VN Ren'Py Love and Temptation [S2 Ep.9] [GruBoop]

[Tazmodian]

Does the menu song have a name or was it custom made?

 

[Raziel_8]

That was the confusing part for me. Just wish season one actually ended instead of just an abrupt cut off in story.

Well that happens if a dev abandons a game, not sure how he would have made a ending for S1, i mean, that game just started.
The only confusing thing is that the dev named it season 1 and 2, when the games have nothing to do with each other....even the game overview is still from the abandoned game...

 

[pantil]

The incest patch does not add incest to the first season game since there is no parental relationship since his father and mother died and he goes to live with Miyuki.

Lines that should add incest
" my parents died. Since then, I’ve been living with [m] and ."
"She always treated me kindly and raised me as if I were her own child.", "[m] was always kind to us."

This is not incest and there is no reason to call it an incest patch
Is there mother-daughter incest in the game?

 

[blademaster89]

Her whole character raises questions, with the whole "push-pull" routine she loves doing with the MC. On one hand she pushes him away and warns against doing anything; on the other hand she teases him relentlessly to see if he will ignore her words. You'd expect that on 2 types of characters: a) bratty younger women, b) super successful types who have been in control their entire life and now want to see how it feels when control is taken away from them through the actions of their partner. What's Martha's story? Well, she got left by her husband early on and juggled 3 jobs to raise her daughter as a single mother. Aka she's been kicked all the way down and should be the last woman who does this. And yet here we are.

My impression is that the developer doesn't do "game" but "scenes". Whatever is hot to him in the moment, he rolls with. At the start she wants to set him up with Alice, now the dev wants a dominant mommy so she threatens to feed him his balls if he touches her. We're in the middle of winter exchanging gifts, but he wants to do a scene with Martha soaked in sweat outside? Time skip, who gives a fuck.

Is what it is, the individual scenes are very hot, but don't expect any coherence now or in the future. One day they will have a talk about the importance of choosing your future career, the next day pixies will invade and steal all their clothes. Just roll with it.

Aptly put lol.

 

[Raziel_8]

Aptly put lol.

Yeah, there isn't much coherence or story here.
Like your just start to celebrate Christmas, than you suddenly got a several months later text, didn't even celebrate or give the gift to Alice ...like why, time skipp for months doesn't benefit the story at all here. Or did the dev just want another Martha scene in a top and sweeting...

Also a really boring update imo...still no real progress be it mom/sis or Alice and i just don't care about Martha, her character is just annoying, well to me.

 

[blademaster89]

Yeah, there isn't much coherence or story here.
Like your just start to celebrate Christmas, than you suddenly got a several months later text, didn't even celebrate or give the gift to Alice ...like why, time skipp for months doesn't benefit the story at all here. Or did the dev just want another Martha scene in a top and sweeting...

Also a really boring update imo...still no real progress be it mom/sis or Alice and i just don't care about Martha, her character is just annoying, well to me.

Everyone has their preferences, and I personally love Martha, lol. That said, I understand your perspective. Based on earlier replies to my comment, it’s pretty clear the story is just a collection of scenes that barely hold together, meaning the developer’s storytelling isn’t great. However, he does create good individual scenes. He really ought to bring in a writer who can craft a believable, if not realistic, but at least a cohesive story. He could then focus on directing it, as he clearly does well when working from a script. It seems he is hardworking, but he lacks the creativity to sustain a consistent narrative. I’m not criticising him personally, but this is something he needs to work on.

 

[De jay de jay]

Everyone has their preferences, and I personally love Martha, lol. That said, I understand your perspective. Based on earlier replies to my comment, it’s pretty clear the story is just a collection of scenes that barely hold together, meaning the developer’s storytelling isn’t great. However, he does create good individual scenes. He really ought to bring in a writer who can craft a believable, if not realistic, but at least a cohesive story. He could then focus on directing it, as he clearly does well when working from a script. It seems he is hardworking, but he lacks the creativity to sustain a consistent narrative. I’m not criticising him personally, but this is something he needs to work on.

* he used to make good individual scenes, now he's making AI trash.*

 

[Lapsudit]

What the hell i loved the game and the animations why you ruining with ai BS i'm not the "Aaarg Ai burn!" Type of person but Ai is not good enough right now to throw on animations

 

[Woodstock_1983]

If you're going to let the players change names of someone, reflect it in the game please.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

It seemed intresting but the Dev really needs to add animations. Clicking scenes by scenes is not enjoyable.

 

[brianzzz]

is there any choice hint or walkthrough mod in this game?

 

[Edrick23]

If you're going to let the players change names of someone, reflect it in the game please.

It's because you play with a mod/patch (the incest one, I suppose).
In the original script, the dev did warn us : it's just a nickname and only the mc sometimes calls her like that.

 

[PreviousGene]

Kindly try to skip the AI stuff, it is not to this game's benefit. Heck, I'd rather go completely without animation than seeing that terrible AI job.

 

[lishes]

puhhh damn.. not as good as before

 

[Wiso232]

Can someone help me when I start the game, it gives me an error, I just downloaded it

 

[george agdgdgwengo]

K this game is boring so far. Does it ever get more interesting? All I see so far is no tension, things just happen, and a landlady and roommate are indiscriminately flashing MC without a care in the world.

 

[Just Jericho]

K this game is boring so far. Does it ever get more interesting? All I see so far is no tension, things just happen, and a landlady and roommate are indiscriminately flashing MC without a care in the world.

Don't worry too much about the dialogue in this one, you'll just give yourself a headache. Just skip through and enjoy the gratuitous booty and tiddy shots.

 

[Midnight Prophets]

Kindly try to skip the AI stuff, it is not to this game's benefit. Heck, I'd rather go completely without animation than seeing that terrible AI job.

It's a disservice to the already beautiful models. It's not needed and I would also prefer no animation if it meant skipping the Ai stuff.

puhhh damn.. not as good as before

I like this new version much better than the original with the tiny MC.

 

[rudy007]

It's a disservice to the already beautiful models. It's not needed and I would also prefer no animation if it meant skipping the Ai stuff.


I like this new version much better than the original with the tiny MC.

Well... AI is like a Genie... But how much we try to put it back into the bottle, we cant... Soon everybody will use it. But it will be better too. I'm not thrilled either, but if it's an original human idea, I will tolerate it.

 

[Midnight Prophets]

Well... AI is like a Genie... But how much we try to put it back into the bottle, we cant... Soon everybody will use it. But it will be better too. I'm not thrilled either, but if it's an original human idea, I will tolerate it.

It's the opposite to for me, unfortunately.