VN Ren'Py Lost at Birth [Ch. 9 CE Part 2] [V19]

[GypsyBastard]

I hope there's an option to try and help the wife and not just leave her in what ever misery she's going through while the MC bangs everything with a pulse. It would be cool if the wife could find a reason to better herself through the introduction of new elements in her life.

I would like there to be a dual love route between the wife Justine and your daughter Kailey. The wife can't have children and lost family which probably made her alcoholism worse, by introducing the mc daughter into their life they might kickstart some form of rehabilitation and get a kind of surrogate family thing going, maybe even have the wife see Kailey as almost their own daughter... that the mc and Justine both have a fucked up sexual relationship with, because this is a porn game centered around your long lost daughter and I be damned if we don't dip our tip into some of those elements.

 

[sevensham]

when will the new update be released?

 

[godoff95]

Next year

 

[Gagge89]

Next year?

 

[V19XX]

Next year?

I think he's trying to be funny. I'm waiting for some stuff to keep going so I will be able to say when the new chapter may be released. I can't say much at the moment but certainly not that long.
I'm gonna upload some extras to Patreon and Subscribestar "today" if you are interested.

 

[shynos]

Very,Very good

 

[miles_fapper]

Any other games with godly graphics like this one?

 

[Tatsuya25]

Come on man, shoot us hard with a new update , 400 renders each 2 months is the promedie around here for devs , add to it 2 simple routes corruption and romance, should suffice good enough

Focus is your first game so main goal is to Do it.

I like so much the old plot , and the new one is good too, only goo forward. am waiting for update 0.5 or so
as bet many around here.

Try to be solid and true the most you can with the develope and so , will get you some suporters more.

 

[Dogorti]

Come on man, shoot us hard with a new update , 400 renders each 2 months is the promedie around here for devs , add to it 2 simple routes corruption and romance, should suffice good enough

Focus is your first game so main goal is to Do it.

I like so much the old plot , and the new one is good too, only goo forward. am waiting for update 0.5 or so
as bet many around here.

Try to be solid and true the most you can with the develope and so , will get you some suporters more.

Give me the names of the games you play that are updated every 2 months with this render quality, most devs say it will take that long but many take 3 or 4 months to get just 300 renders, and others do only one update per year to make them longer

 

[Blackjacks12]

can someone post the last news?

 

[fremajl]

Kailey is stunning. Hope this one keeps going at a decent pace.

 

[buwamo]

can someone post the last news?

wards

 

[CHAD-MAN]

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No offense but... get yourself a writer. This game deserves someone that can write good dialogue and flesh out the characters. There's good potential on this, especially as far some of the renders go, but damn the story is currently very boring and the dialogue flow makes everything feel a dread to read. Example, the MC is a horndog for young girls, literally swapped a "vice" and yet there's no indication whatsoever of this in 2 chapters. Yeah, sure... you can have an optional encounter with Cassidy, but it doesnt show enough... and the MC beating is beat on porn is not a good show-off too.

 

[Dogorti]

No offense but... get yourself a writer. This game deserves someone that can write good dialogue and flesh out the characters. There's good potential on this, especially as far some of the renders go, but damn the story is currently very boring and the dialogue flow makes everything feel a dread to read. Example, the MC is a horndog for young girls, literally swapped a "vice" and yet there's no indication whatsoever of this in 2 chapters. Yeah, sure... you can have an optional encounter with Cassidy, but it doesnt show enough... and the MC beating is beat on porn is not a good show-off too.

To be the The Chaddest you cry a lot

 

[sevensham]

just be patient .... rather then be abandoned

 

[CHAD-MAN]

To be the The Chaddest you cry a lot

What do you mean? The way you wrote that, it implies I have to *cry a lot* to be the chaddest? No wonder this one is so highly-rated while being somewhat poor, if this is what the fanbase is about. I don't see it getting better, if you guys don't push for its improvement and rather drool on the renders.

 

[BigDaddyDom]

No offense but... get yourself a writer. This game deserves someone that can write good dialogue and flesh out the characters. There's good potential on this, especially as far some of the renders go, but damn the story is currently very boring and the dialogue flow makes everything feel a dread to read. Example, the MC is a horndog for young girls, literally swapped a "vice" and yet there's no indication whatsoever of this in 2 chapters. Yeah, sure... you can have an optional encounter with Cassidy, but it doesnt show enough... and the MC beating is beat on porn is not a good show-off too.

Have got to disagree with you there. IMO L7Bear has done a great job with the overall story line, and with developing the characters. The daughter is also the main LI in the game, so that relationship and its tension has to be developed over time in order for the reward to be worth it. Believe me, I would love to see Kailee get fucked by Daddy sooner than later but I'd be happy with some progress/lewding each update. I'm sure there will be more lewds of other characters in coming updates. This is more of a slow-burn type game though - sounds like you're into games that jump quickly into the action, so maybe it's not for you.

The wife is super Narcissistic/Toxic, i would have had her kicked out if that kept up.

I have two words for you, "Hate fuck"

 

[Dogorti]

What do you mean? The way you wrote that, it implies I have to *cry a lot* to be the chaddest? No wonder this one is so highly-rated while being somewhat poor, if this is what the fanbase is about. I don't see it getting better, if you guys don't push for its improvement and rather drool on the renders.

Come on I'm just messing with you. and by the way I have criticized games like SG and WIAB that have spectacular renders but even so I have had problems with the plot and the writing of some characters the same with sunchine love, for me in a game the renders It is not the most important thing, but this game seems to me to be well written at the moment, plus it only has two updates

 

[CHAD-MAN]

Have got to disagree with you there. IMO L7Bear has done a great job with the overall story line, and with developing the characters. The daughter is also the main LI in the game, so that relationship and its tension has to be developed over time in order for the reward to be worth it. Believe me, I would love to see Kailee get fucked by Daddy sooner than later but I'd be happy with some progress/lewding each update. I'm sure there will be more lewds of other characters in coming updates. This is more of a slow-burn type game though - sounds like you're into games that jump quickly into the action, so maybe it's not for you.

Come on I'm just messing with you. and by the way I have criticized games like SG and WIAB that have spectacular renders but even so I have had problems with the plot and the writing of some characters the same with sunchine love, for me in a game the renders It is not the most important thing, but this game seems to me to be well written at the moment, plus it only has two updates

I respect both your opinions, but I do not agree. Its not well written. Its not about the slow-burn, its just dumb filler dialogue and there's clear indications the writer and the one making the renders are not totally on the same page where the story is at. Its only chapter 2 though. We'll see if they can make this work.

 

[Aristos]

What do you mean? The way you wrote that, it implies I have to *cry a lot* to be the chaddest?

He copied the grammatical structure of his native language.
What he meant was: "For someone who calls himself The Chaddest, you do cry a lot."