VN Others Long Story Short [v0.10 Steam] [TTrickGames]

[xapican]

Chris is unavoidably eating MC's creampie out of Anne.

Speaking of getting cream into a beard .....

 

[Kitiuuu]

He can have them...

What do you mean by "play 9"? They are both 0.9a. I just use build numbers like "38" to indicate that I've done something extra with my Ren'Py port. They are both 0.9a.

I completed the game using your build of the game and I may not complete the official game, it is the same as yours, forgive my bad English

 

[Kitiuuu]

and do you know when the new version of the game will be released?

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

and do you know when the new version of the game will be released?

Did you read the devlog that was posted?

Here is the plan:


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Hey guys!
I just wanted to share why I've been a bit quieter than usual lately.
Basically, not much has changed since my last post, and I felt kind of silly making posts when there wasn't really any news to share. If you scroll through my past updates, you’ll see times when I posted daily because I had exciting things to announce.

Now, on to the actual news:
I've officially decided that the Steam release will happen in mid-late-October—I'm aiming for somewhere between the 16th and 20th. But rest assured, it'll be in October.
Once the Steam release is done, things will get back to normal, and I'll focus entirely on creating new scenes.
Now, because Steam has its own rules, a few things will need to change a bit.
But first, a quick refresher on something I've mentioned before:

The game will be priced at $9.99 on Steam (this is after a launch discount, with the full price being $14.99). If your total support has already reached $9.99 or more, just DM me, and I'll send you a Steam key after the game launches.
By total support, I mean that even if you were on the $1 tier for 10 months, you can also dm me for a key.


Here's my (hopefully humble) request:
Steam relies heavily on positive reviews for exposure and helping the game reach more players. So, if you can, I’d really appreciate it if you could leave a positive review when the game launches. I’ll remind you about this again when we get closer to the release date.
However, if you leave a review using a free key, Steam will flag it as such, and the review won’t have as much weight as a paid review. I’ve decided to pause payments for October, so if you were planning to stay a supporter, you might consider using those funds to buy the game on Steam instead. That way, your review won’t have the "got the product for free" flag, and it would help me a lot.
That said, if you don't want to do that, it's totally fine. I'll still send you a key, no matter what you decide. It’s your choice, and I respect that.

Second, Steam doesn’t allow the game to be sold on other platforms at a lower price. Right now, the final version is available for the Instagram tier at $5, but I won’t be able to continue that anymore. Betas and alphas are still fine, but the final version has to stay above the Steam price.
I didn’t think this would be much of an issue since you can just play the final releases on Steam. The only problem is that the game isn’t available in all countries. For example, people from Germany have already reached out saying they won’t be able to buy it on Steam. I’m trying to find a solution for that.
Needless to say, for the Playa tier and above, everything will stay the same because it's above the Steam price, and I'll continue releasing the game here as well.

I've spent a lot of time thinking about how I can make the Steam release fair to all of you who have been with me for so long.
Let me know what you think, and if you have any better ideas, I’d love to hear them.

Cheers ,
TTrick.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

So Joshy's fantasy is a california snowball?

Rate the girls based on your desire to eat the creampie out of them?

 

[Joshy92]

So Joshy's fantasy is a california snowball?

Rate the girls based on your desire to eat the creampie out of them?

Ok here goes.
Vanessa, Ann, Alex, Emily and finally Jenny.

I chose Vanessa first mainly because I want to see how she would act or what she would think of me.

 

[BlenderGuy]

Ok here goes.
Vanessa, Ann, Alex, Emily and finally Jenny.

I chose Vanessa first mainly because I want to see how she would act or what she would think of me.

Vanessa's mother would be my Dairy Queen. I'd pimp Alex out on adultworks.
Chris would enjoy Emily and Jenny as bar staff he'd be able to impregnate.
Ann would be on Hobo duties.



Gotta respect the Hobo!

 

[BulgariAMARA]

Vanessa's mother would be my Dairy Queen. I'd pimp Alex out on adultworks.
Chris would enjoy Emily and Jenny as bar staff he'd be able to impregnate.
Ann would be on Hobo duties.

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Gotta respect the Hobo!

I liked your post, but I don't agree that Chris will impregnate Emily and Jenny. I think it would be much more fun if Emily and Jenny were pleasuring customers in the toilet of the establishment. And those customers who are too impatient, they would serve hidden behind the bar.

