I'd say the one questionable/problematic part potentially takes place not during the night at the motel, but afterwards.If you happen to play again and can provide anything specific regarding that, let me know. TTrick is receptive to changes and you're not the only one who took issue with the motel scene.
Specifically, it's a disparity between how gf Ann will hold herself back from doing anything with the guys while MC is asleep if she has no reason to believe that MC would be ok with it (i.e. if
isMcLikesNTR() returns false) but if you choose to give them a lift on the next day, she'll immediately and indiscriminately just start blowing the guy she gets to sit with, even if nothing has changed in this regard, i.e. she still has no reason to believe the MC would be okay with this; and it's particularly stupid in that context since the MC is right there and there's no way he isn't going to notice what's happening. And he does in fact notice, and has zero reaction to it.
JavaScript:
mc.talk(`Are you guys okay back there? You are pretty quiet.`);
doWaitImageByTime(v9.V9AnnMCMotelDriving_15);
dudeInBack.talk(`Yes, we are doing absolutely fine.`);
doWaitImageByTime(v9.V9AnnMCMotelDriving_17);
mc.think(`I realized that all this time while I was talking with ${dudeInFront.name}, Ann was giving a blowjob to ${dudeInBack.name}.`);
//...
if (isAnnHate()) {
//...
} else {
//...
} else {
// didn't have sex with neither or gave hj
}
isMcLikesNTR() is false, just have the pair in the back simply join the conversation instead. Otherwise, what you currently get is a sudden 'WTF' when Ann's action comes very much out of the blue, contrary to how she acted before, and MC's lack of reaction to it makes it even weirder.
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