Yeah, adding him in and the MC not going completely nuclear, yeah.... F that, as it would end up being the typical BBC NTR story out there. No thanks.
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LoL agree, at this point some are behaving like the MC spinning wilder and wilder theories of all the bad that can happen.
It can be ok, bad, or REALLY BAD!!!
We shall see... I for one don't mind more train wrecks, but my requirement is that the MC can work himself out of it with "reasonable" means. Nothing wrong with a story turning so hard that readers take exit, it should be expected, but I don't think the professor is cheap like that. I would be very surprised if we had the NTR turns that we have seen in most of the slop games here, so while I am worried about certain story elements, I don't think we will be sent a bill and left hanging.
Looking forward to what happens.
We shall see... I for one don't mind more train wrecks, but my requirement is that the MC can work himself out of it with "reasonable" means. Nothing wrong with a story turning so hard that readers take exit, it should be expected, but I don't think the professor is cheap like that. I would be very surprised if we had the NTR turns that we have seen in most of the slop games here, so while I am worried about certain story elements, I don't think we will be sent a bill and left hanging.
Looking forward to what happens.
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Also you guys are forgetting the funniest option:
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Tbh, I would not be against it, in the right scenario, but Lorenzo appearing at the office makes me think that something is not right with him, maybe it is just a coincidence but...
Or he could find love there, who knows, anyway Lorenzo is also kinda attached to Lacey so it would not be a super healthy situation, fun to play with tho.
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You're right; it would be funny.
I'm just conditioned never to see anything positive for the MC in NTR stories. But it would be funny in this case.
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Finally made the decision to give this one a try and I must admit, what a great decision that was. The novel gets carried by the writing, not the art, which makes the use of AI acceptable. It's one of the first AVNs that succeeded in making me feel anxiety and a bit of sadness. Really great job by the dev.
Please keep doing what you're doing!
Please keep doing what you're doing!
The dev said it's lopsided and sharing is a generous word.
He made the scene to be as gentle as humanly possible for the MC .
The situation in itself should be pretty bad for him to say that , and he tried to make it as bearable as possible for us to read.
So isaac threesome with a MC apathetic at first but warming up during the act seems likely imo.
He made the scene to be as gentle as humanly possible for the MC .
The situation in itself should be pretty bad for him to say that , and he tried to make it as bearable as possible for us to read.
So isaac threesome with a MC apathetic at first but warming up during the act seems likely imo.
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Or it is lopsided and gentle because it is barely a threesome.
Just MC and Lacey with a very passive third party, be it Mia, Jeanette or a stranger.
So basically just regular sex with extra steps
Don’t forget, this would be MC’s very first threesome
I still think Lacey would try to make it special for MC by it being with one of the other girls he loves, and not with some random himbo they picked up at a club
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I think (and hope) the Isaac ship has sailed. Lacey has a large past that could be brought in without having to keep revisiting the ones that have gone through their story arc.
I personally think the threesome will happen in Vegas. It will probably involve a stranger that they pick up because Lacey has convinced the MC to go along with her plan. It's possible they could run into someone else that knows Lacey from college and it could be him. Maybe Stephen with a PH...
I think it is going to be hard for the professor to work that in considering how poorly Bastion went. Certainly it would be another "oops" Lacey moment, but it also should be something that would cause the MC to go ballistic. It would completely go against his character and situation to all of a sudden accept the situation, or even be "pushed" into it and if the professor does do this, I think it will be difficult for the reader to accept such conflict in the character.
I can't see an event like that happening and then it fall in line with the professor saying that Act 3 will be more of a healing progression for the MC. Any MMF event, regardless of who it is should cause the MC to spiral further, not "heal".
Though the fact that Mia isn't in the hot seat and Issac is on fair terms with the MC, I guess anything can happen in the writing.
Have we considered that the MC gets drunk or high in Vegas, maybe not intentionally?
and that situation gets taken advantage of?
and that situation gets taken advantage of?
The JD and Bastion were both huge failures and both abusive towards MC, they can't be painted as an "oopsy" moment anymore because we went already down that road.
Yes, even the JD, which was painted as emotional growth, gets framed correctly in act 2 by Dianne, as it was obvious to anyone with more than 2 working brain cells (and without sexual inadequacy fetishes), that it was a horrible moment for both of them, MC for being a cuck doormat (same as with Bastion) and Lacey for being selfish and uncaring (again).
If this happens, I would have to reconsider several things, from Lacey insisting that she doesn't want to be shared to her whole redemption arc, which would be rendered null and void, I mean do we really want to see 2 full acts of character growth thrown in the toilet?
Hopefully, we will see some meaningful growth from MC, towards a man that keeps people accountable and gets a grip instead of fumbling around like a deer in the headlights.
I also have to agree with you that the the worst character of the novel (bar MC) is the one that seem more in the position to be selected.
I don't even want to entertain the idea that Isaac could be involved in anything or even be mentioned again in act 3 after the house is bought.
Actually I would like to see some of such stories. For example, when Isaac told MC about his dream girl, I taught that may be Mia could be an option for him. Of course MC is currently super possessive and it's not an option right now, but who knows.
Let Mia and Isaac be together, the shit character duo would be complete, they deserve each other.I thought Anna when Isaac was describing it
Hopefully Issac will get a contract far away so he can take Mia with him.
KseiPo Mia, sadly, is in love with MC, and it would create another Bradley situation.
Let MC have his comeuppance for once.
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Honestly I like to joke about but there is not way is MMF threesome, I believe that will be option way in the future(for my part my MC will never share Lacey) but if we take ACT2 in consideration only a MFF can be the valid option.
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Yes, both were failures and Lacey is still convinced that her "Love Experiment" is the best way forward.