Pros
- Better events. Finally they are longer and more exciting. Also there are more feelings and sparkles. Quite an improvement.
- Nami is good in this update, even if she definitely needs more events.
Cons
- "Remember to smile" from a god. Really? Another one "inspiration" xD
- It's quite lazy, not giving names for side characters. Why not? It's not hard, but make the story better. "Girl #3" is just bad storytelling, even if you try to make it plot-relevant. Maybe you have a big plot reveal for it later, but it looks bad.
Overall
You need 1) less inspiration from other games, 2) more original content, 3) more events with girls.