VN - Others - Long Story Short [v0.10a1] [TTrickGames]

This is definitely a 5 star game, damn, finally a game that has the 'cheating' theme right, with excellent girls and not so complicated choices. At least every time a choice pops-up I think i know what direction it points to. And I also like the little surprises, like the Hobo or the big-guy-with-very-small dick .
And oh yeah, also no blue-balling here
Looking forward to more of this, keep up the good work !!!

Excellent Game. Can't wait for more content.

Dialog makes sense and can be played over and over without getting tiresome. Women are hot. Looking forward to what comes next for this messed up crew.

My own hope for the future are....Can't wait to push Ann toward fucking everyone if given an opportunity. Getting her to trust, push her corruption and then add in some blackmail. The sweeter they start, the better the fall.

For this little jewel I can only quote my guru of reviews:
My Rating of [v0.4.1] is:

Pro:
+ Fantastic Renders and Characters
+ Very nice story, re-playable with sidebranches just from 0.4
+ Good pace and no rushing with sensless events
+ Vanessa
+ Rival(s)

Bad (my):
- Fat boy slim, better start with his normal look
- Short gameplay but there are contents for next updates

Conclusion:
Little underrated game: slow pacing and funny story, good graphics, MC with a brain, little cons.
Count also me in the funclub, worth the download.

I love this game. I could say many good things, because there is little bad. Some error but nothing important that prevents me from enjoying this wonderful project.

I love renders, characters and story mode (especially Ann). Although I don't have much experience in games with NTR, I have to say that I liked it from the beginning. It's more exciting than anything else. You can choose what you want at each moment, but as they say there, there could be more immersion including more options in the dialogues.

I have to say that the DV team should think about releasing a little more continuous updates, cause I think that would help the game a lot higher in the ranking for next year.

Withour more, regards and thanks for this wonderful game

What can I say... I love this game. It has an immersive story and renders with great image quality. Entertainment and funny.

To be honest, I'm not a Unity fan, but when I tried this game I made an exception, as long as it stays that way. Sounds, simulated internal applications such as Instagram, and an interface with a menu with a modern and attractive touch, clearly, one of the things I like most.

I can add some things, such as a little more drama to the MC, add some options during the dialogue to be able to psychologically submit/punish Ann when there is a scene like the one in the bar. For example, some "Fuck off", "leave disappointed", "how the fuck have you let her do it?, I leave" .. Leaving her in the middle of the bar crying, for letting the bartender kiss him without refusing. See? That is an option. May they not always be smiles and tolerance.That is, add some other extreme choice, that Ann understand that we're the alpha male, and so the drama would be greater, and give something to defend the MC, especially in scenes with Chris, is something that is missed kinda in games of this genre.

The developer could consider adding the a choice in which the MC punches the bartender when he kiss Ann in front of him. It's an example, not exactly that way, or at that moment, but things like that could be very interesting. The end is that it's not so automatic, or that the MC doesn't assume everything Ann does without saying a word. They could take it into account for the following updates.

There were some problems on Android, such as lag, but it doesn't detract from the game.

As for popularity, I think the F95 community should give a little more importance cuz the game deserves it, and plus leaving a vote/like costs nothing.

All my support to the development team cuz they're doing a great job.

The game is still fairly new at this point but I'm impressed. Excellent renders, amazing UI, decent writing. Pacing is good - doesn't take too long unlike certain games on this site. Corruption and NTR fans alike will find this to be a gem.

Underrated game. I hope it gets much more attention because it deserves it.

Great girls, choices and game design overall already in 0.4. I am looking forward to see how this game unfolds in the future.

Damn...that game is great. If you into swinging and ntr I guess you have to play it The story is very interesting...I was never sure what will happen next . In my mind it is good timing that the choices you do have effect quite close.

Looking forward for the next update

Not bad. The characters are kind of basic and at times the dialogue is just daft. Like during truth or dare if you say truth Joey asks if you are jealous of his lifestyle? That's really weird, he is the same dude he just is working out. What kind of question is that? Seemed out of place unless Joey was intending to be a dick or something.

The girls are pretty cute, nothing mindblowing. Being able to choose from what it looks like, an NTR and cheating route or not is very nice although it feels like the game wants you to go the NTR route if that makes sense. I hope there is no forced cheating in the game. Not sure how others feel but I can't help but feel guilty especially to a nice and naive girl like Ann.

So far, the game doesn't really have anything special going for it which is why I rated it a 3. I think given some more updates, some polishing, and perhaps a bit better of a goal, this game can really improve.

Review based on v0.3:

Otherworldly amazing art, the models are different and very well posed, all scenes so far seem to have a lot of care taken into them, short on e-content so far but it is forgiven. Story is just starting to get really going but have been built up nicely too now. A bit short on content for each update, but with renders like this I totally understand. Don't know what more I could say other than, that you should most definitely check this one out!

This game has a huge amount of potential. The story, while is pretty mediocre in my personal opinion, the artwork however is quite interesting (and very pretty and unique). Honestly, I think everyone should try this game, but keep in mind that it's more of a "demo" than a proper game as of this moment (0.2).

A pretty much straight forward story, you can either chase a shy girl or chase a your friends girlfriend whom has no trouble sleeping around. Nice renders but no scenes at the moment. The game is surprisingly stable for a unity engine game and I have to say the girl renders do look quite nice. Nice choice and consequences in the game.

Rating as of release 0.2.
It isn't a large game yet, but it looks really good thus far. There are some fun characters and some really cute models! I'm really looking forward to the progress on this game.

My Rating of [v0.2] is:

Pros:
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Active Play
+ Beautiful Girls
+ Nice Story

Cons:
- Short Gameplay

Conclusion:

The Game is going good,although it is still pretty short, but I love the direction it is leading too, I believe there will be lots of cheating and swinging going on here soon.
If this will continue then count me in.

My Advisory:
Worth the Download.

After playing the first couple of updates, I realized that this game isn't for me, for various reasons. I didn't realize the game would contain fetishes like swinging/sharing and that's not my thing... but for those who don't mind it's a solid game with decent enough writing (occasionally a bit dull), cute girls, and average renders. My only real criticism is that the girls personalities are slightly annoying... not my favorite in the world but most can look past it and maybe they will grow on you over time.

I wish the dev all the luck in the world and recommend others check it out and decide for themselves... as there's definitely something worth looking at here.