In the scene Where the player is fingering Aria, 'whenever' is misspelled in the line "squeaking cutely whenevr you touch her in a certain spot". The animation playing in the background also seems to fuck up a little as it loops, showing a single frame where her head is in a different position. The 'climax' animation also doesn't leave her in the same spot as she is in the still that follows.
During the full on intercourse, after the first increase in pace, a space appears to be missing in the line "Aria's eyes narrowand gasps start falling from her lips.".
After the morning explanation (and the promise of a breakfast), the line "she smiles finally" appears. I believe it should either be 'she finally smiles' or 'she smiles, finally'.
After breakfast, and choosing to contact Lia, during the sex scene with her it states that she lowers "herslef" onto 'it'. During her first climax she also slumps slightly forward in the animation and then teleports to having her arms around the protags shoulders in the still.
During the argument betwixt Aria and Lia, Lia says "Don't worry, Protag I got this". Pretty sure the comma should be after the name not before as it should be broken up into 'Don't worry Protag' and 'I got this' rather than 'Don't worry' and 'Protag I got this'.
The twitching upon looping is also present in the 'productive discourse' scene.
Once it has been moved to the bedroom the line "Tremblin, one touch away from cumming your pretty like brains out" genuinely made me question whether or not I was stroking out, why is 'like' in there?
Also, after Aria breaks down, this madlad says "look at me" while having his back towards her.
Once they start making up in the morning Lia says "you drive john, crazy", the comma shouldn't be there.
The dual oral scene that follows has the protags silluette projecting into the center of the screen which implies that the main source of light in the room is attached to the back of his head.
Once the actual 'dicking down' starts there is a short animation that plays in which both turn their heads but the scene after has them both still facing in the same direction as they did before the animation.
During the full on intercourse, after the first increase in pace, a space appears to be missing in the line "Aria's eyes narrowand gasps start falling from her lips.".
After the morning explanation (and the promise of a breakfast), the line "she smiles finally" appears. I believe it should either be 'she finally smiles' or 'she smiles, finally'.
After breakfast, and choosing to contact Lia, during the sex scene with her it states that she lowers "herslef" onto 'it'. During her first climax she also slumps slightly forward in the animation and then teleports to having her arms around the protags shoulders in the still.
During the argument betwixt Aria and Lia, Lia says "Don't worry, Protag I got this". Pretty sure the comma should be after the name not before as it should be broken up into 'Don't worry Protag' and 'I got this' rather than 'Don't worry' and 'Protag I got this'.
The twitching upon looping is also present in the 'productive discourse' scene.
Once it has been moved to the bedroom the line "Tremblin, one touch away from cumming your pretty like brains out" genuinely made me question whether or not I was stroking out, why is 'like' in there?
Also, after Aria breaks down, this madlad says "look at me" while having his back towards her.
Once they start making up in the morning Lia says "you drive john, crazy", the comma shouldn't be there.
The dual oral scene that follows has the protags silluette projecting into the center of the screen which implies that the main source of light in the room is attached to the back of his head.
Once the actual 'dicking down' starts there is a short animation that plays in which both turn their heads but the scene after has them both still facing in the same direction as they did before the animation.
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