Good catches! Thanks.Hi Dimitri57 Great update! Katy is a great new character! Pity i had to cut the stay at Niki and Charli apartment short to meet Jessy at her work.
Jessy: You're just (in) time. I'm so horny...
Katy: ... You could make up some bullshit and I wouldn't know any difference (I wouldn't know the difference/I wouldn't know any different?)
Katy: The police report stated he was riding at a highrate ofspeed... (not sure if that is needed)
Katy: ... I don't think he is really in to(into) her.
Katy: No, wait, she, never mind it's too much. -- either delete "she" or "No, wait, she... never mind, it's too much." Not sure really
Nikki: ... Charli moved her(e) about a year ago?
Charli: Sorry Niks. You're so saf(? not sure what it means), I was trying to be (at?) your level.
You thoughts(this part is spoken by MC): No problem. Send me your address and I'll pick you up at 03:00.
Rachel: MC, did I hearto(you?) in the next stall? (or perhaps another modification)
Tori: The Mayor is getting impatient with (the?) pace of the downtown revitalization.
Tori: ... You need to be careful not to drop a gift wrappedone in(on) her lap.
James: Yes you do. Don'tcried(cry) like a little bitch this time.
Katy: Darn, just when it wasjustgetting interesting...
Katy: Good luck on that, My pain and anger ... (either replace "," for "." or chambe "My" for "my")
Some are written as I intended them to be. I try to write the way people actually talk rather than perfectly formed sentences.
Katy speaks haltingly because of her nervousness.
saf = sexy as fuck