 

[BlenderGuy]

Vanessa's mother would be my Dairy Queen. I'd pimp Alex out on adultworks.
Chris would enjoy Emily and Jenny as bar staff he'd be able to impregnate.
Ann would be on Hobo duties.

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Gotta respect the Hobo!

I'm currently working on some new Ann images which will also feature Joshy, as his love and respect for Ann is truly heartwarming and wholesome, something which I seem to lack in abundance.

Nonetheless, it's an admirable quality.

Joshy will try his best to show Ann there's more to life than being some other guy's cum dumpster, unless.

Ann will show Joshy she can provide him with the most delicious creampies, if he just lets her be herself.

Joshy's addiction to Ann's creampies will create an internal conflict, pushing Joshy further into cuck depravity.

I just know Joshy will do what's best for Ann, unlike the MC in L.S.S.

 

[BlenderGuy]

I liked your post, but I don't agree that Chris will impregnate Emily and Jenny. I think it would be much more fun if Emily and Jenny were pleasuring customers in the toilet of the establishment. And those customers who are too impatient, they would serve hidden behind the bar.

I like your style! I totally agree.


Also, would love to see Vanessa's parents decide to visit Chris's bar one night.
The dad uses the toilet cubicle with the gloryhole.
Chris realises who he is and sends Vanessa to "deal with a client" in the toilet.
Meanwhile, Vanessa's gorgeous mother is being groped by the bar by some of the clientele.

I know it won't happen in the game so might attempt some Fanart once I improve, and actually get to sort out the character assets properly.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

I like your style! I totally agree.


Also, would love to see Vanessa's parents decide to visit Chris's bar one night.
The dad uses the toilet cubicle with the gloryhole.
Chris realises who he is and sends Vanessa to "deal with a client" in the toilet.
Meanwhile, Vanessa's gorgeous mother is being groped by the bar by some of the clientele.

I know it won't happen in the game so might attempt some Fanart once I improve, and actually get to sort out the character assets properly.

It always surprises me that many developers, when they reach a certain point in their games, either do not finish a rather interesting game, or do not use the full potential. I really like your story with Vanessa's parents. I would like the developer to immerse his characters in as deep a depraved relationship as possible. That's exactly what I'm looking for in 3D porn games. I don't understand vanilla.
I very clearly notice the demand for such games that I want to see myself, but unfortunately there are a lot of unfinished games or those that have not reached their potential.
By the way, if this is your rendering of Anne and the tramp, then the drawing is very good.
Once we made mini-fan games with an artist and during this work he greatly improved his skills in 3D rendering. Maybe you could follow this path and start creating your own fan mini stories.

 

[BlenderGuy]

It always surprises me that many developers, when they reach a certain point in their games, either do not finish a rather interesting game, or do not use the full potential. I really like your story with Vanessa's parents. I would like the developer to immerse his characters in as deep a depraved relationship as possible. That's exactly what I'm looking for in 3D porn games. I don't understand vanilla.
I very clearly notice the demand for such games that I want to see myself, but unfortunately there are a lot of unfinished games or those that have not reached their potential.
By the way, if this is your rendering of Anne and the tramp, then the drawing is very good.
Once we made mini-fan games with an artist and during this work he greatly improved his skills in 3D rendering. Maybe you could follow this path and start creating your own fan mini stories.

Yea, I have to admit I do love games which push the characters into depravity too.

I enjoy the characters and flow of LSS, also how the MC is kinda a dominant manipulative cuck (if he wants to be)
who respects the hustle of Chris.

The fact is most TV shows/film characters we adore ended up as fake porn, even porn parodies.
It's a significant part of modern culture.

I always think you can judge a good game by the level of discussion in the game thread.

I'm currently still in learning mode, but fortunate to be able to sit for between six to ten hours a day learning the skills necessary.

I only do fanart of characters where I love the game and appreciate the work of the dev.

Once I get a better set up I'll be doing more fanart to celebrate the best characters of the games I enjoy.
LSS is def up there.

True, it's not some depravity grind game, but still pushes the characters in scenarios well enough to keep you interested.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

Yea, I have to admit I do love games which push the characters into depravity too.

I enjoy the characters and flow of LSS, also how the MC is kinda a dominant manipulative cuck (if he wants to be)
who respects the hustle of Chris.

The fact is most TV shows/film characters we adore ended up as fake porn, even porn parodies.
It's a significant part of modern culture.

I always think you can judge a good game by the level of discussion in the game thread.

I'm currently still in learning mode, but fortunate to be able to sit for between six to ten hours a day learning the skills necessary.

