Ren'Py Lucky Paradox [v0.10.2] [Stawer]

[Vagabond Scholar]

the MC does not interrupt the fight, because it is something that is a long-standing debt, yet he follows them closely, in case he has to intervene if they get out of control. Kaede also does not intervene in the fight for the same reason, because there is this "fighting honor" between them, and it is what the MC has learned since he came to the Shogukuni.

As fighters this fight closes that arc of redemption for Cassie, and catharsis for Shizuka.

Shizuka still loves Cassie very much, she doesn't hate her at all, but her heart was hurt by that act of betrayal (the injury Cassie did to her when they were children), however, her pride pushes her to prove that she can defeat her even with that, and she doesn't deserve to be healed until she does it. She has an inferiority complex, after being given to the Bagliores by her parents, for being a "fragile woman" in a family of fighters (This is seen in the Christmas event).

I don't see the plot armor. On the one hand, Cassie had a “training” trip when what she was looking for was to feel better by defeating weaker fighters, while Shizuka has always pushed herself to the extreme, even preparing against Cassie since her arrival.

Shizuka is proud, but she's not that dumb, she even learned that her pride can hurt those she appreciates (like Yui), but in this case, she wanted to prove herself, she couldn't stand Cassie's condescending attitude towards her, since she always talks to her from a superiority point of view.

That pride hurts her later when she has to fight against Yaeko, since she is so exhausted and injured that she cannot do anything vs the princess (to reaffirm that her pride is wrong, not to reward her). this is part of the current arc, i dont want to make spoilers

In the end, she can smile, as she has lifted that moral weight off her shoulders, exchanged the emotional pain for the physical pain of the fight, and feels entitled to forgive Cassie.

Well, I could go on developing the idea, but it's getting too long already.

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[Darius567]

I'm stuck on this quest, is it because I'm done of story and still on WIP or it's just a bug? Please help me since I'm stuck on this quest.

 

[Juerhullycin]

 

[Blaq Mask]

This whole tournament arc has been incredibly boring. Nothing but cliche anime tropes and no porn. Can't wait for it to be over, but now I'm kinda worried about what comes next. The last few story updates have been kinda lackluster as well.

 

[Delowar Dark]

save file?

 

[Stawer]

Damn, what we have to put up with these days as devs, really, is it so difficult to criticize a work in a polite way?

All I get here are insulting comments and outright lies. 2% erotic content? The game literally has a gallery with dozens of scenes (even more than games that have been published here for more years), but the last straw is insinuating that I use artificial intelligence to write...

I admit that the tournament may have had errors, especially in the erotic content. I haven't denied that. I like to experiment with what I do, and I may have made a mistake here. If I wanted to write artificial intelligence, it would be easier to create a much simpler plot, with hardly any gameplay, incest, and better tags, don't you think?

Coming here to read comments is exhausting. If anyone really wants to give feedback, I'm on Discord. On the other hand, I think I'm giving up here. There's no point in commenting. It's practically an echo chamber at this point.

Ciao!

At least Juerhullycin made me laugh

 

[Vlbc]

Damn, what we have to put up with these days as devs, really, is it so difficult to criticize a work in a polite way?

All I get here are insulting comments and outright lies. 2% erotic content? The game literally has a gallery with dozens of scenes (even more than games that have been published here for more years), but the last straw is insinuating that I use artificial intelligence to write...

I admit that the tournament may have had errors, especially in the erotic content. I haven't denied that. I like to experiment with what I do, and I may have made a mistake here. If I wanted to write artificial intelligence, it would be easier to create a much simpler plot, with hardly any gameplay, incest, and better tags, don't you think?

Coming here to read comments is exhausting. If anyone really wants to give feedback, I'm on Discord. On the other hand, I think I'm giving up here. There's no point in commenting. It's practically an echo chamber at this point.

Ciao!

At least Juerhullycin made me laugh

Jizz, I just discovered this game and was about to test it.

So prepare for my hate too, I can be very creative when "maledom" is not well used lol

 

[Shiko200]

Damn, what we have to put up with these days as devs, really, is it so difficult to criticize a work in a polite way?

All I get here are insulting comments and outright lies. 2% erotic content? The game literally has a gallery with dozens of scenes (even more than games that have been published here for more years), but the last straw is insinuating that I use artificial intelligence to write...

I admit that the tournament may have had errors, especially in the erotic content. I haven't denied that. I like to experiment with what I do, and I may have made a mistake here. If I wanted to write artificial intelligence, it would be easier to create a much simpler plot, with hardly any gameplay, incest, and better tags, don't you think?

Coming here to read comments is exhausting. If anyone really wants to give feedback, I'm on Discord. On the other hand, I think I'm giving up here. There's no point in commenting. It's practically an echo chamber at this point.

Ciao!

At least Juerhullycin made me laugh

Juerhullycin, Jinka2 and RpWolf are the same person who troll devs on his site he writes comments from his main account and uses other 2 for negative reactions. So please ignore them devs and continue the good work.

 

[Vlbc]

Something wrong is not right

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I already know her '-'

 

[Shiko200]

Something wrong is not right

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I already know her '-'

Maybe she kinda you know forgor.

 

[Evil13]

If she's waitressing, its common for wait staff to introduce themselves even if you know them. It's just standard practice.

 

[torresm]

There was one comment I saw, right before Stawer's, which had the "only 2% erotic content" and AI usage insinuation he mentioned, plus some other stuff I can't remember. But it was no different than your run-of-the-mill poster who just calls stuff shit without elaborating, if that's all it takes for him to flip his lid like that then yeah, maybe he should stay out of the kitchen.

 

[Vlbc]

You know, I cut out "female domination" because I hate it... especially in harem games.
So that means I don't want to see it...

Is that so hard to devs understand...?

 

[DogChamp]

Crazy there's no Iris or Alia growth potion scene :/

 

[Peruviansteve]

Am I missing something or is there not that much Luna content? I'd like to think I'm kind of far in the game. Only have 4 people left to meet, but Bonnie, who I've talked to maybe 4 times is already pushing Luna and Sasha out my top 10.

 

[ChaoticSavage]

Am I missing something or is there not that much Luna content? I'd like to think I'm kind of far in the game. Only have 4 people left to meet, but Bonnie, who I've talked to maybe 4 times is already pushing Luna and Sasha out my top 10.

Ya not missing anything, Luna doesn't have much, she shows up in a handful of other characters stories but hers so far is relatively short. Doesn't really seem like she's a main focus for obvious reasons.