VN Ren'Py Lost at Birth [Ch. 10 CE Part 1] [V19]

Blackjacks12 · Oct 28, 2022

can someone post the last news?

fremajl · Nov 2, 2022

Kailey is stunning. Hope this one keeps going at a decent pace.

buwamo · Nov 2, 2022

Blackjacks12 said:
can someone post the last news?

wards

CHAD-MAN · Nov 2, 2022

V19XX said:
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No offense but... get yourself a writer. This game deserves someone that can write good dialogue and flesh out the characters. There's good potential on this, especially as far some of the renders go, but damn the story is currently very boring and the dialogue flow makes everything feel a dread to read. Example, the MC is a horndog for young girls, literally swapped a "vice" and yet there's no indication whatsoever of this in 2 chapters. Yeah, sure... you can have an optional encounter with Cassidy, but it doesnt show enough... and the MC beating is beat on porn is not a good show-off too.

Dogorti · Nov 3, 2022

The Chaddest said:
No offense but... get yourself a writer. This game deserves someone that can write good dialogue and flesh out the characters. There's good potential on this, especially as far some of the renders go, but damn the story is currently very boring and the dialogue flow makes everything feel a dread to read. Example, the MC is a horndog for young girls, literally swapped a "vice" and yet there's no indication whatsoever of this in 2 chapters. Yeah, sure... you can have an optional encounter with Cassidy, but it doesnt show enough... and the MC beating is beat on porn is not a good show-off too.

To be the The Chaddest you cry a lot

sevensham · Nov 3, 2022

just be patient .... rather then be abandoned

CHAD-MAN · Nov 3, 2022

Dogorti said:
To be the The Chaddest you cry a lot

What do you mean? The way you wrote that, it implies I have to *cry a lot* to be the chaddest? No wonder this one is so highly-rated while being somewhat poor, if this is what the fanbase is about. I don't see it getting better, if you guys don't push for its improvement and rather drool on the renders.

BigDaddyDom · Nov 3, 2022

The Chaddest said:
No offense but... get yourself a writer. This game deserves someone that can write good dialogue and flesh out the characters. There's good potential on this, especially as far some of the renders go, but damn the story is currently very boring and the dialogue flow makes everything feel a dread to read. Example, the MC is a horndog for young girls, literally swapped a "vice" and yet there's no indication whatsoever of this in 2 chapters. Yeah, sure... you can have an optional encounter with Cassidy, but it doesnt show enough... and the MC beating is beat on porn is not a good show-off too.

Have got to disagree with you there. IMO L7Bear has done a great job with the overall story line, and with developing the characters. The daughter is also the main LI in the game, so that relationship and its tension has to be developed over time in order for the reward to be worth it. Believe me, I would love to see Kailee get fucked by Daddy sooner than later

but I'd be happy with some progress/lewding each update. I'm sure there will be more lewds of other characters in coming updates. This is more of a slow-burn type game though - sounds like you're into games that jump quickly into the action, so maybe it's not for you.

Shadow Lurker said:
The wife is super Narcissistic/Toxic, i would have had her kicked out if that kept up.

I have two words for you, "Hate fuck"

Dogorti · Nov 3, 2022

The Chaddest said:
What do you mean? The way you wrote that, it implies I have to *cry a lot* to be the chaddest? No wonder this one is so highly-rated while being somewhat poor, if this is what the fanbase is about. I don't see it getting better, if you guys don't push for its improvement and rather drool on the renders.

Come on I'm just messing with you. and by the way I have criticized games like SG and WIAB that have spectacular renders but even so I have had problems with the plot and the writing of some characters the same with sunchine love, for me in a game the renders It is not the most important thing, but this game seems to me to be well written at the moment, plus it only has two updates

CHAD-MAN · Nov 3, 2022

BigDaddyDom said:
Have got to disagree with you there. IMO L7Bear has done a great job with the overall story line, and with developing the characters. The daughter is also the main LI in the game, so that relationship and its tension has to be developed over time in order for the reward to be worth it. Believe me, I would love to see Kailee get fucked by Daddy sooner than later but I'd be happy with some progress/lewding each update. I'm sure there will be more lewds of other characters in coming updates. This is more of a slow-burn type game though - sounds like you're into games that jump quickly into the action, so maybe it's not for you.

Dogorti said:
Come on I'm just messing with you. and by the way I have criticized games like SG and WIAB that have spectacular renders but even so I have had problems with the plot and the writing of some characters the same with sunchine love, for me in a game the renders It is not the most important thing, but this game seems to me to be well written at the moment, plus it only has two updates

I respect both your opinions, but I do not agree. Its not well written. Its not about the slow-burn, its just dumb filler dialogue and there's clear indications the writer and the one making the renders are not totally on the same page where the story is at. Its only chapter 2 though. We'll see if they can make this work.

Aristos · Nov 5, 2022

The Chaddest said:
What do you mean? The way you wrote that, it implies I have to *cry a lot* to be the chaddest?

He copied the grammatical structure of his native language.
What he meant was: "For someone who calls himself The Chaddest, you do cry a lot."

AliceXxDawn · Nov 8, 2022

I can't believe how many negative nancy's there are in this thread complaining about this fine game. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the writing.

The amount of content, however.

BigDaddyDom · Nov 9, 2022

AliceXhakaII said:
I can't believe how many negative nancy's there are in this thread complaining about this fine game. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the writing.

The amount of content, however.

It's only at Chpt 2 though, still pretty early in development

sevensham · Nov 14, 2022

when new update will release?

pothb · Nov 14, 2022

space between the 2 releases is 5 ish months, so maybe in 2 more months.

Yngling · Nov 23, 2022

V19XX said:
Chapter 3 Early Access is now available for our early access supporters.

That's great!

Sorry to ask (but I can't support at the moment): when will the public release be?

easy_exit · Nov 26, 2022

Hero?

Yngling · Nov 26, 2022

For Chapter two, the difference between Early Access and Public Release was only 3 days...

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martaprzych · Nov 26, 2022

Yngling said:
For Chapter two, the difference between Early Access and Public Release was only 3 days...

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Im waiting too, but let him appreciate his patrons, they are paying, am i right?

bananabrown · Nov 26, 2022

Just finished chapter 3.

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