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It's the same story base in both versions so the new version it's the deffinitive one. Also to be clear, there will be paths that we call jokingly "pacifist" that will be straight up vanilla and the mystery and thriller will be the main themes. So if you aren't interested in heavy kinks you won't have any problem at all.
Great! Oh buddy, I am so into dark kinks and total corruption, especially playing as a FMC. So, I challenge you to, let's get our girl as dirty and nasty as possible, lol. (can she have a doggy, or do p/t work at a stable?, wink-wink). I'm a stats kind of guy and would love to see detailed stats of her corruption. Best of luck with your game.
 

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Hey, guys. Been cooking up something new that I'd like to share with all of you, so hope you like it! Oh, and remember: Feedback is always welcome :giggle:



Falling in a Flash

It started with a look, the kind that doesn’t need words to express itself.

I saw you across the room, and your eyes met mine with quite the intensity. It was like you were searching for something in me, or perhaps some warmth. Either way, I could feel myself drawn to you.

We ended up in the same corner of the room sooner rather than later, close enough that our arms almost touched. I felt my nerves starting to build up with anticipation, and when I tried to utter my first words, you looked me straight in the eye and smiled. It swooped me off my feet.

It was easier that way, comfortable. Beneath the surface, there was this undeniable current pulling us closer, and I let it be.

You didn’t resist either, I noticed.

At some point, the party faded into the background. Music, voices, and lights became distant, and what mattered was the space between us.

We knew there was something called chemistry working in our favor when our fingers brushed. We both turned suddenly, but no words were needed when, before saying anything, you bit your lower lip and shamelessly checked me out.

A devilish glint appeared in your eyes as you sized up the moment, and I knew you were about to make your move.

"Wanna go somewhere quieter?" you said, and the ice melted into a sweet aphrodisiac called instant attraction.

It wasn't long before I was following you around. We both understood each other in a language only spoken by those who seek connections. Still, there was no rushing, only slow, deliberate movements.

We wanted a place to enjoy ourselves, and when we found it, we couldn’t keep our hands off each other. We wanted everything, and we needed it soon.

Your soft lips and curious tongue dancing inside my mouth left me needy, though our bodies pressed together allowed me to trail small kisses down your neck. Our passionate make-out session synchronized our breaths, deafening our ears with panting sounds and quiet grunts, and arousing something wild and untamed within our hearts.

It wasn’t long before we were both aching for more.

My strong urge to keep going met its answer when I felt you lift your arms. You took off your shirt, and thus, piece by piece, our clothes came off to reveal our deepest secrets, igniting passions while lips reunited and gained momentum.

Skin met skin, lips melted, and needs heightened. Suddenly, the room felt smaller, hotter, like the walls had moved in to keep the moment steamy and private. You could feel my heartbeat, or maybe it was yours. It didn’t matter anymore because what followed transcended mere desire; it became a craving for connection.

Two people giving into something neither of them had planned, but both had been craving for since the start meant we were making no promises, no expectations, and yet I felt like the warmth of our bodies fusing into pleasure told another story.

Quiet moans went lost in the dark, and a sense of perfect belonging permeated the atmosphere as my fingers explored the entire shape of your body. Small yesses and pleases started to fill my soul with want, and I couldn't bear it any longer when your hands began to map my lower body.

Heat waves came over me as your mouth, guided by nothing but fire, made me more eager than ever. From my lips escaped a plea way more sincere than any prayer, while juicy lips full of life and subtle matte lipstick, covered in what would be my saliva, were slowly lowering themselves around me.

Damn, heaven sure was warm.

A whole new world flashed before my eyes, and I learned how vocal I could get. You took pride in your skills, like you knew what they were doing to me, but my own kicked in then, and I gently stopped you to make you stand while I got on my knees. It was my time to show you what paradise was all about, and I was no newbie at this.

I wanted to make you scream, and it felt amazing realizing you weren't ready when my lips met yours. Moist, soft, and perfect. You were what I wanted and more, and your fingers tangled through my hair made me think I wasn't so bad at slowly opening you up and getting you used to my tongue.

