Capt, I've given her all I've got and she can't take anymore... Ok chapter 8, they work for a firm that sells homes, I'm on chapter 8, and they cannot figure out they need a bigger home for this harem? The silliness has exceeded the speed of light, careful time is going to slow down as they get sucked into the vortex, is it a brown dwarf? Read above about the dev being disappointed it was uploaded here. My fellow fans of the devs, writers and graphic artists, its up to us to provide a service in appreciation for the content they make available to us. So feedback, and constructive feedback is what is needed. Many of these peeps, are looking for financial support and gain, so we can help them by looking at the fetishes, plot, content and storyboards, in order to make their likely profit expectations achieved. So if you like a portion and not so much in other areas, let them know, but just don't observe, if you have the skills offer solutions and suggestions, and don't cry if they are not adopted.
The car accident likely caused by the mean ogre drunken dad, who threatens. Areas of doubts: Grandmother is a former solicitor and she was aware of the threat note left to the mom, saying they would be killed... Something that is never thrown away. The guy is a menace to society, no one prosecutes. Another illegal action paid to kidnap a daughter, stating stillborn. This is another serious crime, bribery of officials, threats to kill again, kidnapping. Timing errors? If The oldest daughter I believe she is named Beth, is the MC's oldest full sister. How old is she? MC I calculated to be apx 25 years old. Was five when told by his dad the mother died in the car accident. Its been twenty years when he is reunited with mom. MC has memories of his mom possibly up to the five year old point. Prior to the refound adopted away Beth, I calculated his mom to be about 45 story wise. The half sisters come in after that oldest Amie twenty possibly. But if the Mom supposedly dies at the MC's five year point. How can Beth be the oldest daughter of MOM? Was there more than one drunken accident?
Ok above fixed in chap 10. I wonder how long till their cycles all sync.
I find it annoying how so many games want to equivalate sex to heaven, why not just use more common adjectives, adverbs and such, nouns. I doubt very much most of the fans know what heaven is like, and it sort of insults some who do. The MC has some likely good stamina, but things get sore if one has five different partners and seven or so ejaculations in a few hours. I know that pesky reality thing, so sowwy.
Chap 12, I have noticed with the abundant and well appreciated cream pies that are given out, that the girls seem to have a problem leaking, the MC should suggest they lay on their backs with their legs elevated so more is kept inside, or that if it leaks down their legs, one of the other girls can do an assist there. Ha ha hmmm