VN Ren'Py Lost at Birth [Ch. 10 CE Part 1] [V19]

[Juv3]

Why is there a 5 star review
The game has not started yet The story is normal
Renders good
No Planned tags
We don't know the direction of the game yet
Frankly, I don't understand the review Wait after two or three updates

 

[LazyBear29]

Great start so far. Renders are amazing and writing also very very good. One thing that worries me is fact how short it was but I hope new updates will be frequent and fast delivered.

 

[verzauberung]

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I know she's hot and all but believe me you don't want to kiss her, unless you want to taste cum and pee of a thousand guys.

Also dev, maybe give us a warning that the update is about to end and don't disable the roll back.

thanks for the warning brother
always hurts to add games with such good looking renders to ignore list, but best to do it early before getting invested into them and wasting time.

 

[mr.AwesomeGameTaste]

so,there are people who are bothered by the fact that a digital character has a high body count? lmao,f95 will never stop surprising me.

 

[Soundgfx]

so,there are people who are bothered by the fact that a digital character has a high body count? lmao,f95 will never stop surprising me.

it do be like that


altho I do agree the one detail about dating older men as a minor part was kinda disturbing - still people are more disturbed about her body count more than anything

 

[tiesthatbind]

One of the best parts of the game that this game is inspired by is the choices. Every sexual interaction and many non sexual interaction allow you to choose if you want to be dominant, neutral, or sumissive. You can choose to be a harsh dominating father or a loving one. I really feel this game's quality would be increased with more choices.

 

[Gazza011]

This game is going to do well. Well done dev, great start.

 

[d_pedestrian]

Cassidy might be a little on the extreme when it comes to sharing their fantasies and fetishes but I know a woman IRL that is somewhat like that and she is fun to be around. Personally, I enjoy Cassidy since she is just so open, carefree and willing to do my bidding while also being a person herself with her own likes and wants in life, not a zombie in another vanilla harem game... It might be early to say she is like that but that is the impression I get of her.

Personally I won't be able to have feelings for girls like her. Everytime I see her I'll get reminded of all the guys who came or peed on her face or mouth. There's no way she will be an LI for me. Maybe a fuck interest and that's it.

It's really hard for me to respect such girls and respect is very important before starting to feel something for someone. That's just me though. If there are girls like her I'm sure there are guys who can accept such girls.

 

[akiostein]

looks good nice rendering. looks like I will wait a little longer for this game to be completed.

 

[Tom10]

Awesome work ! Keep it up dev

 

[BigDaddyDom]

Great start to the game V19 and Theo!!! Was worth the wait.

The plot was more interesting/realistic than expected, and dialogue convincing. The interface is really slick and more stylish than I've seen with renpy. The pulsing bass of the music was a bit annoying, but easy to just turn off. to the 2 shout outs to Claire!

The renders overall were spectacular. The daughter Kailee's character and design is perfect and so cute - please DON'T change that or her personality! Hope you give her smaller/pink nipples versus the big pepperoni sized nips you used for the wife and your version of Claire Would totally ruin her teen look IMO. Speaking of that, maybe offer an option to choose her age?

The wife's story line is interesting too, even though MC doesn't love her, hopefully we get to fuck her anyway. Hopefully it's not too long before Kailee gets lewded in some way too.

 

[Amahl Farouk]

So you enjoyed a love interest that is sloppy seconds girl that like fucked the whole world since when she was a little girl and get's off from having cum and pee on her face and on top of that she just shares that like it's nothing? Good for you.

What is this world turning in to i swear. And you are a ntr fan right or cool with it so i'm not suprised.

Sluts fuck better than virgins

Nuff said

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Gave this game a try and I must say I was disappointed, I was looking forward to this one but man what a mess this is, or maybe not a mess (that's too harsh and unfair) but it leaves a lot and I mean a lot to be desired.

For those who haven't played it yet let me give you a run down of the characters.
So far the only likable character is Kailee, the MC is your typical pervert who acts like a virgin but is pushing 40,hes also a creep who watches incest porn and jerking off all the while talking to his daughter on the phone. Like what even? Is it really that hard to write the MC as a decent normal mature man? (really miss our fate now actually, the MC of that game on the good guy route was a decent dude actually)
Then theres Justine and Cassidy, supposedly two of the mian women of this game right? Well Justine is a drunk unsupportive wife who's always passed out and despite being attractive imo she is not desirable to anyone who isn't just looking to get their dick wet, and the same can be said for Cassidy, even more so actually cause she's ur typical slut now isn't she. been fucking older dudes since the age of 14,love being used as a cum dump and pissed on and overall much better suited as a pornstar than anything else...This is two of the games main women huh? Dispointing really. I found myself rejecting both her and the wife the moment I got the option to, well actually u can't reject the wife but even if you do choose to fuck her you can't because she's passed out drunk by the time MC gets to bed.(although you can fool around with her while she's passed out but why would anyone do that?)
The only thing I'm intrigued by is the development of Kailee's story with the MC and I don't want to judge too harshly seeing that it's the first release, I'm hoping for the best, but so far things aren't looking that good if I must be honest.

