VN Others Long Story Short [v0.10a1] [TTrickGames]

[19Castiel23]

Another shitty episode of Ann Story Short. As long as this game continues to give so much importance to the character Ann, it will never get more subscribers. It will only be followed by people who like Ann to get fucked over and over again. Too bad, it ruins the potential of the beautiful game.

 

[Lord Bradley]

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Hey guys!

This week, I kept focusing on finishing the dialogues I've been struggling with for a while.

Not because I don’t know what to write, but because I’m trying to find all the loose ends and “talk about them” in one way or another.

Second (and this might be a spoiler if you haven’t played V0.9 yet) - in the Ann love path (with NTR), there’s a certain choice that leads to Ann sleeping with Chris behind the MC’s back.

V0.10 for the Ann love path, which includes that scene as well is supposed to start with the MC driving to pick her up from college and bring her back home. The issue is, logically, I should give the option to refuse or even break up with Ann because of what he saw on her webcam.

But doing that would split the path into two, which is something I don’t want to do (at least not yet).

Right now, I’m trying to come up with some dialogue that will make it work, and once I release the version, you can let me know how it feels. And if it’s dumb, I might rework it.

Also, the poll is ending in a few hours! On Patreon, Alex is in the lead. On SubscribeStar, Ann is leading. As of now, if you combine both, Ann is winning.

There are plenty of votes to come, and I bet every girl will have her time to shine

On a final note: I’ve had more time on my hands lately and have been working faster, so hopefully I can give you a release estimate soon (don’t quote me on that).

Ann cheating behind MC's back is extremely hot to me, so while I don't disagree with having an option to break up with her, I also hope it won't be the only outcome going forward. Ideally I would like the cheating to be initiated differently, it was kind of a dick move from MC to first dangle the carrot of Chris in front of her and encouraging her and then hitting her with a stick on ferris wheel acting all posessive and mean. But scene resulting from it was still hot. I think people who chose to watch her through webcam are more likely ones enjoying it than the ones who wanted some drama. I'm sure TTrick will find a way to resolve the dilemmas, I just hope there is a bit of content for everyone and lots of social media posts (I really enjoy them, but I have heard not many people do for some reason).

What would be really epic is if you play route of Ann love without starting Chris contact and then later at college her friends corrupt her into cheating. Maybe Ivy could talk about some concerns regarding flirting with Ann from some college boys and there MC could choose to "nip it in the bud" or "it's ok let her have fun i trust her".

I'm really curious how Emily will do at the Chris' bar and wether the choice to give Chris one of "your" girls will be explored as there would be lot of variables depending on which girl you chose.

 

[Joshy92]

I want to bust a nut on that glass as Vanessa watches me. Fuck she is so perfect.