book 3 in the same thread. I'm pretty sure it's the most common way of doing it. Usually a new thread means a restart, rewrite, abandonment/do-over type thing. Definitely not the case here.

 

[HiHaHo]

yeah mutiple threads for this would be wierd aspecially considering its a more kinetic based novel considering like 90% off choice's are do i want this girl yes/no

and the choice's that do branch the story lead to story endings
also like dimtri said:

It wouldn't make sense to do that since chapter two is a continuation of the same characters in the second phase of the story.

anyway if people want to make a other thread on it its up to them ill just keep posting here anyway

 

[PapaPhat]

Dimitri57, You know, brother... You could request ownership of this forum and post the updates yourself. That way you control the wait time between your Patreon release and when it posts here. It's YOUR game so they won't say no to your request. It just takes a bit of time for the site to process the request. I'm not saying you have to or that you even should... Just putting the idea out there as a way to have better control of your own game's forum. I'm not sure where you got that idea that this forum would get split with the advent of chapter two but I would much rather see you take ownership of the posting of your game and this forum for the solidarity that would offer. Dividing this forum in two or more, depending on how much of MC and Jessy's story you intend to write, just doesn't make a bit of sense. If you controlled the thread it would be your choice when and how it posts.

I love this game! Love you too, my brother from another mother! RFFR... Rogues Forever, Forever Rogues.

Adventure ever on, Phat

 

[JJJ84]

Been juggling several things so been spending extensive time playing this game which I started playing 2.5 weeks ago, but I'm finally all caught up.

And man......... this game has been so enjoyable.
Lots of likable and interesting characters with great characterizations for several of them.

But what I like most about it is the whole world-building.

Our MC is thrust into the world of biker clubs and the war, with different environments (Rogues vs Minions), not to mention lots of explorations in and outside the town.
As someone who loves exploration (of possible new locations) which may advance the story, these aspect and the plotline had me engaged.

And gotta me honest, before starting this game, I basically knew nothing about biker clubs. The game does the good job of easing the player into it with gradual reveal of information so I could understand bit by bit.


So all in all, loved it.
And I'll be eagerly waiting (and keeping tabs) for the future updates as to where the storyline leads these characters.

 

[cxx]

Why the fuck would the thread split with a new one for chapter two??? It's chapter 2 of the same fucking story!!!
Phat is fucking confused now... Why does some asshole want us to chase down a second thread for the continuation of the same fucking story??? Now Phat is pissed... WTF???

well there are some games where ch2 is on it's own thread and many where ch2 etc is on same thread as ch1. up to mods if same or new thread.

 

[Dimitri57]

Thanks for the updates.
I like Sluggo but at the same time, a situation similar to Jaybird's wouldn't be bad...
Will Reba's Wealthy simp want to get cucked?


