- Apr 2, 2023
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Way to be passive aggressive about something that for the most part you enjoyed. It's a story. Pure and simple. It's no different than all the rhetoric and "southern language" used in books like: Too Kill a Mockingbird, Tom Sawyer or Of Mice and Men, etc.So I like it for the most part. Interesting premise and the girls are pretty hot.
However the animations all see to flow the same way and some of the dialog and the story beats makes it read like some conservartive power fantasy wet dream.
And then there is all the over the jargon that only right wingers use and making the MC like this badass alpha who is "not a soyboy", no normal person talks like that and I live in the fucking south. I want to like it but some of it is just cringy as fuck, kind of like some of the comments in the message board here talking about how "real men do this and that".
Seriously just shut the fuck up, no one but your microcosm actually talks or acts like that. I am in chapter 6 and I am curious as to where it is going but the cringy right wing speak that is increasing just makes this little power fantasty more and more boring.
The dialog and how the author/dev uses it for the intended purposes of character building and telling the story is just that. It's up to the reader to process the information and either be entertained by it or not.
What exactly were you hoping to achieve other than being a typical keyboard warrior, troll, menace, pest, nuisance, hater...?