I planned to keep going until your knees gave out, yet before I could accomplish my goal, I felt myself pulled into another kind of passionate mouth-to-mouth. The particular need that neither of us could avoid any longer was urging us to keep going, and I was aching to follow you with it until the end.

Consequently, as you'd expect of two young souls, we danced the devil’s tango at full force.

Your moans were demands in my ears. I was in ecstasy inside your warmth, and my mind went blank the moment you snatched away my lips again. You taught me how to kiss as if there was no tomorrow, and I prayed to God that He would allow me to ace that lesson.

It was strong, and I felt vulnerable, but you kept me grounded. Our bodies collided into a mesh of demands needing to be met, and my heart was hammering quite a rhythm when you cried out for more. You were perfect in every way, and the encouragement I felt from you helped me feel that familiar something you get when you’re about to trip over the edge.

I could feel your nails digging into my skin and the slurred profanities you uttered under my breath as I was reaching for dear life, and without me realizing it, it all came to an end when your legs gave way. My vision blurred as waves of pleasure washed over us both, and I felt amazing.

We almost collapsed onto the floor. I had to help you hold your slender body, embracing your slim waist, and we had to clean the mess we just made, but there were no awkward silences right after our little mischief.

Lingering thoughts, soft breathing, and tired smiles reigned all over, and the kind of satisfaction one gets after sharing these kinds of moments only helped ease the mood for another casual, but sensual kiss.

I didn't know what it was, but something in me wanted to let you know how perfect we were together. Though before I could utter a single word, you hugged me and purred, "You want seconds, right?"

Though a million thoughts crossed my mind then, nowadays all I can recall from that moment is how hard you laughed when, with a dumbfounded expression, I tripped over my words to say yes.
 

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Hey, guys. Been cooking up something new that I'd like to share with all of you, so hope you like it! Oh, and remember: Feedback is always welcome :giggle:



Falling in a Flash

It started with a look, the kind that doesn’t need words to express itself.

I saw you across the room, and your eyes met mine with quite the intensity. It was like you were searching for something in me, or perhaps some warmth. Either way, I could feel myself drawn to you.

We ended up in the same corner of the room sooner rather than later, close enough that our arms almost touched. I felt my nerves starting to build up with anticipation, and when I tried to utter my first words, you looked me straight in the eye and smiled. It swooped me off my feet.

It was easier that way, comfortable. Beneath the surface, there was this undeniable current pulling us closer, and I let it be.

You didn’t resist either, I noticed.

At some point, the party faded into the background. Music, voices, and lights became distant, and what mattered was the space between us.

We knew there was something called chemistry working in our favor when our fingers brushed. We both turned suddenly, but no words were needed when, before saying anything, you bit your lower lip and shamelessly checked me out.

A devilish glint appeared in your eyes as you sized up the moment, and I knew you were about to make your move.

"Wanna go somewhere quieter?" you said, and the ice melted into a sweet aphrodisiac called instant attraction.

It wasn't long before I was following you around. We both understood each other in a language only spoken by those who seek connections. Still, there was no rushing, only slow, deliberate movements.

We wanted a place to enjoy ourselves, and when we found it, we couldn’t keep our hands off each other. We wanted everything, and we needed it soon.

Your soft lips and curious tongue dancing inside my mouth left me needy, though our bodies pressed together allowed me to trail small kisses down your neck. Our passionate make-out session synchronized our breaths, deafening our ears with panting sounds and quiet grunts, and arousing something wild and untamed within our hearts.

It wasn’t long before we were both aching for more.

My strong urge to keep going met its answer when I felt you lift your arms. You took off your shirt, and thus, piece by piece, our clothes came off to reveal our deepest secrets, igniting passions while lips reunited and gained momentum.

Skin met skin, lips melted, and needs heightened. Suddenly, the room felt smaller, hotter, like the walls had moved in to keep the moment steamy and private. You could feel my heartbeat, or maybe it was yours. It didn’t matter anymore because what followed transcended mere desire; it became a craving for connection.

Two people giving into something neither of them had planned, but both had been craving for since the start meant we were making no promises, no expectations, and yet I felt like the warmth of our bodies fusing into pleasure told another story.