I only do fanart of characters where I love the game and appreciate the work of the dev.

Once I get a better set up I'll be doing more fanart to celebrate the best characters of the games I enjoy.
LSS is def up there.

True, it's not some depravity grind game, but still pushes the characters in scenarios well enough to keep you interested.

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Dude, use the fan art thread: https://f95zone.to/threads/long-story-short-fan-art.61943/

 

[uec397]

It always surprises me that many developers, when they reach a certain point in their games, either do not finish a rather interesting game, or do not use the full potential. I really like your story with Vanessa's parents. I would like the developer to immerse his characters in as deep a depraved relationship as possible. That's exactly what I'm looking for in 3D porn games. I don't understand vanilla.
I very clearly notice the demand for such games that I want to see myself, but unfortunately there are a lot of unfinished games or those that have not reached their potential.
By the way, if this is your rendering of Anne and the tramp, then the drawing is very good.
Once we made mini-fan games with an artist and during this work he greatly improved his skills in 3D rendering. Maybe you could follow this path and start creating your own fan mini stories.

Don't post much on this site but had to on this one. Very good point imo. Vanilla is real life for 98% of people. Porn is depravity and should be explored as such. You want vanilla, go to your girlfriend or wife. Porn should push the boundaries and peak the libido.

 

[MoBy28]

Don't post much on this site but had to on this one. Very good point imo. Vanilla is real life for 98% of people. Porn is depravity and should be explored as such. You want vanilla, go to your girlfriend or wife. Porn should push the boundaries and peak the libido.

Glad you share your opinion, what if I told you a good wife or girlfriend should be exploring that depravity with you. Porn is whatever the viewer/player chooses. Not everyone has the same kinks/fetishes, saying it should only be used one way is your opinion. Some of these games are pretty much made as porn, no real storyline or logic to them, there are also some that tell a good and compelling story and use lewds scenes to illustrate. To those Devs saying it's just a porn game is insulting them, they are creating a story or world for others to enjoy. A lot of these games are short stories kind of like writing a book with illustrations, are all books with sex scenes porn novels? While sharing your opinions is fine, trying to tell others what they should do or be doing is wrong, it's like kink shaming. Let others enjoy things the way they choose to, appreciate the stories if that's your thing or enjoy the lewd scenes. Again the way it plays out is usually up to the player which is why there are tags for each one to help them choose which ones they might be interested in.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

Don't post much on this site but had to on this one. Very good point imo. Vanilla is real life for 98% of people. Porn is depravity and should be explored as such. You want vanilla, go to your girlfriend or wife. Porn should push the boundaries and peak the libido.

I agree with you, and it is for this reason that I am extremely surprised by the desire of many developers for realism. I always want to ask these guys, what the hell is realism, are you creating a porn game or are you trying to become Shakespeare?
If you create a porn game, then the result should be appropriate; the game should contain porn, sex and depraved acts of different typologies, relating to various fetishes.

This game, unlike many others, is good, but its potential is enormous, I will be sorry if the author does not reveal it and stops there.

 

[Dogorti]

I agree with you, and it is for this reason that I am extremely surprised by the desire of many developers for realism. I always want to ask these guys, what the hell is realism, are you creating a porn game or are you trying to become Shakespeare?
If you create a porn game, then the result should be appropriate; the game should contain porn, sex and depraved acts of different typologies, relating to various fetishes.

Fucking agree. I like that there is a good plot in porn games, don't get me wrong, but realism? a good porn game should be accompanied by good writing and hot scenes, and some devs definition of "realism" is laughable, they believe that adults never have sex or that it is normal for the main character not to have an erection in years. It's all very pathetic.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

Glad you share your opinion, what if I told you a good wife or girlfriend should be exploring that depravity with you. Porn is whatever the viewer/player chooses. Not everyone has the same kinks/fetishes, saying it should only be used one way is your opinion. Some of these games are pretty much made as porn, no real storyline or logic to them, there are also some that tell a good and compelling story and use lewds scenes to illustrate. To those Devs saying it's just a porn game is insulting them, they are creating a story or world for others to enjoy. A lot of these games are short stories kind of like writing a book with illustrations, are all books with sex scenes porn novels? While sharing your opinions is fine, trying to tell others what they should do or be doing is wrong, it's like kink shaming. Let others enjoy things the way they choose to, appreciate the stories if that's your thing or enjoy the lewd scenes. Again the way it plays out is usually up to the player which is why there are tags for each one to help them choose which ones they might be interested in.

