bsjfan69

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Hopefully I can do a better job on the visual stuff going forward. Was there any specific areas you thought I could do a better?
Thanks for taking the feedback positively, that's a question I'm not sure how to answer to be honest because I've never delved too deep into this aesthetic, so I'm sure you know more than me. But it's not specifically the visual stuff, it surprised me for example that the MC is some IT nerd and that all of the locations in the game are generic buildings, definitely not what I was expecting from a Miami Vice-themed game. I would at least tie it some way into the story and characters moving forward. Or not, that's your choice.
 
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For a first release by a new developer, this was shockingly well done. It's already better and has more content than some very well established HTML games.

If the developer keeps up a regular content cycle then this could turn into something very good
 

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Okay I see what you mean. Really it's just meant be a aesthetic choice. Make it look a little bit different and perhaps bring some atmosphere to the game. I'd love to make it a core part of the game but I'd say it would be rather difficult to do given the porn assets being used. If it was an art based game? Sure, I'd try to make sure you were sick of the aesthetic by the end. For now I have to make do. I'm not happy with a lot of the visual stuff and I suspect a bunch will get reworked as we go.

Thanks for the feedback, it really helps.
 

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not sure if all checkmarks V in the tips are being shown correctly (in some cases i think there is some delay until next day)
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i had some ambiguities with lewd route
Make it happen: With everything else taken care of, all I need is a good time and place. Perhaps I should plan this when I go to bed. Start: Any Day, 9pm – 11pm Your bedroom.
i think i did that option once (mc being naked) and i thought i needed to do it more as i got no checkmark
later on in lewd goals i read a message This route is currently inactive due to being behind the love route. (max1300&1000)
then i somehow got lewd max 1300 [and Lewd Stage: Curious] however, before that i had only love-route buttons available for me (and i dont recall any relevants events ... or events correlating with any tips)
and then all those 'troubling' messages dissapeared so everything was/is fine.
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i think skipping [ jen>> ] does not work as intended when jen is at work at saturdays. it skips only 30min. (that is, not to the moment of her arrival home)
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one derek message was not auto-deleted from phone smses. (photoshoot, she is in some white-black openfront/closedback outfit with red heels)
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gifts. had no issues but later on (max1600&1300) when i pressed on a relevant option (17:00 kitchen) no gifts were listed to choose from.
i saw them in inventory (like bimbo journal, chocolate. and the latter i couldnt buy again. which proved that i had one)
later i bought some new ones (stockings, neckless) - those two i was able to choose/give.
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how to get fired from a job to visit your friend? (or should i stay on that office work route, any significant differences?) probably wip.
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im ok with minor inconsistencies like dif hair color of fem, but for better immersion id prefer that males (or face areas) were cut out or concealed somehow at least on pics. for me it would do less harm (if any).
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also i wonder f jen/mom geolocation could be doubled below [ jen>> ] skipping button (reason: to avoid scrolling. imo her location was something which required my constant attention whereas i rarely checked rewards and love-lewd stats from that jen stats window on the left. had to scroll all the time )
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to change tips access option (comments below)
 
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Like i dont like the games of this type, this project is great. I mean it. Littlebit of wandering around to trigger action, thanks to not so clear text. I like that you chose this MILF, it was something fresh in the topic of RealPorn games. I wish all the best and wating for more adventures.
 
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RudeboyUK

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Really liking the game so far, nice and quick to get about and a fun story.
Couple of things I thought about/bugs
Maybe the option n the computer to check goals could move to the phone, or some other place where it is always avaialbe?
I noticed at a certain point (quite late into the current content) when entering the kitchen it would say something about catching her coming out of the shower. Have to push on 10 mins to get the correct kitchen prompts.

But as I said great work, and really looking forward to more from this! More male lead, none transformation html games needed!
 

konabwo

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Maybe the option in the computer to check goals could move to the phone, or some other place where it is always avaialbe?
yeah. current approach means 2-3 extra clicks (go home [if not there] -> your room -> pc -> progress where hints at )
so some button on the left would be better.
 