Quiet moans went lost in the dark, and a sense of perfect belonging permeated the atmosphere as my fingers explored the entire shape of your body. Small yesses and pleases started to fill my soul with want, and I couldn't bear it any longer when your hands began to map my lower body.

Heat waves came over me as your mouth, guided by nothing but fire, made me more eager than ever. From my lips escaped a plea way more sincere than any prayer, while juicy lips full of life and subtle matte lipstick, covered in what would be my saliva, were slowly lowering themselves around me.

Damn, heaven sure was warm.

A whole new world flashed before my eyes, and I learned how vocal I could get. You took pride in your skills, like you knew what they were doing to me, but my own kicked in then, and I gently stopped you to make you stand while I got on my knees. It was my time to show you what paradise was all about, and I was no newbie at this.

I wanted to make you scream, and it felt amazing realizing you weren't ready when my lips met yours. Moist, soft, and perfect. You were what I wanted and more, and your fingers tangled through my hair made me think I wasn't so bad at slowly opening you up and getting you used to my tongue.

I planned to keep going until your knees gave out, yet before I could accomplish my goal, I felt myself pulled into another kind of passionate mouth-to-mouth. The particular need that neither of us could avoid any longer was urging us to keep going, and I was aching to follow you with it until the end.

Consequently, as you'd expect of two young souls, we danced the devil’s tango at full force.

Your moans were demands in my ears. I was in ecstasy inside your warmth, and my mind went blank the moment you snatched away my lips again. You taught me how to kiss as if there was no tomorrow, and I prayed to God that He would allow me to ace that lesson.

It was strong, and I felt vulnerable, but you kept me grounded. Our bodies collided into a mesh of demands needing to be met, and my heart was hammering quite a rhythm when you cried out for more. You were perfect in every way, and the encouragement I felt from you helped me feel that familiar something you get when you’re about to trip over the edge.

I could feel your nails digging into my skin and the slurred profanities you uttered under my breath as I was reaching for dear life, and without me realizing it, it all came to an end when your legs gave way. My vision blurred as waves of pleasure washed over us both, and I felt amazing.

We almost collapsed onto the floor. I had to help you hold your slender body, embracing your slim waist, and we had to clean the mess we just made, but there were no awkward silences right after our little mischief.

Lingering thoughts, soft breathing, and tired smiles reigned all over, and the kind of satisfaction one gets after sharing these kinds of moments only helped ease the mood for another casual, but sensual kiss.

I didn't know what it was, but something in me wanted to let you know how perfect we were together. Though before I could utter a single word, you hugged me and purred, "You want seconds, right?"

Though a million thoughts crossed my mind then, nowadays all I can recall from that moment is how hard you laughed when, with a dumbfounded expression, I tripped over my words to say yes.
Did you want feedback on those paragraphs of text?
 

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Oh, I see there's a whole drama unfolding in this thread. But I liked the game's prologue. The setup is interesting. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Good luck to the developer, and I hope any existing issues (if there are any) get resolved.

P.S.: It would also be nice if at least one of the social media links in the header was active. The only working link is to X, but it hasn't been updated in a long time. The website is dead, and the Discord link doesn't work.
 
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Did you want feedback on those paragraphs of text?
Yep, exactly! I wanted to see how the mood and pacing landed for you guys before moving forward.

Feel free to be as blunt or as detailed as you like — I’d rather hear the “ouch” now than miss a chance to make it better later. Your feedback’s part of what makes Lost Elite grow into something worth everyone’s time.

Oh, I see there's a whole drama unfolding in this thread. But I liked the game's prologue. The setup is interesting. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Good luck to the developer, and I hope any existing issues (if there are any) get resolved.

P.S.: It would also be nice if at least one of the social media links in the header was active. The only working link is to X, but it hasn't been updated in a long time. The website is dead, and the Discord link doesn't work.
Hey Vebr, thanks for playing the prologue and sharing your feedback (y). Glad to hear the premise caught your attention — the continuation’s already on the way!

And yeah, you’re absolutely right about the socials. We’ve had some internal changes and… let’s just say there’s been a bit of “chaos” o_O. We’re fixing things up and bringing all the channels up to date so it’s easier to follow the news. Thanks for pointing it out — that kind of feedback really helps a lot.
 

