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Guys plsss tell me when is the asian CHAD that fucked mc sister going after ava ? The one that was pissed....The one that wrote the message on phone
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Awesome renders, I'm loving them!!
I didn’t receive any notification about the post on until you have commented.So thank men! LolAwesome renders, I'm loving them!!
Kuviragames if someone say Ava is ugly send them the pengu trooper lol
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Just started this one, and I'm disappointed with the MC's first time with Ava being a fade to black.
The intro makes clear that Ava is someone I should care about, and this scene would've been a great opportunity to see some actual chemistry between them. On the other hand... Maybe it fits? He didn't like her body, so why remember it?
The MC also looks very feminine from certain angles. He shouldn't discount flat-chested girls, because he'd make for a pretty one as well.
I'm confused by how choices affect things. With Lisa it seemed clear that there was a path with sex during the trip and one without. A later choice lets me skip visiting Ava at work, but the MC still tells Jenny that Ava made the same remark about his outfit.
The same thing later after waking up Ava. If you went to her room right away, the MC will still say that her mother took up much of his time (unless that's the n-th joke about him fucking her mother... If so, that joke certainly isn't getting old. )
It's also nonsensical that Linda said that Ava would get up in 40 minutes, but now Ava is saying it's late and she has to hurry... Or did she actually knock him out and then sit there watching for an hour until he regained consciousness?
This should be said out loud (it's the MC letting Linda know he's nearby):
Same here, unless Zoe can read minds:
Linda says it's Zoe's 19th birthday, but her bio says she's 20.
I enjoyed the pathing depending on whether I visited Ava at work or not. I ended up not going because I'm worried the MC won't be able to stay faithful outside my control, but that's just a suspicion. In any case, after Zoe's birthday party, this path seems to merge. Ava declares the MC's dick is hers, and they talk as if they're in a relationship and monogamy is expected. Weird, since fucking Lisa in the bathroom at the hospital didn't have the MC think he cheated on Ava, while he does on the path where he does visit her at work.
I've played until day 13 and am going to take a break.
Overall, I'm enjoying this game, except for the MC/Ava dynamic, weirdly enough. There are several optional paths I declined at first, but I restarted and enabled them out of curiosity. My main issue is that enabling content seems to mean I'm just along for the ride, and I have to restart if this content ends up being against my sensibilities. For instance, if things with Linda keep escalating with the MC egging her on without any choices to stop what's going on.
The intro makes clear that Ava is someone I should care about, and this scene would've been a great opportunity to see some actual chemistry between them. On the other hand... Maybe it fits? He didn't like her body, so why remember it?
The MC also looks very feminine from certain angles. He shouldn't discount flat-chested girls, because he'd make for a pretty one as well.
I'm confused by how choices affect things. With Lisa it seemed clear that there was a path with sex during the trip and one without. A later choice lets me skip visiting Ava at work, but the MC still tells Jenny that Ava made the same remark about his outfit.
The same thing later after waking up Ava. If you went to her room right away, the MC will still say that her mother took up much of his time (unless that's the n-th joke about him fucking her mother... If so, that joke certainly isn't getting old.
)It's also nonsensical that Linda said that Ava would get up in 40 minutes, but now Ava is saying it's late and she has to hurry... Or did she actually knock him out and then sit there watching for an hour until he regained consciousness?
This should be said out loud (it's the MC letting Linda know he's nearby):
Same here, unless Zoe can read minds:
Linda says it's Zoe's 19th birthday, but her bio says she's 20.
I enjoyed the pathing depending on whether I visited Ava at work or not. I ended up not going because I'm worried the MC won't be able to stay faithful outside my control, but that's just a suspicion. In any case, after Zoe's birthday party, this path seems to merge. Ava declares the MC's dick is hers, and they talk as if they're in a relationship and monogamy is expected. Weird, since fucking Lisa in the bathroom at the hospital didn't have the MC think he cheated on Ava, while he does on the path where he does visit her at work.
I've played until day 13 and am going to take a break.
Overall, I'm enjoying this game, except for the MC/Ava dynamic, weirdly enough. There are several optional paths I declined at first, but I restarted and enabled them out of curiosity. My main issue is that enabling content seems to mean I'm just along for the ride, and I have to restart if this content ends up being against my sensibilities. For instance, if things with Linda keep escalating with the MC egging her on without any choices to stop what's going on.
Hey, thank you very much for giving my game a try and thank you for the feedback.
(best friends and fuck buddies).
On Ava's path she confesses her feelings and he replies that he feels the same. Which makes them officially dating.
While on the other path it doesn't happen and therefore just best friends and fuck buddies. Which doesn't mean her feelings automatically vanished. Just that she had no opportunity to confess her love. And MC since he decided to go home instead of messaging Ava out of instinct shows that Ava might not be as important for him. but at the same time she is a huge part of his life and so it's not like he doesn't care if she fucks around with other people or other things. And also he gets influenced by his and ava's parents about their future.
That doesn't mean both routes are the same. Yes they are quiet similar at the beginning but they split the more the game advances till the ending.
And for the other points a overall comment since I said that quiet often now and I don't want to repeat everything again.
A few points were about things that happend in the first initial release a year ago. Those were my first baby steps in that journey.
I will rework quiet a lot and specially the beginning. But I won't do that until the game is finished and I got a more powerful PC.
