VN Ren'Py Lost at Birth [Ch. 10 CE Part 1] [V19]

[neronwtf]

Not bad.

But you'd think a 40 year old married man would know how to act like...a 40 yo married man. He's already a serial cheater which means wife at least suspects him. And that dude brings a young blonde to his wife's home, not telling her shit, then cleaning out her dead relatives stuff like it was garbage to accommodate her, right before he has her sleeping on his dick for his wife to see.. And after all that he is acting like it was a minor thing, like not cleaning the dishes or something. I will cook for her and everything will be ok. He is lucky he still has a couch to sleep on.

Protag is already flawed with all the sex addiction and serial cheating shit. No need to actually make him a drooling retard on top of all that.

Let's say that his wife isn't better either. I get that she's a woman "marking her territory", but telling this sexual history with such details to a girl, that already told her that she isn't a slut, doesn't make her a best person either.

Having said this, I agree with you that MC's personality doesn't relate to his age. He's very immature, but is way better that most of MC's around.

Until now, the younger one is the wiser. Let's hope that the most probable corruption path won't change that. Maybe as other pointed out she will be the glue to this couple and in the end it will be a triangle.

 

[Tkoyama]

Man, I almost forgot about this game! The renders are gorgeous and it would be even better if there were some animations! I'm waiting for the next update.

 

[Nulldev]

Blondie is absolute babe.
But the MC and the wife is seriously braindeads. You want to tell me that for weeks(?), the MC didn't blurted out anytime, that "Hey honey, it's funny maybe I have a child?" and so unfazed that the wife didn't notice anything? If they so distant why do they live together?

 

[Caranthir]

Really like this one so far, a lot of promise here.
Hoping it will have different routes at some point, like OF had.

 

[Jackreacher8197]

Don't know if its just me but the emotions of these characters portrayed by their dialogues don't seem to reflect their facial expression.
I mean justine is basically smiling almost everytime when she is angry af with MC lol, feels sadistic tbh!

 

[Canto Forte]

These characters run from their troubles, hide or kill their emotions for the sake of smoldering cool stale looks and all of them pretend their turd life situation is dandy when it is stupid and sad and annoying.

Don't know if its just me but the emotions of these characters portrayed by their dialogues don't seem to reflect their facial expression.
I mean justine is basically similing almost everytime when she is angry af with MC lol, feels sadistic tbh!

 

[MoarDakka123]

Don't know if its just me but the emotions of these characters portrayed by their dialogues don't seem to reflect their facial expression.
I mean justine is basically similing almost everytime when she is angry af with MC lol, feels sadistic tbh!

Pretty sure that's intentional, she's being catty like a cheerleader. Real Mean Girls shit.

 

[QaliberDK]

I do (mostly) like it so far, good setup, renders are nice enough, writing ain't half bad either.
However, as sweet as the daughter is, the MC is rather careless and scatterbrained and
the wife is an obnoxious cunt. I'm guessing things will be explained/become clearer as the
story evolves.

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I'm interested to see where the story is going, so far it's equally interesting and infuriating

 

[sergesan]

all i learned here is that i should wait for a couple of updates more...good luck till then....

 

[AL.d]

Pretty solid start, though the wife is a bit over the top, she comes in *STRONG* to the MC and the daughter. But so far, it's a good start, definitely feels like it'll be a slow burn though (which is ok, if the story, character development and dialogue is done well enough).

Yeah, when she walked in on her husband having a young blond (who's obviously in heat) on his dick, she did seem to come a bit strong. Especially when she saw he had thrown her family's stuff, from a room in her own house, to put the blond there without asking. And decided giving him a hot bj was a punishment for all that. What a stuck up bitch indeed. /s

 

[AL.d]

Let's say that his wife isn't better either. I get that she's a woman "marking her territory", but telling this sexual history with such details to a girl, that already told her that she isn't a slut, doesn't make her a best person either.

Having said this, I agree with you that MC's personality doesn't relate to his age. He's very immature, but is way better that most of MC's around.

Until now, the younger one is the wiser. Let's hope that the most probable corruption path won't change that. Maybe as other pointed out she will be the glue to this couple and in the end it will be a triangle.

I don't really see the wise part for the young one. It's already established she has zero street smarts from the party story and her previous living situation. And after she goes to a married man's house and gets a perfectly justified grilling from the wife, who sensed she's a virgin in heat, she does exactly what she was accused of. On the first day!

It's like every major character in this, is a trainwreck. That does make it interesting I guess. For me, the best character so far was the cumslut at work. She knows what she wants (cum ) and is pretty honest about the fact.

 

[CamaroFan432]

Here my feedback for this game up until now, it's also my posted review:

In my opinion a very good story up until now (Chapter 2) with a self-aware MC in the middle of his life. The female characters are very fine looking ladies with quite a variety. You have the at least somewhat jealous wife, the "girl from next door and still shy" virgin daughter ("probably" ) and the coworker with hots for you (and maybe being too slutty for her own sake). So, for everyone something. Luckily there is no oversized properties ("baseball bat" penis, "balloon or zeppelin" breasts which ignore gravity and "horsesized" behinds). The render quality is very good, the lightning fits up until now to some degree (the renders that are supposed to be at night have sadly the same lightning as the day shots. That's the point I have to deduct. Otherwise I like the VN and would like to see much, much more until it gets finished! Keep up the good work!

 

[Yaaai]

thanks

 

[neronwtf]

I don't really see the wise part for the young one. It's already established she has zero street smarts from the party story and her previous living situation. And after she goes to a married man's house and gets a perfectly justified grilling from the wife, who sensed she's a virgin in heat, she does exactly what she was accused of. On the first day!

It's like every major character in this, is a trainwreck. That does make it interesting I guess. For me, the best character so far was the cumslut at work. She knows what she wants (cum ) and is pretty honest about the fact.

Wise in the way that she could escalate things with the wife, because she's constantly demeaned by her and deep down she's convinced that she's MC's daughter and no some skank. She could act as a raged teenager, but opts for an adult approach, as a peacemaker. But, yes, both adults aren't the best parental figure and the work slut is the more coherent one.

 

[Hadley]

Good Game, reminds me of Our Fate which was sadly abandoned.

 

[AL.d]

Wise in the way that she could escalate things with the wife, because she's constantly demeaned by her and deep down she's convinced that she's MC's daughter and no some skank. She could act as a raged teenager, but opts for an adult approach, as a peacemaker. But, yes, both adults aren't the best parental figure and the work slut is the more coherent one.

Ιt's not demeaning if she ends up doing it. It's just truth. She initiated the kissing, essentially confirming wife's distrust. Swapping spit with your married daddy, first day as a guest in his wife's house, does seem pretty skanky to be honest.

And not sure acting like a raged teen IN someone's else's home would lead her anywhere but back on the streets. It's wife's house, not MC's. She could have easily been kicked out (with or without daddy), left to escalate things in a nearby alley's cardboard box.

That's what makes the MC character so frustrating to me. The game tells us he doesn't really hold any cards, unlike his wife and yet he acts with the subtlety of a boar. Maybe there are still things we don't know since it's still early

 

[MECKATZER]

On itch.io you can get a Complete Edition. Anyone knows whats the difference to the public version?

 

[ImperialD]

But it's Eva Green, I'll allow it

who cares if you allow it ... for sure i don't

 

[intrigan]

I bet there will be a hot threesome in this game. At least I hope so.))

 

[poopisthebest]

Great game but I gotta say something..

I really dislike the wife.. I can see being mad but she takes it even further by treating d like shit which is a red flag for me.