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"a typical guy going through the motions, being self-centered and thinking the world revolves around him."
Hmmm is this long hand for douche bag?
Hmmm is this long hand for douche bag?
You'll have to ask Raul777 about that. But do get back to your soapbox.
- Nov 20, 2017
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um .... yes .... what should I say? endless unfasbar annoying stupid blabbering from the mc of infinitely much crap constantly tells only his stupid useless blah blah blah blah ........ then the attack was not bad but then it continues to go so unpredictably any kind of come snatch one or several girls take it with them and fuck them we have to look back then dumb brainless grinning of points stupid crap tell how you are wonderful you are so great you are the greeted i of course do all the work for you and keep living like that a monks in sex sex all others fuck wild and have fun and the mc is the total loser and gets apologized every once in a thousand times
I bet so it goes on AND very importantly he tells and for hours again any useless shit probably that is not quite normal bizarre therefore the hour speaks to himself and bores us to death:FeelsBadMan:
It's such a pity about the game. The idea is really good. It looks good, too. I especially liked the fact that he contravened his mother but that was just hot air and he gave it back to us:teary:
I bet so it goes on AND very importantly he tells and for hours again any useless shit probably that is not quite normal bizarre therefore the hour speaks to himself and bores us to death:FeelsBadMan:
It's such a pity about the game. The idea is really good. It looks good, too. I especially liked the fact that he contravened his mother but that was just hot air and he gave it back to us:teary:
- Dec 5, 2017
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hopefully the intro well be more visual than some guy talking non stop, show us don't tell us kinda thing.
- May 3, 2017
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Damn another games potential ruined with a 12 yo look a like gremlin.
- Oct 7, 2017
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I keep seeing the same pattern, an interesting sounding game and some very plain to unattractive characters in the game. I understand developers do not want to use the same model but how hard is it to make the characters attractive.
I know it is not since I was in game development a LOOONNG time ago. I will pass on this game also not worth my time if the characters do nothing or turn me off. Just my 2 cents!!
I know it is not since I was in game development a LOOONNG time ago. I will pass on this game also not worth my time if the characters do nothing or turn me off. Just my 2 cents!!
- Jul 27, 2017
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I didn't want to call her that before in order to avoid hurting the feelings of the dev; she also reminds me of Smeagol from the LOTR.
- Jan 14, 2018
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Dev, the adult game industry does not lack games set in a post apocalyptic world. Heck, there are incest games with that premise too. They're usually not too successful since the devs seem to be overly focused on the environment rather than the characters.
CG looks crisp though. Keep going.
CG looks crisp though. Keep going.
- Oct 23, 2016
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Too much empty monologueing.
Just trim the monologues down and loose all the bloated dialogue.
Do something about the younger sister, she looks like she has a skin condition or something.
Also, is the only current ending that we hear the mother being raped/attacked?
It's an interesting idea and there are some good points, but you really need to trim down your text.
It's way, way too verbose.
Just trim the monologues down and loose all the bloated dialogue.
Do something about the younger sister, she looks like she has a skin condition or something.
Also, is the only current ending that we hear the mother being raped/attacked?
It's an interesting idea and there are some good points, but you really need to trim down your text.
It's way, way too verbose.
- Jan 20, 2018
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It's me Gibby, I have to say, thank you to everyone for your idea's, imput and criticism. Believe me, i am still super new to all this myself. So i am more than happy take any advice and help i can get.
Thank you!
Thank you!
- Oct 15, 2016
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No idea WTF you just said. All I see is a wall of text with ZERO punctuation or capitalization to know where one sentence/thought ends and the next begins.
- Sep 1, 2017
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Not sure about that with Patreon's crackdown. But I sure hope so, some of the best VNs out there are incest in nature.
Beatix is one of the best, or maybe the best, character i've ever seen in a game. Pls keep up the good work, but yea - the dialogs are a bit long.
- Jul 29, 2017
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Actually looking forward. The main character was kinda obnoxious, but I guess that whole rebellious attitude like not wanting to help mom will not mean anything in the coming updates since he will be on a different reality, which is good cause no one whats to play with an unlikable character.
- May 3, 2017
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Yea very creepy looking 12yo. I hate when dev's try to sell weird looking 12yo look a likes for 18yo. Wish there was an option to just delete those creepy 12yo sisters from all games. Kills my boner every single time ;(
The older sister though is one of the hottest models there is, but then the mom looks same age but with 'grey' hair. It's not just this one game mind you, so i'm not picking on this only dev here. Most other adult games have the same problem with 25yo moms and 12 yo's daughters while somehow main character [often son] is 18yo himself. It doesn't mean everyone has to follow that terrible trend. Love the setting. [fallout fan]