You are wrong in opposing one opinion to another. There is nothing wrong with the fact that for some people the story is more important, and the porn scenes are just an addition, a kind of seasoning. The most popular game on this site is perfect proof of this. But this fact does not change my opinion, I look for other games and talk about it. And as it turns out, I'm not alone. And it’s very good that there are still games that satisfy my interests, I’m just sorry that there are few of them.

I will still add to my answer. Of course, the story is important, the author’s intention is important, the plot of the game is important, without this it is not interesting. And yet, have you noticed how many abandoned games whose authors burned out and lost the desire to tell their story to us? This is regrettable, and the same regret is caused by games whose potential is not fully revealed, under the pretext of striving for realism.
That's what I'm talking about and it resonates with others on this forum. I think this is a reason for some authors to reflect.

 

[MoBy28]

You are wrong in opposing one opinion to another. There is nothing wrong with the fact that for some people the story is more important, and the porn scenes are just an addition, a kind of seasoning. The most popular game on this site is perfect proof of this. But this fact does not change my opinion, I look for other games and talk about it. And as it turns out, I'm not alone. And it’s very good that there are still games that satisfy my interests, I’m just sorry that there are few of them.

I will still add to my answer. Of course, the story is important, the author’s intention is important, the plot of the game is important, without this it is not interesting. And yet, have you noticed how many abandoned games whose authors burned out and lost the desire to tell their story to us? This is regrettable, and the same regret is caused by games whose potential is not fully revealed, under the pretext of striving for realism.
That's what I'm talking about and it resonates with others on this forum. I think this is a reason for some authors to reflect.

I never opposed an opinion, I stated that one should not try to tell others how to play or why they should play based on their own opinions.

Some devs get burn out from pushing too hard, some develop writer's block and give up, others get tired of people telling them how to make their story or wanting them to change things. There are a ton of reasons they stop or abandon a game/story. Hate to see that but it happens.

I also look for a good story with believability not realism, let's face it realism in most of these stories isn't happening. TBH I think most devs are still young and lack the life experience to put a lot of realism into their stories, doesn't make them bad, just means if they stick with it they will get better with time. Each genre of game/story has it's tropes and flaws usually the best ones are the ones who don't follow the tropes(at least to me). When they can tell a story without going down the usual path it always makes it more interesting. I don't look for realism per se just something that is believable especially when they try to base it in the "real world". Unfortunately most fall short because they use porn logic and ntr reasoning. Those games usually just become fuckfests and the story ends up making no sense. I could list many examples in different genres but some may not agree or have different things that they consider believable. If the story goes a way I don't like I stop playing/reading it, I'll watch to see if maybe it gets back on track. I see too many others trying to push their opinions/beliefs onto others instead of letting them criticize or put their opinions out for the devs to see, to me this is wrong and I'll post about it.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

I never opposed an opinion, I stated that one should not try to tell others how to play or why they should play based on their own opinions.

Some devs get burn out from pushing too hard, some develop writer's block and give up, others get tired of people telling them how to make their story or wanting them to change things. There are a ton of reasons they stop or abandon a game/story. Hate to see that but it happens.

I also look for a good story with believability not realism, let's face it realism in most of these stories isn't happening. TBH I think most devs are still young and lack the life experience to put a lot of realism into their stories, doesn't make them bad, just means if they stick with it they will get better with time. Each genre of game/story has it's tropes and flaws usually the best ones are the ones who don't follow the tropes(at least to me). When they can tell a story without going down the usual path it always makes it more interesting. I don't look for realism per se just something that is believable especially when they try to base it in the "real world". Unfortunately most fall short because they use porn logic and ntr reasoning. Those games usually just become fuckfests and the story ends up making no sense. I could list many examples in different genres but some may not agree or have different things that they consider believable. If the story goes a way I don't like I stop playing/reading it, I'll watch to see if maybe it gets back on track. I see too many others trying to push their opinions/beliefs onto others instead of letting them criticize or put their opinions out for the devs to see, to me this is wrong and I'll post about it.

I agree with you on this and don’t see anything wrong if someone expresses their wishes or options for the development of events in the game. But of course it’s up to the author to accept the attached plot or go exactly his own way. In any case, you will never please everyone, and this is not the goal of any of the authors. And of course, I am against it when some third-party idea is imposed on the author about how his game and story should develop. So, in general, we are on the same wavelength.