Yeah no, sorry but that ending was obviously rushed and so incredibly dissapointing it genuinely ruined the rest of the game for me.
The game already had somevery low-quality assets and animations with almost no variety, and a ridiculous amount of the girls that appear have maybe 2 scenes in the whole game and some you can't even replay, but at least the general plot and the game mechanic of slaves-citizens-army were somewhat enjoyable and interesting to balance; enough to deseve maybe up to 3.5-4 stars average just for that and the potential of said plot alone.
And yet the finale wasted said potential and even ruined the few things it had going for it by giving its plot a nonsensical rushed ending to every plotline and making the entire balancing act between soldiers, citizens and slaves pointless and nearly irrelevant for the entirety of the finale.
It is clear that there is potential in both your writing and your sense of game mechanics within VNs, and I honestly did enjoy the "economic" system within the game and saw potential in the setup done in every storyline, both main and secondary. It's just a pity the actual sex scenes were underwhelming in both quality and quantity, and the lack of delivery in said storylines was the last nail in the coffin.
Once again I am sorry, but I genuinely can't give this more than 2 stars, and that's only because f95zone doesn't allow me to give it 1.5. I really wish you the best in your next project and hope you will not be forced to give it such a rushed ending.
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The game already had somevery low-quality assets and animations with almost no variety, and a ridiculous amount of the girls that appear have maybe 2 scenes in the whole game and some you can't even replay, but at least the general plot and the game mechanic of slaves-citizens-army were somewhat enjoyable and interesting to balance; enough to deseve maybe up to 3.5-4 stars average just for that and the potential of said plot alone.
And yet the finale wasted said potential and even ruined the few things it had going for it by giving its plot a nonsensical rushed ending to every plotline and making the entire balancing act between soldiers, citizens and slaves pointless and nearly irrelevant for the entirety of the finale.
It is clear that there is potential in both your writing and your sense of game mechanics within VNs, and I honestly did enjoy the "economic" system within the game and saw potential in the setup done in every storyline, both main and secondary. It's just a pity the actual sex scenes were underwhelming in both quality and quantity, and the lack of delivery in said storylines was the last nail in the coffin.
Once again I am sorry, but I genuinely can't give this more than 2 stars, and that's only because f95zone doesn't allow me to give it 1.5. I really wish you the best in your next project and hope you will not be forced to give it such a rushed ending.