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Yep, exactly! I wanted to see how the mood and pacing landed for you guys before moving forward.

Feel free to be as blunt or as detailed as you like — I’d rather hear the “ouch” now than miss a chance to make it better later. Your feedback’s part of what makes Lost Elite grow into something worth everyone’s time.
I don't know your intentions with the text but flavourwise it's a good fit as like a "teen girl's diary entry", it's the vibe/mood I get from reading it.. I assume it supposed to be from the perspective of the feMC?

Personally it's the type of text I'd skip through when playing. I'm honestly playing for choices and consequenses, not interested in her thoughts/feelings.
 
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I don't know your intentions with the text but flavourwise it's a good fit as like a "teen girl's diary entry", it's the vibe/mood I get from reading it.. I assume it supposed to be from the perspective of the feMC?

Personally it's the type of text I'd skip through when playing. I'm honestly playing for choices and consequenses, not interested in her thoughts/feelings.
Hey balvenie1401, gotcha — I see how it could come across that way from your side.

That scene was very much about capturing a specific voice for the MC early on, so it leans into that diary-style tone. I know that’s not everyone’s cup of tea, and if your focus is on choices and consequences, there’s plenty more of that as the story moves forward.

One of the goals with Lost Elite is to balance introspection with player agency — so whether you’re here for the emotional beats or for making impactful decisions, both paths are baked into the design. Hopefully you’ll find the mix works better for you as the game progresses. ;)
 
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Hey balvenie1401, gotcha — I see how it could come across that way from your side.

That scene was very much about capturing a specific voice for the MC early on, so it leans into that diary-style tone. I know that’s not everyone’s cup of tea, and if your focus is on choices and consequences, there’s plenty more of that as the story moves forward.

One of the goals with Lost Elite is to balance introspection with player agency — so whether you’re here for the emotional beats or for making impactful decisions, both paths are baked into the design. Hopefully you’ll find the mix works better for you as the game progresses. ;)
Got it. It works fine as female inner dialogue, I see no problems with the text as it sits, I'm not the target audience though.

No worries mate, as I said before I enjoyed the demo thus far. My only real issue so far has been the widely different art styles used for pics, vids,sprites, but that has been adressed in this thread already.
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Got it. It works fine as female inner dialogue, I see no problems with the text as it sits, I'm not the target audience though.

No worries mate, as I said before I enjoyed the demo thus far. My only real issue so far has been the widely different art styles used for pics, vids,sprites, but that has been adressed in this thread already.
Cheers
Got it, and we appreciate you letting us know your point of view, balvenie1401. Even if you’re not exactly the target audience for every scene, we’re glad to hear the text works for you as it is.

We’re also happy to know you’ve enjoyed the demo so far. We’re working to make the visual style more consistent as production moves forward, so we hope you’ll keep following us to see how it all comes together. There’s still plenty of story, choices, and polish ahead — and having you along for the ride makes the journey even better ;) .
 
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The Virtuidols Have Landed in Lost Elite

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What if the characters you’ve been following… suddenly started following you back?
That’s the idea behind our Virtuidols — characters who don’t just live inside the story, but step out into our world, ready to tease you, whisper in your ear, and share things you’d never see in the main game.

Cassie, Alistair, Diana, Denise, and Marco now have their own spaces to interact with you 24/7. Think of it as the game’s universe bleeding into real life… with all the fun, intimacy, and temptation you can imagine.

You can follow their social spaces and get to know them better — for free — by joining our Patreon. See what they’re up to when the “camera” isn’t rolling… or take the conversation somewhere the game would never dare to go.

They’re ready. The question is: are you?

 
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Big news about the development of Lost Elite are coming soon. The final release of Episode 1 is just around the corner — and it’s only the first of many updates we can’t wait to share with you.

In Lost Elite we believe the community is the compass that shows us the way. That’s why we opened this poll where you decide what kind of content comes next. All our followers — free or paid — can cast their vote.

For us, it’s more than just a poll: seeing where the votes are going, we’ve already started working on it… because sometimes what you ask for goes way beyond what the game dares to show… for now

Join us for free and cast your vote:


Don’t come saying you got here late…
 
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