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Sure, in the first release are two "creatures" a Ghost and a Succubus (not Lacey lol) And everything happens with them in the house-
These two are wayward girls, not the usual orphans huh?
So succubus really exist in the L&J universe, well the excuse that Lacey has some succubus trait and couldnt stop herself in college once she had the first taste just got higher. I really really hope that the dev dont go with that route and keeps the supernatural away and only on the Augusta game.

Lets keep the L&J game a realistic one... eh Dev?
 

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I would love to see more games like this that focus on the aftermath of cheating. Honestly, I would be interested to see a lot more time on a story where the MC battles with it before and after (as L&J does)and then the story goes on to focus how he will deal with it in various routes (revenge, rehabilitation, FMC regret and stalking, humiliation, etc...).
The problem here is that then there would be no game...unless you branch off a path where the MC tells her to fuck herself, throws her worthless ass out and then...how does the game/story continue from there? Because the alternative, is for the MC/player to be an utterly pathetic loser by forgiving her. Plenty of those around already unfortunately.

A game where the MC does what the vast majority of men with any type of backbone would do...would be a very short story indeed lol.
 
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The problem here is that then there would be no game...unless you branch off a path where the MC tells her to fuck herself, throws her worthless ass out and then...how does the game/story continue from there? Because the alternative, is for the MC/player to be an utterly pathetic loser by forgiving her. Plenty of those around already unfortunately.

A game where the MC does what the vast majority of men with any type of backbone would do...would be a very short story indeed lol.
No you make two branches one with a mc that is what the game has and one that doesnt allow the streaming event and works to fix things in a sane way…
 
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You don´t need to worry about that. This has nothing to do with L&J. Once it´s here you will understand.
Yeah, i'll wait it out, i would like to subscribe to the dev but i hate patreon for the bullshit censorship and now even subscribestar is starting to do it too.
 
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The problem here is that then there would be no game...unless you branch off a path where the MC tells her to fuck herself, throws her worthless ass out and then...how does the game/story continue from there? Because the alternative, is for the MC/player to be an utterly pathetic loser by forgiving her. Plenty of those around already unfortunately.

A game where the MC does what the vast majority of men with any type of backbone would do...would be a very short story indeed lol.
Edit: To be clear, I am not talking about L&J, just an NTR type game in general.

Same way this game deals with the issue, but with different options. Go for the slow burn, build up and then apex for a resolution.

You could have a "forgive" path which could be drawn out similar to the same concept that L&J does with her trying, slipping, etc... (not one I would choose, but it is an option).

Other paths could be, a physical revenge, monetary and life revenge, etc...

They could be slow build ups... and even pretty devious and the planning could take time, buildup to the execution, then... there is the aftermath of that action to see the offending parties and how they "deal" with those issues.

Consider using some fanciful means to effect this. Maybe the MC visits a local herbalist who knows all kinds of things, or a medical specialist willing to give some "special" medications. It could result in making the antagonist impotent, then the FMC no longer has that "pleasure" connection from them, then considers in a panic they should try to remedy their relationship while the MC has prepared for a lovely revenge shunning or the like.

There could be violent ends "off with his head" *wink*, but in a manner the MC isn't implicated (stealth kidnap?).

There could be simply an "acceptance" (for the plan) while the MC "deals" with the crap while he changes all the assets into his name, records the actions of them to be released in a manner that gets them fired/banished/etc... and then when all plans go into effect, he gets to walk out with his head high while he dismisses the wife/antagonist as if they are dirt beneath his feet.

I have seen some suggest "taking her back", but then treating her like complete dirt pulling the strings, watching her grovel, building her to a confidence that she will be back to normal eventually only to pull the rug out at the last minute and dump her in the most humiliating way possible.

Honestly, the list goes on and on what could be and it could be drawn out, just like the NTR is built up, but with a satisfying end for the MC and maybe this is also a means to show a journey of the MC "coming out of his retarded NTR MC shell".

Point is, it is a story, and if written properly (honestly, the "finding out" has to be more clever, not this retarded crap you usually see), the roller coaster can be quite emotional on all spectrums from betrayal, complete demoralization, humiliation, etc... but then also ride to extremes in rage/revenge/reconciliation and forgiveness, or simply the "lone rider off into the sunset", sad... but with his dignity intact.

Sky is the limit to be honest.


Edit: more thoughts on this


One of my favorite "revenge" concepts would be targeting the very thing that the FMC/Antagonist prize most. For the FMC, it is usually the sex, the physical corruption and craving. For the Antagonist, is the the power of using sex, often under the lure of their "large appendage".

So, what is the best revenge? I already covered the antagonist (make him impotent in some fashion and then sit back and enjoy the suffering he experiences when he tries to "please" those he has corrupted).

For the FMC, I always thought something akin to a "accident at the acupuncturist" which results in all her pleasure centers going numb... (not sure if this is even possible, but it is a "reasonable" means to explain away in a story). The result is then she no longer can experience the very thing she made foremost in her life, sex... it literally no longer provides ANY satisfaction, numb... nothing... nada.

What would she do then? She no longer can experience physical pleasure, only emotional would matter now... but... the antagonist corrupter is often rude, cruel and demeaning, which the corrupted will accept because they enjoy the physical depravity of the activities. Once that is gone all they have is some guy who treats them like crap, but no real love or payoff, just... demoralization.

