VN Others Long Story Short [v0.10a1] [TTrickGames]

[Rob_31415926]

Yeah this is a common issue with "corruption" themed games. The main point of corrupting someone is the gradual loss of interest. If that loss of innocence happens like starting a lawn-mower, all that tension is released rapidly and the transition period is completely bypassed. Gradual exposure to more and more sexually deviant acts would be preferred. Also the mindset change needs to be immersive. Very few can pull off corruption in a satisfactory manner.

Agreed.

There are definitely balance issues to consider however...Go too slow and you lose interest from you audience (and AVN fans tend to be on the impatient side). I've also seen other AVNs that dragged things out way too long.

A Harem type game with one or two 'slower' options might be the best balance there....In LSS terms that could have been Ann exploring more slowly, while the MC gets lots of (kinky, perverted) action with the other girls in order to keep interest levels up....but clearly the creator didn't choose that route, and the fact that we're all here talking about the game shows he didn't do badly with his game choices.

 

[JaszMan]

I've always thought the Ann corruption path is a bit odd.

Sweet, innocent, intelligent girl who gets a bit of dick and goes completely off the rails in a relatively short time (it's not clear how long, but maybe a week or two)...Huh?

OK, it's an AVN, so things move fast and all, but that's going from 0-100 in corruption VERY fast. In reality that's only likely to happen if there were serious outside events pushing her, like some major trauma. To be honest, even her 'innocent' route is a bit quick (but not unrealistically so).

Personally, I think a lot of the corruption path should have been given to Alex....Her newfound insta fame (which she described as like an addiction) being that extra push she needed along the road to corruption (not trauma per se, but...), and a career in acting being less of a radical change from her 'influencer' career. It'd also balance out the story between the girls better.

I do not mind it, I Do like the whole corrupting and all,yet I also like the idea of Changing Van the complete opposite of that. LOL, make her legitimately become less inclined to swing and Fall for the MC or Take her boyfriend's relationship more serious, rather no more open relationship and more romantic. Having Ann become Corrupted and submissive yet Vannessa go in the opposite direction is kind of funny. Also wonder if you can Corrupt Emily or the complete opposite. In Royal Switch the parody on the Prince and Pauper I pretty much turned the bratty princess into a sub slut and the Pauper into a BadAss Queen Spy who thought she was ugly and now she knows she is a knockout and can use her new found confidence to her advantage. Ann getting Corruption route may seem off to some,perhaps if it was much more gradual and not so quick,more people would prefer it.

 

[JoSolo]

Soo i'm curious, how many routes are there and what are they? Been trying the Renpy remake and love it but i'm having a lot of trouble finding them all

 

[JaszMan]

It says Final!! Is the story already done?

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

It says Final!! Is the story already done?

Final release for v0.9!! 0.10 is already being worked on!!

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[JaszMan]

Final release for v0.9!! 0.10 is already being worked on!!

!!

Oh! good. Its a good story,usually When Final is listed, I think its been cut short.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

Oh! good. Its a good story,usually When Final is listed, I think its been cut short.

When a game is completed, it will have the Completed tag next to its name:

 

[ffive]

Oh! good. Its a good story,usually When Final is listed, I think its been cut short.

abandoned "Long Story Cut Short"

(fortunately, "final" often enough refers just to most recent installment, with some devs doing multiple releases of earch)

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Merry Christmas to whoever celebrates!

Happy holidays to all my supporters who celebrate!



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[Joshy92]

Alex going to cuck me with a reindeer

 

[ffive]

Alex going to cuck me with a reindeer

Don't forget the snowman. His carrot is already more than ready to strike.

 

[intrigan]

I don't get it. All the time the same ending, Ann's hate path ore any other way. I mean, it's inevitable. There is no fucking walkthrough, only bla-bla-bla. I'm realy sad about this game

 

[ffive]

I don't get it. All the time the same ending, Ann's hate path ore any other way. I mean, it's inevitable. There is no fucking walkthrough, only bla-bla-bla. I'm realy sad about this game

The trip with Ann to the movie shot is a canon event. Doesn't matter what path you're on.

(it's not the game ending, if the "final" in the name has confused you. It's just "final" iteration of most recent update. The game will continue past this point)

 

[EyeWish1]

Loved this game. The Girls look great and it's quite naughty. The animations for the most part were decent, although Vanessa didn't look so hot in blowjob scenes.

Also, the game didn't get off track, which happens in so many of these games. Fat Joe could have used more work as well, he looked too generic compared to some of the secondary characters, which I found odd. But overall I really enjoyed this one and look forward to any continuation of the story.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

The animations for the most part were decent, although Vanessa didn't look so hot in blowjob scenes.

I'm curious, what about the animations make them just "ok" for you? What about Vanessa's blowjobs didn't look so hot?

What would make them better? One thing I like about some of TTrick's animations is some of the realism. For example, when one of the girls is stroking MC... it's not a stiff movement (giggity)... rather, the shaft somewhat rotates and the skin moves as the girl's hand twists on it.

 

[EyeWish1]

I'm curious, what about the animations make them just "ok" for you? What about Vanessa's blowjobs didn't look so hot?

What would make them better? One thing I like about some of TTrick's animations is some of the realism. For example, when one of the girls is stroking MC... it's not a stiff movement (giggity)... rather, the shaft somewhat rotates and the skin moves as the girl's hand twists on it.

IMO, her face distorted a lot, way more than the other girls. Now, I wont profess to know how they make these animations, but I assume the issue had something to do with her particular facial features. Another issue I see often is when the Cocks are so big they simply don't fit in the girls mouth. At that point, I personally, would prefer a smaller cock so it makes the animation look better.

But you know what they say, opinions are like arseholes, and everyone has one. ;-)

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

Another issue I see often is when the Cocks are so big they simply don't fit in the girls mouth. At that point, I personally, would prefer a smaller cock so it makes the animation look better.

lol this I can get on board with haha

 

[reyna_cruz]

so is the story over or are there going be more updates

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

so is the story over or are there going be more updates

https://f95zone.to/threads/long-story-short-v0-9-final-ttrickgames.31351/post-15693788

 

[ffive]

Another issue I see often is when the Cocks are so big they simply don't fit in the girls mouth. At that point, I personally, would prefer a smaller cock so it makes the animation look better.

See, and people complain about Ann's bigger head, because they don't understand this just means she can take big cocks with less of a jaw stretch.