VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Love and Submission [v0.08] [veqvil]

Awesome start for a game check, incest check, hot models check, attention grabbing story check2x, delivery check, so far everything good.

But sad to say everything all comes down to endgame, just like the movie, NO ONE wants a cliffhanger movie, no one wants a cliffhanger episode, no one wants a half part of a book or novel or a half-eaten pie.

Started out good but a very sad finish, no matter the reason to me that affects my view of the person who started this whole thing, his/her personality, professionalism, art and vision.

I REALLY HATE those who tells a story or a joke and not delivering the punchline/ending.

Just leaving this here because I am sad to see the abandoned tag, and I'd tell you to play it but you'd just be disappointed.

Like many others have said, the story (or at least the begginings of one) was one of the only VN game plots that seemed like an actual plot instead of a vehicle for sex/incest. Every single character so far had been pretty interesting and unique, and there were already kind of branching story arcs with different groups of characters. Never really once felt that the dialogue or "actors" felt forced weird or out of place.

Not to mention the models being fan fuckin tastic. Really all around just based on the taste of what could have been alone I've got to say this is far and above the rest.

First game on this site that i was actually interested in the story. I hope that it continues since im curious how things will turn out. And the scenes are pretty good looking forward to more in the future, hopefully.

An excellent but unfinished game.

Chara Design :
Not only they are either cute or sexy or slutty or milfy, or classy, or normal, but their personality is pretty consistent and nice as well. Good job on that

Story/Writing :
It is pretty captivating, very well written, without loads of useless texts, but you still progress in the story quite well and not just because you want to see the next sex scene.

Animations/Renders :
There are not many and they are quite short. But the few we can see is pretty correct nevertheless

Gameplay :
I would give a higher rate if there were not so many "work in progress" everywhere. Otherwise the mechanism is pretty conventional, nothing original, but it works

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I have to admit that the fact I knew the game will be unfinished did spoil me a bit the fun.
It's a pity because the game so far was a real hit and as the story is good, not knowing how it ends is kinda frustrating

Wow. 9/10 Excellent work. Story more than one. Thrilling. Models marvel. I just don't like to get my mom so easily but be it. More hesitancy and defiance adds to the intensity of the feeling. I have to get ..
I am pleased with this short work. This will sell itself if it isn't so easy to conquer. Nobody wants anything for free. Faith in reward is the right nut.

I really love the renders of this game and the models as well. I can't choose between them. I also like the way this game works, with it's open world style, the dev uses the open world aspect the right way, so it's a good choice, he made. I also think the vapire thing is kinda cool too. The only con is that the dev normally takes some time to release new update.

love it thinking of replaying it to see what the choose we make i pick love all feel sorry for the player sis and i will download the next update right away and that dick who think he can act all powerful because of he dna he will pay or that what i like to do but the it end good thing i save not to far back

OMG this game is gonna drive me crazy. The women in it are so sexy especially MC's mom. Good storyn excellent animations but only one problem not many positions. I'm so waiting the next update to find what I'll dot to the sister.

Unique supernatural story! Great renders and scenes. Pacing could be a little faster. I know its still work in progress, but games needs more locations to visit, because UI and movement system is actually pretty good and not annoying like in some other titles. Current build ends on a cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next.

Fantastic game, looking forward to its completion.

pros:

- Good graphics
- interesting storyline
- great transition animations
- nice backstory
- huge variety of options available for protagonist
- makes me horny 24/7
- impactful decisions with consequences

cons:

- can be cucked (?)
- can be cucked
- i dont want to be cucked

The very first game of this type that I've played. I liked it a lot from the beginning.

The game is still unfinished so there are a future releases coming. The beginning of the game was awesome, there is everything you could wish for a five star game. The game need just a little more content at this point to earn it’s missing fifth star. There was no bugs at all (at least not bugs that would make gameplay harder). Game is nicely looking (good high quality graphics), gameplay goes smoothly no issues at all. The story is unique and the content seen on the game has been done carefully and not in a hurry. Unfortunately, the story is still partly unfinished. Anyhow there is a damn good start with the story and the content so far.
The only thing in the story that got me on my toes (the thing that I got a scared a little bit) is that, one family in the game has these wolf look-a-like eyes. At that point I immediately got an idea of the “Twilight”. Hopefully that’s not the thing and game does not turn to be a true romantic love story. We'll future show as what is coming. Even if there would be a werewolf family, I still would like the game.
This is definitely a game that you should try out! By myself, because of this game I found "the scene" and many other nice games from F95zone. If you haven't played this kind of games, try this out!

Rating (out of 5)
Graphics: 5
Story: 4 (the “Twilight” possibility is pushing this down from 5)
Content: 4 (amount of content is not high in this early release)
Gameplay: 5

This game very very awesome. I Will say thanks you for F.lord for create this game and i hope f.lord can update this game again but please don't so long it hehe. Keep stay healthy for you and your family

See? Whatever humanity tries to create, it will be still better than Twilight!
Take a pretty lighter version of Vampire the Masquerade and make it a porn parody....here you gooo! This is the game.

It is not one of these games to skip the stupid dialog and progress through sex scenes. (If you are looking for it, go and find something else, this one is lacking at amount of sex scenes...if you ask me, that is nice, i don't want nonsense stupid sex scenes at every single corner)

Overall, nice, play it. If you can take your time and read all things you'll see it have a good writing but game itself still needs a lot of updates! If you can do it, try to support dev. and play the game when it is finished. I have a good feeling on this one.

@Dev: Punish players with time locked events&bad dialogue choices. Example: At hospital event, you can theorically just lie down and pass weeks(if you are a pscycho years) before visiting sis&mom at hospital. Making something later than it supposed to be or making wrong choices during conversations must bring some bad results, or even game over scenes. Personal opinion
....but overall? Keep it up, you got a nice game

I really like this game. It is nicely renderend. Great choices in the game. But most of all the storyline is realy good. I would play it even without the 18+ scenes.
I hope the next update will come soon.

I Love this game! The Story, the quality:
After traveling through Asia you finally arrive back home to your family. Having no access to the internet you see your family the first time after 2 years. A lot has changed: There are new neighbors now, your mom started dating and your old friends have changed.

Very good story and art! I found myself really getting into the story and character development. Can't wait for the next update! I don't know what else to say.... Try it out!

This is a great game with an awesome story I love the mother and sister unexpected shit happens. Also the other family has an interesting story to it and I can’t wait to continue playing next versions. It’s definently more realistic cause I still have yet to get into some sex scenes I like the slow and “realistic” pacing

This game has not only some amazingly sexy characters, but an even more entertaining and intriguing wold that we get to see slowly get revealed to the character as we play. Combine this with better character development than most games, and I can't rate this as anything other than 5 stars.

The game is too complex with not enough sex scenes. I play too fap so this makes it really frustrating and annoying. I think this actually needs me to just visit every room and highlight the mouse over everything in order to progress through the game, FUCK-NO... Don't waste hours with ONLY one scene near the end that you can masturbation to. also come on you gotta add scene calendar

This game needs a redirection of its efforts. Too much has gone into the incredible story and character believability, and too little into the extremely few erotic scenes. The potential of the story is very interesting, but it means very little if it isn't backed up with erotic content.