Good renders tho but yeah good luck with the game guys, I know there was a lot of work going into this, I wish I had more positive things to say about it tho but there's not much rn if any.

 

[Deleted member 3428287]

Gave this game a try and I must say I was disappointed, I was looking forward to this one but man what a mess this is, or maybe not a mess (that's too harsh and unfair) but it leaves a lot and I mean a lot to be desired.

For those who haven't played it yet let me give you a run down of the characters.
So far the only likable character is Kailee, the MC is your typical pervert who acts like a virgin but is pushing 40,hes also a creep who watches incest porn and jerking off all the while talking to his daughter on the phone. Like what even? Is it really that hard to write the MC as a decent normal mature man? (really miss our fate now actually, the MC of that game on the good guy route was a decent dude actually)
Then theres Justine and Cassidy, supposedly two of the mian women of this game right? Well Justine is a drunk unsupportive wife who's always passed out and despite being attractive imo she is not desirable to anyone who isn't just looking to get their dick wet, and the same can be said for Cassidy, even more so actually cause she's ur typical slut now isn't she. been fucking older dudes since the age of 14,love being used as a cum dump and pissed on and overall much better suited as a pornstar than anything else...This is two of the games main women huh? Dispointing really. I found myself rejecting both her and the wife the moment I got the option to, well actually u can't reject the wife but even if you do choose to fuck her you can't because she's passed out drunk by the time MC gets to bed.(although you can fool around with her while she's passed out but why would anyone do that?)
The only thing I'm intrigued by is the development of Kailee's story with the MC and I don't want to judge too harshly seeing that it's the first release, I'm hoping for the best, but so far things aren't looking that good if I must be honest.

Good renders tho but yeah good luck with the game guys, I know there was a lot of work going into this, I wish I had more positive things to say about it tho but there's not much rn if any.

this vn does indeed have a damaged goods theme to it, but i don't think that's necessarily bad. I mean it's bad if you're looking for romantic stuff, but when it comes to the psychological aspect it could be interesting.

The wife obviously had something traumatic happen to her so she started drinking(probably raped), she probably is frigid or masochistic. Cassidy has daddy issues, she'll start falling in love with the mc if he makes her feel protected etc

 

[neronwtf]

, and the same can be said for Cassidy, even more so actually cause she's ur typical slut now isn't she

I think her character allow the devs to have a "sex" scene, because with your wife you're just helping her having an orgasm. And then she will become a fuck buddy or fall in love as drooopy said

As for MC's personality, spot on. It's already a trope right now and most people don't seem to bother too much.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

The wife obviously had something traumatic happen to her so she started drinking(probably raped), she probably is frigid or masochistic. Cassidy has daddy issues, she'll start falling in love with the mc if he makes her feel protected etc

Unfortunately that's not the case, see the MC and Justine has been drinking since college, in fact that's pretty much all they did it seems, so their marriage was heading for disaster from the beginning. The MC decided to quit drinking for the sake of the marriage but the wife never did.

As for Cassidy, daddy isues or not she has lost all appeal as an LI, a fuck buddy sure but definitely not an LI. Literally her first scene in the game she's already telling the MC how much she loves drinking cum and get cummed and pissed on. one can assume she's been doing that probably before she was even legal given the fact that she's been fucking old dudes since she was 14. But yeah As I said perfect for a pornstar and nothing else, at least that's my opinion on her

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

I think her character allow the devs to have a "sex" scene, because with your wife you're just helping her having an orgasm. And then she will become a fuck buddy or fall in love as drooopy said

As for MC's personality, spot on. It's already a trope right now and most people don't seem to bother too much.

I agree but usually you would then use a throw away character in that role, perhaps a side character but if you using a potential LI in that position especially giving her the cum slut character you taking all appeal away from her as an Li.
Darn good Fi tho.

Seriously that's a trope now? I mean why? Fuck shits just getting worse eyy

 

[Ragnar]

Not every woman in the game is a 40 years old virgin waiting for the MC to get dicked 0/10 Would not recommend

Seriously idk if the office slut is a LI like in vanilla vns but even if she's one of the Lis just say no to her if you don't want to see her content.
The game is about Not-Claire anyways and I hope the dev stick to his plans for the abandoned remake. Several routes ranging from pure love route to extreme corruption.

 

[Raziel_8]

Unfortunately that's not the case, see the MC and Justine has been drinking since college, in fact that's pretty much all they did it seems, so their marriage was heading for disaster from the beginning. The MC decided to quit drinking for the sake of the marriage but the wife never did.

I really wonder how the wife can even have a job, insurance iirc.
From what the MC says he can't even remember when she was sober the last time...and she doesn't even know that the MC stopped drinking years ago.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

I really wonder how the wife can even have a job, insurance iirc.
From what the MC says he can't even remember when she was sober the last time...and she doesn't even know that the MC stopped drinking years ago.

Most likely sponging off of the MC lol
There's a lot of things she's oblivious to because of her constant state of intoxication, like him cheating on her for example, it seems like he's been doing that for a while now.i do hope there will be proper character development with her tho. If done right she good have a good character arc and I think Kailee could influence that... after she gets over the jealousy of course.