Dimitri57
Your thoughts: I'm not sure I want that Jessy working at the club.
Reba: Like, he's been so totally nice to me. I'm okey with that. Are just me and Nikki are dancing?
Jessy: Ooh nice. I've been dying to (see?) your girls Ashley.
Nikki: MC need help(?)S(W)Shat about me?
Nikki: I'm good MC. My car is parked in (the) back.
Rin: Unlike in the past, this is my choice. To cleave (cling? not sure what word were you going for) to a man that I desire rather than one that is my duty to be with.
MC: You(')r(e) Late! (talking to Reba)
Your thoughts: I guess I'll put (it) in that corner. I'll be able to see most of the room from there.
Angel: Didn't recognize (you) with your hair that long.
Angel: Yeah, like a(I) got a phone.
Della: Is that that your stomach growling?
Angel: No. At first it was, he knew (a) guy looking for young girls to make sister-sister incest porn videos.
MC: They can be are(pick between "can be" or "are") extremely harsh to people to that aren't . Never lie or disrespect them.
Chloe: I think getting so much attention from us girls at your party (h)as given you a big head.
Katy: Why not? I told you that I wanted to going riding and play with it.
Bad Bob's thoughts: The last thing I need is a girl that can be tied back to me face on a milk carton. (i think there should be a " 's" somewhere in that sentence, but not sure where)
Bad Bob: No, she's a ice queen, but i have my reasons to keep her as my girlfriend.
Bad Bob: Just now, I got a report that a woman that sounded like Della picked a hooker just outside (the) club.
Bad Bob: Willie, I don't (want) the club destroyed any more than you do. I think we should wear them down until they are weak enough to finish off.
Willie: I don't trust the Mayor not to throw us under the bus if any shit comes down. I'm glad she (is) inside his head so she can tip us off.
Simone: But you(')r(e) Frannie's boyfriend.
Frannie: I'm sorry (I) was cold to you. I was trying to punish you for ignoring my texts.
Kat: Yes. Right after I give you (the) best boob job you've ever had.
Kat: MC, I don't want you to hurt any of them either. I don't intend for you to change your any of your relationships.
MC: I'm sure he (is) concerned about older guys taking advantage of you.
MC: He told me (to) never use that name.
MC: You are worry(ed) about both of them.
Sluggo: Candi, I want (to) introduce (you) to MC.
Wealthy simp: Mistress, I'm (my) balls are hurting so bad.
Reba's thoughts: I'll be putting a lot of trust in MC if (he) helps me. (can't remember the context 100%, this correction might be wrong)
Jessy: I'll be glad to lay back and let you service of me!
Jessy: Let's grab our stuff (and) go to the room Tink.
Jessy: She said (she) needed to talk to her to keep her from coming here.
Barb: That's why (you) need to go to where they are.
Katy: So hypothetically speaking, would you want to make (a) baby with me?
Jaybird: He tied (tried) to shiv me in the back.
Candi: Del, I think you're right. It all makes since (sense) now.
MC: My bad. I wish I had the time to have taken care (of) you as well.
Reba: Like, I'm adding a spark back (to) their relationship that had got boring.

Thanks. I'm working a on script fix and had caught most of those. But you did catch a couple that I had missed.

Cleave is a word. It's not widely used in common conversations these days. When I'm writing dialog for the characters, I try to use language that I envision them using. When writing for Rin, I want to convey her high level of education and culture.

Cleave
klēv
intransitive verb

1. To adhere, cling, or stick fast.
2. To be faithful.

Take care,
Dima

 

[fried]

That was the saddest couple pages of off-topic and spam posts I've seen in awhile.
And I was browsing through Milfy City recently ...

 

[Runner17]

OBD, originally when we discussed the addition of either a female bouncer or DJ, it was a female that the MC could enjoy. The last we heard on this discussion, its now a married couple, which is fine. My question, is what happened to the lady for Ryker? Variety is the spice of life and were still missing Miss Dash.

Wow, I thought the mod deleted this post. It took me 10 minutes to figure out how to word this and it still sounds like shit!

 

[PapaPhat]

Thanks. I'm working a on script fix and had caught most of those. But you did catch a couple that I had missed.

Cleave is a word. It's not widely used in common conversations these days. When I'm writing dialog for the characters, I try to use language that I envision them using. When writing for Rin, I want to convey her high level of education and culture.

Cleave
klēv
intransitive verb

1. To adhere, cling, or stick fast.
2. To be faithful.

Take care,
Dima

I invited our new friend, Aner878787, into the PM thread I have going with you to have a private place to post his error reports. That way he can help out and you have only one place to check. Hope that works for you too. Apologies for my recent delay. I have a batch to send and will get that to you in the next day or two tops. I promised to proof the entire game as of the latest update and will be back at it in the next couple of days.

RFFR. Rogues Forever, Forever Rogues!

Adventure ever on my friend, Phat

 

[motseer]

So, here's the thing. I had 8 posts deleted from this thread because they were either "off topic" or spam @ fried. Now I'm looking thru what is gone and what is still there from the last 3 or 4 pages... Bite me. Sorry, @ Dimitri57, I'm out. We'll just call this one - self exile.

 

[cxx]

We'll just call this one - self exile.

blame mods.

