VN Ren'Py Lovephobia [v0.30] [Kuviragames]

[Diegoz]

THX

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

Good luck with your game

 

[Kuviragames]

the English is painful.

I know that my english is far from being perfect but i did not expect it to be that bad. Probably gonna hire a proofreader for the next release. Still thank you for the feedback.

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

Very good so far!

Decent 30ish minutes.

Enjoyable story but yes the English needs some proofreading. Looking forward to see how it goes I hope author keeps to their vision doesn't let public opinion sway too far one way or another. I love this genre where MC isn't a gary-stu and NTR can happen if you don't treat your girls right.

It sounds like the cheating can be either way right? Like if MC fucks up girls cheat but MC can also cheat? I just hope Ava isn't so chill and cavalier about it all. Takes away from the tension if the main girl just encourages MC to build a harem almost right off the bat.

 

[djsverige]

is there any solution about the bug after zuni text. the bug comes only if i text zuni first before zoe text.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Honestly, not that bad. Definitely needs some proofreading and there are some wrong speaker moments, but otherwise, it's pretty decent.

Not a fan though of Linda being forced on the MC like that. We are able to pick and choose with the other girls, so why not Linda? Hopefully in later updates we'll be given a choice to avoid her if we want. Just don't like forced content in general.

So yeah, besides that, good job. Thanks, and best of luck with this.

 

[onefingersalute]

i will check this out but you should add a color scheme to the options we get to distinguish from non NTR and NTR Choices to make it easier for everyone idunno i haven't tried it out yet it may have it but if it don't you should consider adding it

 

[Kuviragames]

Very good so far!

Decent 30ish minutes.

Enjoyable story but yes the English needs some proofreading. Looking forward to see how it goes I hope author keeps to their vision doesn't let public opinion sway too far one way or another. I love this genre where MC isn't a gary-stu and NTR can happen if you don't treat your girls right.

It sounds like the cheating can be either way right? Like if MC fucks up girls cheat but MC can also cheat? I just hope Ava isn't so chill and cavalier about it all. Takes away from the tension if the main girl just encourages MC to build a harem almost right off the bat.

Thank you very much. And i will definitly hire a proofreader for the next bigger update.

"Like if MC fucks up girls cheat but MC can also cheat?" - Yes! But "fucks up" can be more than just MC got caught cheating.

 

[Kuviragames]

is there any solution about the bug after zuni text. the bug comes only if i text zuni first before zoe text.

It's my first time that i created a Post/Game on here. So i am not sure if i can just edit the download links above or if i need to do something else. But there is a new Downloadlink on my Subscribstar Page for version 0.21.

 

[Kuviragames]

Honestly, not that bad. Definitely needs some proofreading and there are some wrong speaker moments, but otherwise, it's pretty decent.

Not a fan though of Linda being forced on the MC like that. We are able to pick and choose with the other girls, so why not Linda? Hopefully in later updates we'll be given a choice to avoid her if we want. Just don't like forced content in general.

So yeah, besides that, good job. Thanks, and best of luck with this.

Thank you very much. Yes you will have the option to be more intimate with her or not.

 

[Kuviragames]

i will check this out but you should add a color scheme to the options we get to distinguish from non NTR and NTR Choices to make it easier for everyone idunno i haven't tried it out yet it may have it but if it don't you should consider adding it

Actually at one point i thought doing something like this. But then i remembered the games i played that have that "feature". It takes away the tension and mystery. So in my game you have the choice to spy on people and maybe hear something you don't like. So my goal is that for example you see the option "Spy on Person".. and you think "do i really want to know?" The feel jealousy is a part of the game.

But i will try to not make any traps. So it should be kinda obvious what is leading to NTR and what should be save.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[TurhaanKoitatte]

This is another one of those games that is in the realm of the so-called mild NTR that doesn't exist. There is only NTR or no NTR. One picture is too much. So dev will screw up badly if you add even one picture that you can't avoid, and the game will end up on the ingnorelist with many players. I didn't even try this when I read the dev note.

 

[Kuviragames]

This is another one of those games that is in the realm of the so-called mild NTR that doesn't exist. There is only NTR or no NTR. One picture is too much. So dev will screw up badly if you add even one picture that you can't avoid, and the game will end up on the ingnorelist with many players. I didn't even try this when I read the dev note.

That's totally fine. I also have games on my "ignorelist" and exactly for that i wrote that in the Dev notes.

 

[Taider14]

That's totally fine. I also have games on my "ignorelist" and exactly for that i wrote that in the Dev notes.

The fact that you explain everything in the dev notes and that you are making a path where NTR is avoidable is already a great achievement compared to a lot of other dev. Personnaly, i don't like NTR, but i don't mind NTR references or pictures if it fits the story. I didn't test the game yet, but you seems off on a good start.

 

[SlowGoesSlow]

I'm totally fine with avoidable NTR as long as both routes are respected and there's not really any bleeding over. Also, women moving on if you aren't on their route anymore is fine. The most annoying things about games with avoidable NTR (imo) are content distribution between the two routes (meaning it feels like you're missing more than half the game if you aren't on the NTR route or vice versa) and having the need to have to keep guard dogging your LI at every turn. If we can avoid those elements I don't see why it wouldn't be a perfectly serviceable game.

 

[DarknessDai]

New game with NTR ? i'm in

 

[mommysboiii]

Meh game has potential but not convinced.....

Like mc and ava are cute together with semi optimal build up meh and the writring is meh..

And alot of situtions are porn dialoge..

Also haha , hihi .....

The netorare has also potential with good antagonist but with that typ of build up and writting ..... not sure if it will be good I guess cringe ass writting with boss ....

Also read that ava the only gf that could be considert as ntr.... will not feture ntr???

Wish the game had

-better dialoge
-whole focus on ava and mc
-better build up
- good antagonist ( smart)

The thinks I like
- render also look kinda good
- ava and mc are super cute together

What I hope

-option to decline other woman than ava
- more drama moments
-more cute moments / build up
between ava and MC
-if ava has ntr that is not some of well mc cheats or acts as asshole ntr ..... more like smart antagonist and slow corruption

What I dont like about the obvious ntr choices is that it leads to more porn writting like ava is stuck in washing maschin help her out ( no ntr) look for help (ntr)

Or on ntr path you have no cute moments or ntr happens to fast like super fast corruption like ava is not loyal super fast or not cat mouse game between antagonist and ava ...

Normaly if ava is in love there needs to be corruption/ work from the antagonist (smart/tricky)

 

[asahibito]

Game is a stereotypical AVN but in a good sense. Having an actual childhood friend elevates it for me especially when it does not delay the relationship. The experience is marred by 2 things.
1) The typos and grammatical issues and some inconsistencies in character naming.
2) Schrodinger choices:

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[EnTeeArrr]

In for the NTR