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Hey thanks for taking the time to make such a post, I really appreciate it.
  1. Goal checkmarks - Yeah some of them are a bit fucked as it was a relatively last minute addition and not all the events mark their corresponding goals as completed properly. I'll do a pass on this for the next update and hopefully fix it.
  2. This route is currently inactive due to being behind the love route. : So what happened here is the route became inactive as you leveled up the love route. How this basically works is the lewd story events and daily actions become unavailable until you level up the lewd route which realistically you will only be able to do buy buying gifts (they get a massive bonus to help you catch up). You must have reached enough lewd points to bring it back in line with your love route, opening the lewd options etc up again. Thanks for posting about this experience, I figured this whole system might be rather confusing and this confirms it. There should have been a message when you slept that said you leveled up the lewd route, but I'll assume this didn't fire? I'll have to try and come up with some way to make it a bit more clear.
  3. The character button is implemented in a rather simple way that just moves you to whenever her next activity is, so it won't always correspond to her actually being available or anything relevant happening. I'll try to improve this going forward but it may also just have to stay this way to avoid bugs due to the dynamic nature of how your choices affect her schedule. It's a bit jank for sure.
  4. Gifts - These are relevant to her levels, so the ones you had were no longer available to use at her current level. Sorry, this is just one of those little things I forgot to account for so it's not made clear in that moment.
  5. Can't get fired or quit your job currently, visiting jason is just for another job route. One which is rather lacking in the current version. I'm not sure if the next update will let you change jobs or not, I'd say probably not.
  6. Male faces - I understand this, and it would be nice. But I think it will be too much work to censor everything. The still images are not a huge deal but the video clips would require a bunch of time that would only make the updates slower for relatively small gain.
  7. I'll look into adding some UI elements for info like that. It might be something I have to sit on for some updates however as more characters will be added and I can't clutter the UI too much with things now knowing that I will just have to add more later.
Again thanks for the feedback and bug reports, hopefully I can get most of this fixed up with time :)

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Thanks for the bug report, if possible can you tell me what route/s you were playing and what jobs she had? Like modelling/office/diner. I found a few of these myself before release and thought I had squashed them but I guess some still linger.

Regarding the goal screen, I'll try and make this a bit more available. There's a few quirks in the code I'd have to work out to navigate there from the phone and back.
 

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2. There should have been a message when you slept
i think there was a message but i didnot even expect that to be lewd related... as i dont remember doing anything lewd before getting its max level (and status) to raise. i mean i think usually i needed some special event completion (or, probably, tasks completion)...and in that case, if i remember correctly, i could not even press common daily lewd options.
3. i see. mostly it worked fine - like skipping to some interactable moment with her. during the weekdays time it allowed to skip to the moment of her arrival home but not in saturday. so for me it was just felt like some bug.
4. relevant to her levels - yeah i had that assumption but was not sure
6. yeah ofc face removal should not be detrimental to content making so id be fine with only pics tempering. (like that pic of male infront of pc with her behind.)
7. hm...are you saying that there will be more npcs to track? in that case id suggest,well, basically the same: a 'geotracking' table (two colums, name-place. when new npc is unlocked -> then a row should somehow be added to the table bottom) the same reasoning: comfy to have all options for time-locs management infront of your eyes at the same time (time, skipping time & geolocation table for all npcs, button to summon hints -all on the left menu on top and top-mid, while locations to click are on the right) example of such table can be seen in Enchanted *locations there are clickable for insta-teleportation. so advisable as well.
 
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I made a note to look into the weirdness at the weekend, I encountered a bug that sounds exactly like what you said pre release but thought I had fixed it. Got a pretty good hunch of whats going on there.

Also had a nice idea regarding displaying the locations on the UI. I'll have to see if I can get it working though. Decent chance it won't be in the next update but we'll see. Thanks for the suggestion!
 

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Great game and very impressive for a first release. I like that there's two paths and that you can mix them. Good job
 
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