Hmmm....timeline just almost fixed itself and I know...I'm a broken damn record.
Has to put the call in Senior year. MC never says it was Junior year btw...never. line 262 starts with Junior year...but it is all very vague. Then we get (right AFTER he is at cliff-phonecall):
A "But I'd like to try again, if you'll let me."
"True to her word, Anna stayed an amazing friend throughout my senior year."
The above line from Anna and then MC suggests this is already senior year. Also, I'd need someone to correct me here, but if he 'lost a semester' in Junior year....surely he would fail or have to redo that immediately? He doesn't You would not take a lost/failed semester from the year before...after your final senior year. Sure as hell not here at least. So his lost semester, has to have been during senior year. It just makes far more logical, and narrative sense.
it all fits perfectly my friends. Again, the cliff phone call is
never stated to still be Junior year. Never. It is made out that is flows and it is, but it's
never stated. The cliff convo above, makes it seem like it was
already Senior year (plus we have to keep in mind, all this is 'recollection'....).
Now heh....my 'last hurrah....
Ummm...wait...stop the bus. Lied about being an addict AND...AND having brain damage?
Bwahahahahahaha........................
And to make this the funniest fucking thing since Bing Crosby tapped with Danny fucking Kaye? This is THURSDAY....where did she find the time to go to her clinic/therapy appointment? Would that before or after Mia tried to drug her (and supposedly, after her previous admission of she would be very tempted to snort up under stress, we're supposed to believe dozens and dozens of bags did not tempt her...especially after Mia left? Been hours since lunch by the time the MC gets home (is dark outside)
And remember guys, all this Ket just 'mysteriously goes away'...somewhere...over the raaaaiiinbowwwww....(and she never tells the MC about the Ket)...so another...fucking...broken...promise (made the day before for christ sake). People say she is getting better? .
I've been incredibly vocal...incredibly vocal...about the writing. I'm leaning into not being. Yes, there's a couple of double days, annoying and he may fix those, who knows. However, when you see my revised timeline, with everything where I think it should be....fuck me does it all make much MORE sense....it's frightening. When I finish and upload it, be very sure to take care reading the 'notes' & especially the 'Discrepancies/Thoughts' section (this is all in green to stand out). All of those, will disappear in my revised timeline
