[Version reviewed - Ep. 2]
Good renders.
That's it. This game reeks of squandered potential because its visuals, twink protagonist and outrageous proportions of some of the ladies notwithstanding, are honestly all this game has got going for itself, while everything else needs some serious work. The "story" unfolds at a ridiculous pace and some of the events in it are beyond absurd even for a porn game. Not to mention that the vast majority of the dialogues are aneurysm inducing. I would highly suggest the dev to hire a proofreader asap, even though given the quality of the source material I can't help but think that it'd be as effective as putting a band aid on a bullet wound. Just get an actual writer on the job instead.
Also, yet another game with an unnecessary karma-like point system. I always thought it was a dumb thing to have in a game to begin with, but I have to say it feels especially tacked on when the most meaningful dialogue choice you're presented with is to tell a woman whether she looks good or not. You want your product to feel like a "game", I get it, but choices are made meaningful not only by their consequences but also by the way they're presented. You need quality writing, the kind that does subtlety and eroticism well, and that is capable of bringing to life endearing and well fleshed out characters and personalities. This game has none of those things, it just feels rushed, formulaic and all around disappointing.
TL;DR = Got lured by the renders, got filtered by the appalling writing.