 

[Onetogo]

I cannot remember what I said that was "off-topic" The last few things I posted was responses to things said early march. I was catching up to everyone else since hadn't been very active. I vaguely remember my posts being on topic. I think a moderator is drunk on power. I usually don't get pissed easily and I let off-topic discussions get mass deleted with a shrug of a shoulder. If this gets me in trouble I'm unconcerned. I'm not going to stress over what I say on this site each time I post. It should be common sense stuff and if someone goes off topic a bit I think it's fine if it's not obsessive where human and that means to error. I know my "dick swinging" comment was deleted and that comment should have been a celebration of the two stopping the measuring of dicks. fried Eat a dick

 

[HiHaHo]

I cannot remember what I said that was "off-topic" The last few things I posted was responses to things said early march. I was catching up to everyone else since hadn't been very active. I vaguely remember my posts being on topic. I think a moderator is drunk on power. I usually don't get pissed easily and I let off-topic discussions get mass deleted with a shrug of a shoulder. If this gets me in trouble I'm unconcerned. I'm not going to stress over what I say on this site each time I post. It should be common sense stuff and if someone goes off topic a bit I think it's fine if it's not obsessive where human and that means to error. I know my "dick swinging" comment was deleted and that comment should have been a celebration of the two stopping the measuring of dicks. fried Eat a dick

he cleaned up a mess which was just someone trying to help a bit by posting some typo's and grammar/sentence building to in a intend to help improve this VN we like
Some people took offence he did this on the thread instead off a pm and started bashing him for it

quite entertaining if you ask me its fun to see people go at each other like their own principles,ways,opinions and the way one should act on them are the right way

the mod is a perfect example :
was it off-topic?
at first no but it turned into a funny dialogue where people where expressing themself in a direct and confronting way where they were right and wrong at the same time
kinda like 2 kids throwing a tantrum ahaha

but when the mod did clear it up i guess it took him a few minutes to sort trough it all resulting in work he had to do
which i guess he gets paid for
if he doesn't get paid for his frustration to have to do it would be more then if he would
but in end he did the job which is good for people who just want to enjoy the discussion and stay on topic and such

but to then leave:

That was the saddest couple pages of off-topic and spam posts I've seen in awhile.
And I was browsing through Milfy City recently ...​

is hypercritical as it as "off-topic" and just spam really
(also just bashing other members in a other topic for him doing his job which he is paid to do or asked to do in order to help improve user experience here at f95)
drunk on power? probably
just frustrated because he had do some work? possibly

did his demeaning message start a other chain off off-topic and spam posts? MOST DEFINITELY!
anyway people keep doing what you are all doing and how you want to do it
i am sure our dedicated moderators will remove messages they see as unfit soon enough again

 

[Onetogo]

he cleaned up a mess which was just someone trying to help a bit by posting some typo's and grammar/sentence building to in a intend to help improve this VN we like
Some people took offence he did this on the thread instead off a pm and started bashing him for it

I said absolutely nothing in regards to this topic. Zero. I had three posts deleted total. My dick swinging one was the one I remembered. The others because of my bad memory I'm at a loss as to what I said that got the mod upset, but that doesn't matter as dick swinging comment was benign. Thus that posts deletion tells me everything I need to know about the mod.

 

[Wolfeszorn]

don´t get me wrong guys, i like each and every one of you in here since we all are a bunch of lads that enjoy this game, but your reactions to a few removed posts are, with all due respect, extremely immature. you act as if somebody killed a puppy....

Even i got some of my posts removed in the past. So what? It´s just a couple of words. Just chill, stick to the rules, post less celebrity pics from your past and ignore trolls or wannabe grammar na*is and everything should be fine

 

[Tulrek]

don´t get me wrong guys, i like each and every one of you in here since we all are a bunch of lads that enjoy this game, but your reactions to a few removed posts are, with all due respect, extremely immature. you act as if somebody killed a puppy....

Even i got some of my posts removed in the past. So what? It´s just a couple of words. Just chill, stick to the rules, post less celebrity pics from your past and ignore trolls or wannabe grammar na*is and everything should be fine

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[bkbigguy]

lol...

 

[RayJefferson]

Just one of the best games on the site, I'm not a fan of the patreon system and others too, but I may pay for the full version of the game in view of the work done