I hope I could answer some of your thoughts.
There are not old enough to show that scene. I thought it's quiet obvious but I will add some kind of information to make clear that they are not Adults in that scene.
I got that quiet often. But I also think that you can't really create an MC without people complain about him. It's just some MCs got more complaints and some less.
Before I created the Bios pages the ages were more a roundabout thing. With the bios pages I set the final dates for their age and birthday.
That's intentional. For Ava nothing has changed. She is still in love with MC and she goes back to the day he left.
(best friends and fuck buddies).
On Ava's path she confesses her feelings and he replies that he feels the same. Which makes them officially dating.
While on the other path it doesn't happen and therefore just best friends and fuck buddies. Which doesn't mean her feelings automatically vanished. Just that she had no opportunity to confess her love. And MC since he decided to go home instead of messaging Ava out of instinct shows that Ava might not be as important for him. but at the same time she is a huge part of his life and so it's not like he doesn't care if she fucks around with other people or other things. And also he gets influenced by his and ava's parents about their future.
That doesn't mean both routes are the same. Yes they are quiet similar at the beginning but they split the more the game advances till the ending.
That's sad to hear. But I don't think that you will enjoy the whole game overall since that's what the game is about. You won't be able to avoid Ava and get a happy ending with Zoe, Lisa or Zuni for example.
The first choiced for all girls and womens are if you are interested in their story. Not that they will turn into an Li. Yes the Linda-MC story get quiet steamy but you have the decision later if you want to go further or not.
And for the other points a overall comment since I said that quiet often now and I don't want to repeat everything again.
A few points were about things that happend in the first initial release a year ago. Those were my first baby steps in that journey.
I will rework quiet a lot and specially the beginning. But I won't do that until the game is finished and I got a more powerful PC.
I hope I could answer some of your thoughts.
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I suspected as much, but no ages were mentioned. I would've liked the scene, but it likely wouldn't make sense for them to be 18+ with their history, so I can't disagree with its absence.
Entirely fair. I think it's mostly his overbite that gives this impression. Despite my cheeky remark about his looks, I'm fairly ambivalent about it. I thought it was worth a mention because it occasionally threw me off.
I'm sure you also get feedback of not having enough big tits/ass, but I like the variety you show in your game.
My surprise is mostly about this seemingly coming out of nowhere. On Ava's path there's more of a discussion or agreement; on the other path she just about claims him. There's no doubt that Ava loves the MC, my confusion is about what the MC is actually agreeing to.
After the birthday party, does he agree to being faithful to Ava?
I need to give it a bit more thought, and probably a bit more time. Maybe I'll like it more now that they're actually going somewhere.
I also have to admit that I don't understand the MC's mindset. He loves Ava and says he always has, but he also fucks anything that moves, knowing that Ava doesn't like this. He gets off on a technicality. He's not cheating on her because they never said the word "relationship".
Also, it's worth mentioning that I adore Ava & Zoe, it's just Ava x MC that rubs me the wrong way.
This is a relief. With how the story was going, I was worried that having content enabled would automatically mean the MC would cheat on Ava.
A few nitpicks:
- On the 2nd day when the MC gets up and goes to Ava's, an intertitle between the houses (before seeing Linda in the kitchen) would help.
- The MC sometimes seems too wise/smart compared to his actual behavior. In therapy he's aware that he could do more harm than good by playing a therapist, and instead tries to help her in the present. This is great, but it isn't the kind of forward-thinking that I would expect from the guy. Though I don't know what he studied in high school or college either, so he might have a relevant degree. In general, the MC seems to always have the right behavior or attitude for any situation, and that beggars belief after a while.
- I'm not sure if it's my own reading comprehension or dubious wording, but I was believing that Katarina was mute/didn't want to speak. I should replay that part to see what happened there. I think everyone just said "she doesn't want to talk", instead of "she doesn't want to talk about what bothers her".
- Behram gets off very light when he tells the MC how to dress in his own home. Maybe he should stop fucking Jenny until they're married? (I'm sure he'll get his comeuppance for his hypocrisy eventually, at least I hope so.)
And to even things out, let me mention a few things that I enjoyed:
- You're not shying away from sensitive topics like Muslim culture.
- I like that the women (like the sister) have their own lives, not revolving around the MC. I suspect some people would call this NTR (like seeing the sister's pictures), but since she's not his, I don't see it that way. Maybe a kind of voyeurism with regret?
- In the same vein, the story isn't filled with pure virgins for the MC to conquer. I would've liked one, but unless Ava agrees to share his dick, it's a moot point anyway for me.
- Different body shapes and sizes
- Not everything is black and white. Mom (likely) cheating on their father would be morally wrong, but she'd feel it's right for her.
- Some of the backstories are very touching. Ava x Zoe stand out to me, and I like that the MC doesn't have a magical cock that fixes all of Zoe's issues instantly. Her trauma has weight. In general, I think the backstories of the women inform their current behavior, which is good writing.
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I honestly find him attractive. I wouldn't know if he looks feminine, but I'd say he definitely does not look effeminate. There's some appeal to how he looks, that I think really works for him.
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Nah kenji is a cuck the other asian guy that is a assholemaybe he prefer kenji
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I could render those two the whole day.
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Please do. I guess a lot of us folks in this thread won't object
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