Would they run back to the MC begging for forgiveness? The loss of that "addiction" would certainly cause a reflection on what was meaningful... it could be torture for them, a state of complete breakdown, and utter panic. The dialogue between the MC, the interactions with the antagonist, etc... would all be quite interesting I think and you could put a healthy amount of time within these areas to see the suffering on that side of the fence, the regret, the "consequence", etc...

Or maybe not, you certainly could push it in other directions... point is, there is a lot of story to be had on that side of the fence and this is something we rarely see these stories attend to and something I think that L&J at least deals with to an extent however "honest" it may or may not be.
 
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if you all want to see a slow burn game look up Boundaries of Morality . It is just getting started but huge potential
Slow burn as in... lead up to betrayal... game over, MC is a loser, Betrayer and antagonist ride off into the sunset happily ever after?

I know that is a large part of NTR, but the ones I like are the ones that allow some remedy for the MC that isn't simply "you suck loser!"
 
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Just to add fire to old debates as was discussing this elsewhere:

Sun: This is before her week away. Tells V her first appointment at clinic is in 2 weeks.
Following Wed: Leaves with Veronica for East Coast
Fri: Mia tells MC appointment is 'next week' (Lacey does not come home until the following Friday
Tue after returning: Tells Anna appointment is 'tomorrow' and tells MC was at clinic 'today'. (conveniently not telling her husband about this visit and brain scan).
Wed (day after): Lacey tells MC she has appt every Thursday after work. This is now 17 days after her convo with Veronica. This is also the night she has the works do for Will and comes home barely even able to speak. Also, she must have some absolutely fucking amazing health insurance. Has anyone, here, anywhere...ever heard of getting a therapy appointment so damn quickly?

Thu (day after): Lacey takes day off work (due to hangover) and this is the day we are assuming Barty(?) came around (in the afternoon). She is wearing the clothes she told the MC she would wear when he asked her what she would wear if she had to tell someone of her past. (white jumper/blue jeans) However, she deflects both times the MC asks her about her visit to therapy.
Thu (week later): Just after lunctime...Anna sends Lacey home...Mia waiting for her. No mention of whether she made it to her appointment. Lacey at home when MC arrives home.

So.

1. Telling V date of appointment? Wrong/Lie...
2. Mia telling MC date of appointment? Wrong/Lie
3. Lacey telling Anna when appointment is? Heh...Wrong/Lie
4. When did she have the time to go to the clinic between waking up, being with MC in the morning, chatting with Isaac, Anna arriving and waiting for the MC to come home? Hmmm? Anyone? hehe.
5. First Appointment date? Well...did she even go? I don't think she did...too K'd up after having a nice cosy chat with Barty(?)
6. Second Appointment date? The late afternoon of Mia the friendly neighbourhood K delivery service. Did she go? Well, she is still in her works clothes this evening and at home when MC arrives.

Yet, apparently, after supposedly (lol) 2 therapy sessions (usually an hour long), what she says to the 'group' about what she has discussed...seems to be about 3 months worth of topic discussions...

So.,..presented like this.....can you see why I don't believe there is any therapy...hell fuck it...even a clinic visit...meds? Mr 243 rules would not keep check she is taking her anti-deprassants (and can be extremely dangerous to miss doeses)?

No? Just me? Fry...Fry....Beuller....

One of two things are happening here. The dev is blind to his timeline and is not keeping tack of days/dates/events. This is important (or incredibly lazy) as he invites us to anaylise this, given he gives us so many specific days, points of time, time priods...all set in stone. Or, it is all intentional to show, everything that the succubus spews out of her mouth is complete...and utter...bullshit.

There is no brain damage (you know, the damage that didn't stop her graduating, doesn't affect her job, her friendships...just the MC and other men)....there was no clinic appointment/visit....there is no therapy.....
 
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Anything to keep her Incubus-betrothed MC locked up at home and in her pocket. Demons and devils are often portrayed as overly possessive and demanding while also getting the boot from other demons. Lacey is a small fry succubus in a big pond with bigger demons and she likes to have her incubus hubby MC as food for thought and her guilty pleasure. Once she leaves home, she instantly becomes an easy meal for all the other bigger demons and demonesses around.
everything that the succubus spews out of her mouth is complete...and utter...bullshit
This is the only way to explain why she cannot just up and go - hell is all around her and would not let her go, so why should she let MC go? He deserved the same fate as her, did he not?
 
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First post here but after reading Augusta's Home for Wayward Girls I had a thought (most likely a terrible one).
Its not a terrible thought, in fact its a good theory, better than some suggested ones. The only problem is that the stories would actively affect each other games instead of staying separated it would become a somewhat interlocked story. Even if the conexion is just some texts it would mean that characters from one side are affecting the characters of the other game. And would force players to read both novels.

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Its not a terrible thought, in fact its a good theory, better than some suggested ones. The only problem is that the stories would actively affect each other games instead of staying separated it would become a somewhat interlocked story. Even if the conexion is just some texts it would mean that characters from one side are affecting the characters of the other game. And would force players to read both novels.

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Those 'future parts' would have to happen pretty quickly though. The whole JAred crap (from rejection to blackmail) happens pretty quick.

It's a nice theory as you said but doesn't hold up under closer scrutiny.
 

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The only problem is that the stories would actively affect each other games instead of staying separated it would become a somewhat interlocked story. Even if the conexion is just some texts it would mean that characters from one side are affecting the characters of the other game.
Those 'future parts' would have to happen pretty quickly though.
I agree with both of you, I really hope that they don't become interconnected but it seems like the author was planning the new novel at the same time as Act 2 so he clearly wanted some connection, hence the easter egg in Augusta's Home.

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