VN Others Long Story Short [v0.10a1] [TTrickGames]

[La Dani]

I have a story outline and dialogues... but working in Daz bores me to tears.

Plot of your story?
a little spoiler.

 

[baka]

Do you understand the power of this game ?
If you feel yourself ashamed for the story, it means the writing is great.

its not really that.
since the first day with Ann I hoped for a corrupting-girlfriend route.
that means they actually get together romantically. here its like "hey, I will make u into a slut" route
that is quite shallow. sure, its cute and hot, but still shallow.
the last scene with Chris show this. its like the Mc is the guest. Ann & Mc are barely friends.
at least in the love-route theres more of that.
as wrote Pr0GamerJohnny, if that how we gonna play, the next thing is a cumdump whore. and is that hot? not really.
that is why I avoid Vanessa as well. its just sex and shes a total slut. but if u like that kind of story, good for u.
I like eroticism and emotions and something the Mc should explore together with the girls.
but right now Ann is starting to be like Vanessa, and its not cute.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Alex and Emily, best girls of this game IMO. Put Anna in a box and make sure it lands in Timbuktu. I'm tired of seeing her in every single update.

100%. Ttrick could accidentally lose the duf model files for vanessa and ann and be forced to make a game going forward with only Emily and Alex and I would be over the moon.

 

[La Dani]

its not really that.
since the first day with Ann I hoped for a corrupting-girlfriend route.
that means they actually get together romantically. here its like "hey, I will make u into a slut" route
that is quite shallow. sure, its cute and hot, but still shallow.
the last scene with Chris show this. its like the Mc is the guest. Ann & Mc are barely friends.
at least in the love-route theres more of that.
as wrote Pr0GamerJohnny, if that how we gonna play, the next thing is a cumdump whore. and is that hot? not really.
that is why I avoid Vanessa as well. its just sex and shes a total slut. but if u like that kind of story, good for u.
I like eroticism and emotions and something the Mc should explore together with the girls.
but right now Ann is starting to be like Vanessa, and its not cute.

I agree. A cumdump slut is not the better route. But in a cuck relationship is what happens to the hubbie, the hotwife fuck with the bull her best sex.
I am playing a route where Ann is an exhibitionist and she likes to play some spicy game.

 

[Joshy92]

Would you be offended your beloved cucked you with another girl instead?

No I wouldn't.
In fact I would love it if Ann cucked me with Vanessa.

 

[Joshy92]

I agree with Baka a little.

The sharing stuff is hot and some of the best I have ever seen.
But I feel like the mc isn't treating Ann romantically enough.

He should do something nice for her like take her out on a romantic date or something
Just because it's a corruption path doesn't mean he can't love his girlfriend imo.

 

[Dessolos]

I agree with Baka a little.

The sharing stuff is hot and some of the best I have ever seen.
But I feel like the mc isn't treating Ann romantically enough.

He should do something nice for her like take her out on a romantic date or something
Just because it's a corruption path doesn't mean he can't love his girlfriend imo.

Honestly I think this on both paths maybe I don't recall the love path that well. But if I recall everything correctly I thought it got less romantic once they had sex as well.

 

[Joshy92]

Honestly I think this on both paths maybe I don't recall the love path that well. But if I recall everything correctly I thought it got less romantic once they had sex as well.

Hmm I don't know about the love path I haven't played it in a long time.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

Hmm I don't know about the love path I haven't played it in a long time.

Why not? It's so romantic.

 

[Joshy92]

Why not? It's so romantic.

I usually don't like to do multiple playthrough while a game is ongoing.
But I'll be doing her love route once it comes to steam.

Also I have a question bro
Is it considered the corruption path if Ann goes to college and we let Chris get her number?

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

I usually don't like to do multiple playthrough while a game is ongoing.
But I'll be doing her love route once it comes to steam.

Also I have a question bro
Is it considered the corruption path if Ann goes to college and we let Chris get her number?

At this time, no. Not sure if that will change in the future.

The only way to get corrupted Ann is to get on her Hate route, telling her she should change when chatting with her at the pub, or reaching 9 corruption points or higher.

 

[Joshy92]

At this time, no. Not sure if that will change in the future.

The only way to get corrupted Ann is to get on her Hate route, telling her she should change when chatting with her at the pub, or reaching 9 corruption points or higher.

That's interesting.
I always thought letting Chris get her number started the corruption path.
I thought sharing was tied to that path as well.

I think I'll like the path where we let her & Chris get together while she is at college.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

I think I'll like the path where we let her & Chris get together while she is at college.

Yeah, I think you'll enjoy Ann's cheatscapades.

 

[Joshy92]

Yeah, I think you'll enjoy Ann's cheatscapades.

Haha
I do think if Ann does cheat it will be mostly on the college path.

I just like the thought of sharing her while she keeps her innocence so to speak.

 

[Dessolos]

hmmm this convo makes me think I need to play the sharing path in a different way next time cause I thought she only goes to college on the love path but from this convo im thinking now it's related to if you tell Ann to change or not.

 

[Joshy92]

hmmm this convo makes me think I need to play the sharing path in a different way next time cause I thought she only goes to college on the love path but from this convo im thinking now it's related to if you tell Ann to change or not.

Yeah I always thought in order to share Ann we have to be on her corruption path.
But if we can also do it on her love path I might make that my main save when i restart the game.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

hmmm this convo makes me think I need to play the sharing path in a different way next time cause I thought she only goes to college on the love path but from this convo im thinking now it's related to if you tell Ann to change or not.

Yeah I always thought in order to share Ann we have to be on her corruption path.
But if we can also do it on her love path I might make that my main save when i restart the game.

There's not much right now on this path, but you see hints of it when you see Chris with Ann at the library. And then on your date with her on the Ferris wheel, the conversation about Chris comes up that he's more than a friend.

 

[Joshy92]

There's not much right now on this path, but you see hints of it when you see Chris with Ann at the library. And then on your date with her on the Ferris wheel, the conversation about Chris comes up that he's more than a friend.

I remember that library scene it was really awesome.
The sexual tension was great.
I just didn't know if that storyline would continue or not.

I do really like the thought of sharing Ann without her acting like she does on the corruption path.

 

[suckedinto]

here's hoping for more creampie/cum kisses from Ann and hopefully vanessa in the next update <3

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

here's hoping for more creampie/cum kisses from Ann and hopefully vanessa in the next update <3

oh, hello there New Joshy.